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Potential at Large

Potential at Large
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This submission is copyright © 2006 Mathell

Potential at Large - by Mathell
 Submission information:
     Posted: 5 years ago
     Category: Story
     Theme: Macro Micro - Tame
     Favorites: 3
     Comments: 6
     Views: 223

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Story - Sasuke and Sparky work to understand the heritage of the Macro's but fight against those who would seek the knoldege for less than just purposes. It's up to them and their new frieds to stop those with twisted goals.

Author - Finaly went through and re read the whole thing with a bunch of edits here and there. The most however that changes is chapter 9 since Rick has a deeper story than what I gave him I wanted to put that in, other than that there isn't much significant content added. Since I find problems every time I read it and I don't care to re-read 54 pages again and again send me a note or message about them and I'll fix them as soon as I can. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the story.

Edit: Cast: HOW COULD I FORGET TO ADD IN THE CAST!
Mud ©
> http://www.furaffinity.net/user/mud/
Shimmer ©
> http://www.furaffinity.net/user/shimmer/
Varus ©
> http://www.furaffinity.net/user/varus-argo/
Sasuke ©
> sasuke79  sasuke79 http://www.furaffinity.net/user/sasuke79/
Sirus ©
> http://www.furaffinity.net/user/sirus/
Sparky ©
> sparkythechu  sparkythechu http://www.furaffinity.net/user/sparkythechu/
Raizero ©
> http://www.furaffinity.net/user/raizero/
Adrina ©
> Minsten

Gates, Rick, Olin, Dick, Eva, Bob, Serol, Black and Garnit ©
> ME!

User comments

  sasuke79
 

( No Subject ) Posted: 5 years ago

  Ok, and again, good work, amico mio! ^^

  mathell
 

( No Subject ) Posted: 5 years ago

  Thanks again Sasuke and I should be able to start the second part in a week or so after I get settled in College and get any info you wan't to send about you're world.

  sirus
 

( No Subject ) Posted: 5 years ago

  AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!!

  mathell
 

( No Subject ) Posted: 5 years ago

  Hehe, not constructive criticism, BUT I'll take it! XD

Thanks Sirus

  raizero
 

( No Subject ) Posted: 5 years ago

  still pretty nice to read, good work ^_^

  mathell
 

( No Subject ) Posted: 5 years ago

  Thanks though pray that my Creative Writing teacher also thinks so! *Cross's fingers*