Need opinions on this story idea...
15 years ago
Based on a similar dream I had last night with Full Metal Alchemist characters,
A young boy is tricked into a strange gate by a beautiful demoness named “Eve”. This gate leading to a bronze steam punk inspired hallway with dozens of gates and elevators leading to various different periods in time as well as different worlds and universes. Eve lured the young boy in to help her find a group of humans she had trapped there early. In doing so she’ll return him to his world. Having no choice the boy agrees to help her and the two begin to explore this realm on the edge of existence. But one thing has the boy puzzled. Why did Eve trap people here in the first place? And why does she want to find them?
I don't have a title for it yet. Just this set up for the plot. For a big bad, I'm thinking of going for a less obvious one. Same goes for Eve's reasons for trapping people in that strange place.
Also my dreamed ended with the phrase "Always close the door behind you". Which I might consider when thinking of how to do the big bad (If I make one).
I'm not fully going to work on this just yet. Only looking for opinions right now.
Also this may be a comic since my artwork is at a tolerable quality.
And yes I'm still doing Mischief Knights and the rest of D-Universe.
Later_
All question about my artwork, written works, and projects are mostly answered in this journal entry:
http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/995983/
Furaffinity Links to Mischief Knights on Furaffinity
Info page: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2990520
Episode 0: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3199742/
Episode 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3199755/
Episode 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3199765/
Episode 3: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3199783/
Episode 4 Part 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/4116403/
Episode 4 Part 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/4276692/
Episode 5: Currently being worked on... 50% done
Episode 6:
Episode 7:
Episode 8:
Episode 9:
Episode 10:
Episode 11:
Episode 12:
Episode 13:
Episode 14:
Episode 15:
Episode 16:
Final Episode:
Deviant art links to Mischief Knights on my deviant art account
Current Story(ies):
Mischief Knights [PG - 13]
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....ghts-118561456
Episode links:
Episode 0
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-0-119067542 Status: complete!
Episode 1
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-1-119069031 Status: complete!
Episode 2
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-2-119070640 Status: complete!
Episode 3
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-3-120352737 Status: complete!
Episode 4
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-4-139481084
Status: complete!
Episode 5
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-5-161957003
Status: 4 out of 8 scenes finished
Episode 6
Status: n/a
Episode 7
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Episode 8
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Episode 9
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Episode 10
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Episode 12
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Episode 13
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Episode 14
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Episode 15
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Episode 16
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Final Episode
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A young boy is tricked into a strange gate by a beautiful demoness named “Eve”. This gate leading to a bronze steam punk inspired hallway with dozens of gates and elevators leading to various different periods in time as well as different worlds and universes. Eve lured the young boy in to help her find a group of humans she had trapped there early. In doing so she’ll return him to his world. Having no choice the boy agrees to help her and the two begin to explore this realm on the edge of existence. But one thing has the boy puzzled. Why did Eve trap people here in the first place? And why does she want to find them?
I don't have a title for it yet. Just this set up for the plot. For a big bad, I'm thinking of going for a less obvious one. Same goes for Eve's reasons for trapping people in that strange place.
Also my dreamed ended with the phrase "Always close the door behind you". Which I might consider when thinking of how to do the big bad (If I make one).
I'm not fully going to work on this just yet. Only looking for opinions right now.
Also this may be a comic since my artwork is at a tolerable quality.
And yes I'm still doing Mischief Knights and the rest of D-Universe.
Later_
All question about my artwork, written works, and projects are mostly answered in this journal entry:
http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/995983/
Request Status:
Runhurds - 40%
kyobekutanaga's request - 100% will be up soon
Furaffinity Links to Mischief Knights on Furaffinity
Info page: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2990520
Episode 0: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3199742/
Episode 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3199755/
Episode 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3199765/
Episode 3: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3199783/
Episode 4 Part 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/4116403/
Episode 4 Part 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/4276692/
Episode 5: Currently being worked on... 50% done
Episode 6:
Episode 7:
Episode 8:
Episode 9:
Episode 10:
Episode 11:
Episode 12:
Episode 13:
Episode 14:
Episode 15:
Episode 16:
Final Episode:
Deviant art links to Mischief Knights on my deviant art account
Current Story(ies):
Mischief Knights [PG - 13]
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....ghts-118561456
Episode links:
Episode 0
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-0-119067542 Status: complete!
Episode 1
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-1-119069031 Status: complete!
Episode 2
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-2-119070640 Status: complete!
Episode 3
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-3-120352737 Status: complete!
Episode 4
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-4-139481084
Status: complete!
Episode 5
http://kyanbu.deviantart.com/art/Mi.....de-5-161957003
Status: 4 out of 8 scenes finished
Episode 6
Status: n/a
Episode 7
Status: n/a
Episode 8
Status: n/a
Episode 9
Status: n/a
Episode 10
Status: n/a
Episode 12
Status: n/a
Episode 13
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Episode 14
Status: n/a
Episode 15
Status: n/a
Episode 16
Status: n/a
Final Episode
Status: n/a