UPDATE: Scroll to the bottom to read it.


Sorry to indulge, but I just woke up and I feel at the moment anyways it will help me remember this awesome idea I had for a story which came to me in the form of a dream. That would make this story a dream inside a dream. Please excuse the mind bender. The following was written on IRC hen I just got up:

<Nobuyuki`> wow, awesome dream I had
<Nobuyuki`> had a dream about a kid who woke up in a completely alternate universe, a familiar feeling
place which was ALMOST utopia. But certain things were so different about it that eventually it got
under his skin and stuff
<Nobuyuki`> what he doesn't realize (spoiler of the dream) is that the entire world he just made up and
he's like in a coma or some shit
<Nobuyuki`> whatever bad feelings he had towards certain people or things when he was there do not exist
in the utopian dream world, or are punished if you express them
<Nobuyuki`> for example, if he didn't like a certain food or something or other
<Nobuyuki`> at the time he ended up in le'coma
<Nobuyuki`> eventually his dissatisfaction leads him to search out some rebel movement against these
weird laws and rules you can't break
<Nobuyuki`> he looks for the rebellion library of manifesto's hidden deep within this huge labyrinth
(because for some reason the entire world is sectored out)
<Killfrenzy> Enforced politeness?
<Nobuyuki`> I remember the things of my own dream not apparant inside this "dream within a dream" sort of
situation, but they're not as cool as if I made up some new ones for the sake of storytelling
<Nobuyuki`> but anyways, he meets up with these rebels and stuff right
<Nobuyuki`> and the enforcement police always try to catch these guys and take them away off to some
place never to be seen again
<SephK> PICK UP THAT CAN
<Nobuyuki`> inside this library he sees all the manifesto's which contain "the ultimate truth" but due to
the fact he's dreaming he can't read them
<Nobuyuki`> then the kid hears about one of the small little rebel kids being pushed off a catwalk in one
of the sectors (rooms) by a utopian kid (who used to be the protagonist's brother or some crap in this
alternate universe he dreamed up)
<Killfrenzy> YOU, CITIZEN. COME WITH ME.
<Nobuyuki`> that rebel kid falls to his death and a piece of the world disappears
<Nobuyuki`> it's about this time all hell breaks loose, he learns kind of the ultimate truth that he's
made up this entire world and crap
<Nobuyuki`> all these rebel kids and whatever are freudian manifestations of his ego, superego, and other
things
<Nobuyuki`> the enforcement police so to speak is the body's self-correction mechanism
<Nobuyuki`> which is forcing certain parts of the brain to shut down, and others to "restart" (amnesia
etc)
<Nobuyuki`> big climax scene, then kid wakes up out of dream.
<Nobuyuki`> when the kid wakes up from his dream he learns not to hate the things he did when he fell
into his accidental coma (which reflected similarly to the death of the rebel kid in incidence, which
helped remind him of how he ended up in utopian-world and thus also helping him realize the truth and
escape)
<Nobuyuki`> and holds none of the hurtful feelings towards anyone from when he did blink out and stuff
<Nobuyuki`> I think this would make a good story or something !!!!! :O
<ArshesNei-Work> yeah I get that too
<Nobuyuki`> when I was watching the events of my dream play out I got the feeling that this kid didn't
know how he ended up there, it just felt like a coincidence to him cause the last thing he remembered was
[x], but it's not like he cared because at first he escaped into a perfect life, with a new family and etc



UPDATE: I have drawn some scenes from my dream, along with big big descriptions. I hope you enjoy them. Please read them in this order.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/104906/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/104909/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/104911/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/104915/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/104916/