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She enjoys portraying herself as a half-aware and dimwitted beast, drunken in the stupor of her own bodily composure.Explanation: (08-27-10, 10:27am) I dreamed earlier. And it was all amazing! =D
Setting
The PERVADING feeling in the air was always a heavy one. Assassins. Death contracts. Detrimental family ties. Deep family connections. Poor children who play at night in their overall bleak yet persistant hope (they are given an extra loaf of bread to eat from a man only slightly better off than they (or not^^), and they take it into their small room to share. They play together at night in exotic ways, incorporating the uses of metal bars and makeshift instruments, feeling triumphant in their success. A small dispute conceening theft from either their family or the opposing one had been resolved - maybe - by two young boys who "helped" to bring it to that conclusion, thus the reward of bread). They speak of fables and legends to each other, excited to pass their exaggeeational but inspired stories amongst each other (must expound on the size of their SMALL sleeping room better. Must lead up to a pervading feeling of doubt coming from one or two individuals. Perhaps the two boys?)
Destiny
"She" is the chosen one of prophecy, and she must stay alive so that the people can be saved. <<<Story>>> Someone is killed. She, amongst others, is chosen to go and face a monster - who is deviously evil and frightening - and rid "the cave" (concept) of it. Her foolish admirer - a male friend who is only slightly skilled with blades - chooses to follow her to her destination, ignorant of the very serious perils that await her around every corner before getting there.
She arrives, and fights a monster that can both eat her by mouth, OR by a face on his stomach. She battles it fiercly as it taunts her. Her admirer comes, expressing his foolish love for her in trying to save her, which distracts her. She is grabbed by this beast and swallowed into his bright stomach, that contains corrosive (only gradual, like normal) stomach acids. Her "lover" soon follows behind, swallowed by the face that terrifies him. They trudge through muck and filth, making their way to fleshy humps that rise above the acidy waste. There is a small joke here where her admirer asks her "What are you doing?" and she says "I'm peeing (or "pissing," for a "tough girl" feel)," which makes him blush deeply and say "I'm sorry for asking...( o_o)" while lowering his head. Eventually they are released from the beast, coming to find out that the whole ordeal was in fact a trial to test her strength and worthiness. They are lead to an exit (that looks and IS very nasty) by an upright (in countenance) man who yet tells them that they will honestly die within that creature if they don't hurry up and get out, as the acid is corrosive enough to kill anyone. Her admirer is - and comically so - quick to rush to leave, even before her, saying something like "eaugh" or "yuck" upon view of the slimy exit. The young lady looks at her trainer - or not - as she leaves the beast, knowing but apparently unfocusdly uncaring of her admirer's foolishness, expressing her annoyance in a sigh or rolling of her eyes. The monster says "It was nice 'having' you over for supper my dear." She scoffs disdainfully.
Tragedy
(here's all I know) There is a betrayal (between families? Or about higher and lower powers? =/ ). And a noble man is for all intents and purposes condemned to a slow, painful death by a liquid substance he comes to walk through in his hope-devoid anger. He disertates about broken trusts, corruptional families, super powers (political), and future failures, grumbling and blaspheming greatly in his suffering. And in the conclusion he is preyed upon by "Lesser Insatiables," evil beings of merciless tendacies.
- WHO "she" is that that assassin-ish society's hopes rest on.
- WHO those two young boys of the poor children are, and the significances about and between the families. Also, small things like what the children DO in their playing amongst each other, and what stories they tell. Perhaps tales of the mysterious blade "Savory?"^^
- Convey that the "trial monster" "slurps "Her" inside itself" in sexy ways, but her admirer, in a deft way...
- "Tie together" the roles and names of several supporting characters and important figures(people), along with societal behaviors and discrepancies.
Akira's Childhood
- Shila (a rather introverted yet eerily friendly female slith child who is a friend of Akira and Sheryl. Akira's world. Her religious occupation is Enigmatic).
- Slade (a male slith child who shuns authority and is posessed of a rather manipulative personality. Aquaintance of Akira who eventually comes to befriend Nigel. Akira's world. He is yet a Salvationist).
- Punk (a rather unusual and foul-mouthed nephil who is a close friend of Akira. He is ncknamed "Punk," though none who he considers his friends really know if he even HAS a name. Akira's world. He is VERY interested in the Enigmatic religion, but is never really sure of whether or not he prefers it over Salvationism and the religion he was raised under, the "God Faith."[still gotta come up with a different name for it, or...a whole different god. XD]).
Faiths
- Salvationist -
The general nephilim religion. Her teachings encourage harmony and uphold law amongst Her followers. Her followers are generally happy, kind folk who enjoy life. But some amongst them yet question the doctrine that surrounds her, and societies that incorporate her teachings often find fault with her followers.
- Enigmatic -
The general slithzerikai religion. His teachings encourage freedom yet enforce order amongst His followers. His followers are generally free-spirited, and often erratic in their ways. There is a significant level of corruption within societies that incorporate the Enigmatic teachings, but many within such societies accept this religion as infallible, giving their all to the god it exalts, sometimes even unto madness. Enigma is often seen as the Devil amongst the Nephilim race.
