Wait, you're asking us 'What's the Least Parts pf your art that we do not like?'

Aha. What exactly you do not like in my drawings

I took a quick check and frankly there isn't anything I don't see that is bad. Everything seems to be in good order, and you have a lot of variety (not to mention a good sense of humor).

So yeah...there isn't anything wrong I see atm lol

Thank you very much :)

i just went through the last 10 pics of yours or so, and the only thing i can come up with is perhaps facial expressions.

i love the anatomy, i love the line work, i love the coloring style, and all the different races/species. the faces look great to me, i think there just need to be a variety of the different facial expressions.

Thank you :)
I am working on this subject.

no problem!

i dont dislike anything either.

Hmmm... Thanks :)

Thank you.:)
I will solve this problem soon

None taken.
Penises? Pussies? Or both?

Agree!
I was reading the comments above about varying the facial expressions, and was going to suggest the same for the genitalia.

I honestly cant find anything wrong with your art plus I will say that your figures, asses & lips are too things you do well in your art, since I like curvy bodys. :3

Keep up the great work, hopefully you'll do commissions someday since I would love a piece drawn by you of my trap & shemale bunbun. ^^;;

Thank you very much :)
I hope one day will have a lot of free time and PayPal will trust to my country.

Thank you very much :)
I appreciate this.

maybe not so satured colors? still awesome.

You mean without glow or not so bright colors?

more like not such saturated colors. maybe conbining some colors with greys or complementaries to make more desaturated ones. i think thats richer.

I see. Thank you :)

Hmm... I suppose there's 2 things that I "don't" like about your art.

One would be the lack of vagina on your futanari, which makes them feel more like shemales rather than hermaphrodites. This is more of a matter of taste and really shouldn't concern you anyways, especially since you're nice enough to make both female and shemale versions of the same pic anyway most of the time ^^

Second would be the lack of variety between your characters. Not that they look bad at all, it's just that every girl has the same figure of "big tits, wide hips, curvy curves, and a bit of muscle". They do look sexy as hell, but when all that changes between them is a different hairdo and different outfit, it kinda gets boring after a while, especially with their faces. The girls are still great as is, but changing things up a bit more might be a good way to improve as an artist. Trying some skinny girls or chubby girls or small girls or lanky girls might spice things up a bit (if any other body types appeal to you), and some different facial features (larger/smaller eyes, thinner/thicker lips, softer/more intimidating expressions, or a bunch of other methods to make them look different) could go a long way.

I suppose another thing to make mention of that could help you improve your artwork is your lighting. It's not that I don't like the lighting, but I think I can see the pictures potentially being better if you make your lighting "softer". In some pictures you have a shadow gradient which looks nice, but the light in that same picture is just a "hard" white. I hope that makes sense XD

Otherwise I love your cocks, I love your nipples, I love your meaty pussies, they all look great. Though I suppose they could use some more variation as well, since they all seem to be the same "design" that's just scaled to different sizes. I guess there you could try some different shapes of cocks (more/less foreskin, thinner/thicker builds, or maybe more animalistic designs), or puffier/flatter/longer nipples, or pussies with bigger clits or less/more labia.

You do great stuff either way and I'm glad to see that you're looking to improve even beyond that ^^

You see, for me personally: if it looks like girl, act like girl but have dick- it is still futanari (literally "dual form") for me.

Ah, I got it. More variety of body shapes? Not always busty, not always with wide hips? Ok, I will try to make "full spectrum" of bodies.

I prefer more comic style with sharp edges of shadows and light. It is not hard to blend to make it softer.

Thank you very much :)

Ahh, yeah, I can see what you mean by "comic style", and it works ^^ Maybe we could see some actual comics from you in the future? ;3

And don't worry about getting "all" body types X3 Just some more variation beyond hair and clothes ^^

No, you won't. :) I can't draw comics... I do not know why but even 4 pages are huge trouble for me.

Ahh, darn X3 What kind of trouble d you have? Difficulty drawing the same girl over and over or something? ^^

I've already brought this up before, but the genitals in general, as already someone else said above. Mostly the space between asshole/vagina/taint/penis seems to always be a little off.
Otherwise, i love your work! Your linework is very clean, your coloration is very bright and shiney, and your shading is good too!

Ok, next time will pay more attention to this subject.

Thank you :)

You seem to have a repeating style for most of your works, Try experimenting with newer or different methods for your work.