<<<Concepts>>>
(Possible heavy story concepts)Setting
The PERVADING feeling in the air was always a heavy one. Assassins. Death contracts. Detrimental family ties. Deep family connections. Poor children who play at night in their overall bleak yet persistant hope (they are given an extra loaf of bread to eat from a man only slightly better off than they (or not^^), and they take it into their small room to share. They play together at night in exotic ways, incorporating the uses of metal bars and makeshift instruments, feeling triumphant in their success. A small dispute conceening theft from either their family or the opposing one had been resolved - maybe - by two young boys who "helped" to bring it to that conclusion, thus the reward of bread). They speak of fables and legends to each other, excited to pass their exaggeeational but inspired stories amongst each other (must expound on the size of their SMALL sleeping room better. Must lead up to a pervading feeling of doubt coming from one or two individuals. Perhaps the two boys?)
Destiny
"She" is the chosen one of prophecy, and she must stay alive so that the people can be saved. <<<Story>>> Someone is killed. She, amongst others, is chosen to go and face a monster - who is deviously evil and frightening - and rid "the cave" (concept) of it. Her foolish admirer - a male friend who is only slightly skilled with blades - chooses to follow her to her destination, ignorant of the very serious perils that await her around every corner before getting there.
She arrives, and fights a monster that can both eat her by mouth, OR by a face on his stomach. She battles it fiercly as it taunts her. Her admirer comes, expressing his foolish love for her in trying to save her, which distracts her. She is grabbed by this beast and swallowed into his bright stomach, that contains corrosive (only gradual, like normal) stomach acids. Her "lover" soon follows behind, swallowed by the face that terrifies him. They trudge through muck and filth, making their way to fleshy humps that rise above the acidy waste. There is a small joke here where her admirer asks her "What are you doing?" and she says "I'm peeing (or "pissing," for a "tough girl" feel)," which makes him blush deeply and say "I'm sorry for asking...( o_o)" while lowering his head. Eventually they are released from the beast, coming to find out that the whole ordeal was in fact a trial to test her strength and worthiness. They are lead to an exit (that looks and IS very nasty) by an upright (in countenance) man who yet tells them that they will honestly die within that creature if they don't hurry up and get out, as the acid is corrosive enough to kill anyone. Her admirer is - and comically so - quick to rush to leave, even before her, saying something like "eaugh" or "yuck" upon view of the slimy exit. The young lady looks at her trainer - or not - as she leaves the beast, knowing but apparently unfocusdly uncaring of her admirer's foolishness, expressing her annoyance in a sigh or rolling of her eyes. The monster says "It was nice 'having' you over for supper my dear." She scoffs disdainfully.
Tragedy
(here's all I know) There is a betrayal (between families? Or about higher and lower powers? =/ ). And a noble man is for all intents and purposes condemned to a slow, painful death by a liquid substance he comes to walk through in his hope-devoid anger. He disertates about broken trusts, corruptional families, super powers (political), and future failures, grumbling and blaspheming greatly in his suffering. And in the conclusion he is preyed upon by "Lesser Insatiables," evil beings of merciless tendacies.
What To Convey Better:- WHO "she" is that that assassin-ish society's hopes rest on.
- WHO those two young boys of the poor children are, and the significances about and between the families. Also, small things like what the children DO in their playing amongst each other, and what stories they tell. Perhaps tales of the mysterious blade "Savory?"^^
- Convey that the "trial monster" "slurps "Her" inside itself" in sexy ways, but her admirer, in a deft way...
- "Tie together" the roles and names of several supporting characters and important figures(people), along with societal behaviors and discrepancies.
<<<The world surrounding my characters>>>Supporting charactersAkira's Childhood
- Shila (a rather introverted yet eerily friendly female slith child who is a friend of Akira and Sheryl. Akira's world. Her religious occupation is Enigmatic).
- Slade (a male slith child who shuns authority and is posessed of a rather manipulative personality. Aquaintance of Akira who eventually comes to befriend Nigel. Akira's world. He is yet a Salvationist).
- Punk (a rather unusual and foul-mouthed nephil who is a close friend of Akira. He is ncknamed "Punk," though none who he considers his friends really know if he even HAS a name. Akira's world. He is VERY interested in the Enigmatic religion, but is never really sure of whether or not he prefers it over Salvationism and the religion he was raised under, the "God Faith."[still gotta come up with a different name for it, or...a whole different god. XD]).
Faiths
- Salvationist -
The general nephilim religion. Her teachings encourage harmony and uphold law amongst Her followers. Her followers are generally happy, kind folk who enjoy life. But some amongst them yet question the doctrine that surrounds her, and societies that incorporate her teachings often find fault with her followers.
- Enigmatic -
The general slithzerikai religion. His teachings encourage freedom yet enforce order amongst His followers. His followers are generally free-spirited, and often erratic in their ways. There is a significant level of corruption within societies that incorporate the Enigmatic teachings, but many within such societies accept this religion as infallible, giving their all to the god it exalts, sometimes even unto madness. Enigma is often seen as the Devil amongst the Nephilim race.
Characters WITHIN my characters
Kid Akira
Kid Katherine
Kid Nigel
Kid Sheryl
Angel Akira
Higher Angel Katherine
Corrupt Nigel
Corrupt Sheryl
=\_/= But the smallest exertion of hers could send a man flying; him, and possibly others as well, shattering much of the pride of many an unknowledgeable foe within mere seconds.(link) Something Massive (Unfinished)
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Crazy destiny thing you got going on, but I'm sure you're going to pull off its execution quite nicely. :3
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