May this be helpful for you~

I just do not want to go on "realistic" way.
I will try to make next drawings in different style.
Thanks :)

Things that I dislike or like least is all a question of my tastes vs yours. THe "i would do it this way" stuff that doesn't mean anything to you. Stuff like puffy assholes, beefy muscles and huge shaft nipples. But those things WORK with your style so those are not to be disliked without disliking the style.

The things that I think you may want to work on or need technical improvement, fingers, feet, toes, shoes and maybe just putting a bit more variety in your camera angles.
The fingers you used in the SYx piece stuck out to me as just right and your adjustment to her boots were perfect, so I say these things as only needing minor improvement.

Yeah. Those are from "matter of taste" theme :) I really like to draw BIG, juicy things :D

Oh I am trying to master those nasty "limbs' ends" -_-. And doing some progress... sometimes -_-

Thank you very much :)

I agree with Isadora on the taint distance thing. The one thing that really stands out to me is the way you draw dicks, as well as nipples. Nipples aren't so bad, in that they just seem a bit too pointy or a bit too big.

My main problem is the way you draw cock though. All the cocks you draw seem to have that weird shape and size that makes them look like bananas glued to the pubic mound. Too many tiny veins too, you usually don't do too bad with veins, but I can pick out a couple pictures where it looks like the cock-bearer fucked a plate of spaghetti before posing.

That aside, I love your style. I like the cartoony look, and the smooth coloring.

I will improve distance between pussy/dick and asshole, but rest...

Sorry those a matter of taste :D
One of my favorite manga artist is Ozone and like him I love to draw veiny bananas.
I can choose different form for dick. Who do you think will be good example? (from artists who draw huge dicks, of course)

Thank you :)

I don't watch a ton of hyper/semi-hyper artists, so I can't give you many good examples. The one that comes to mind most is  falconmccooper though. He doesn't overvein his cocks (usually), and they tend to look like they have some weight to them.

Oh I see. He does one of two main vein with a lot of branches, not just a lot of short tinies like me sometimes.
Good example. I will try to do like this.

Orsome. Really, other than the spaghetti veins, I do like your work. That's just something that pulls my attention away from the rest of the picture.

Once again thanks :)

art wise i like your stile very much, specially the face features, so I dont really know what to say.
but I would like to see you do more diferent body tipes (fat, muscle skinny etc) and more boys, though its just my own desire hehe

besides that just keep up the awesome work :)

Different bodies and more boys?
Checked! :)

Thank you :)

If I had to pick something, I'd say it was the nipples. They can be a tad long at times.

This is my taste. I can't improve that. Sorry :)

probably the cocks are a teensy bit to veiny, other than that, it is fine.

NightFaux showed me good example and I am gonna do like that.

cool ^_^
looking forward to it ^_-

Thanks :)

anytime ^_^

Really? I like how there veiny

Personally I can't find much of anything wrong with your artwork..
I love the long nipples, the very lovely oversized breasts, and especially the large horse cocks.

the only thing I'd like to see more of, if you'd ever do it, is more bondage a little more then every blue moon.

beyond that, i honestly can't find anything wrong with your stuff and favor it quite highly.
You've a great sense of humor about some stuff that you can mix in, and the rest is just extra fun and delight.

Thank you very much :)
Ok, I will try to make more bondage :)

well, i looked though about 20 are so pics and only 3 things i could see i didn't like.

1 elf- like ears: i think there either too long or have too much stuff in and on them really

2 long nipples: they are a tad but too long some times the pics with the shorter ones looked better to me.

3 butts: the seem to be too soft most of the time and not toned, i love the but on the Unicorn hunt picture nice and toned but everyone else is either way out of view or too soft.

that's all i can think of at the moment hope it helps.

Thank you :)
1. I thought after popularity of WoW long elven ears are also popular o_O I can do them like Tolkien said: leaf-like.
2. I can't change myself. I like to draw them like this. Matter of taste. Sorry.
3. Hmmm. Good theme to think about.

To be honest I do like your work especially when it comes to sexy animals like the sheep or chicken for an example. I like your styles and how yo draw the nipples for the females. Oh yeah I have to admit that I like how you two version like the straight and herm version. I respect you and your work!

Thank you very much.
I am trying to be interesting for most of my viewers.

You're welcome and keep up the work and keep on doing your thing.

Hmm, What would take to see a girl with normal or small boobs, it has cute appeal, or a dick that isn't a horse sized one. Some time when seem the most realistic makes it even better, like it could happen.

Oh, you do not like BIG things? I love them ^_^
But yeah I am gonna do more body types.

No, not that Don't like them big...it's more i like variations
Remember, there all different kinds of tits, like colors of rainbow, and how you use them can really have impact. Just don't wanna be cookie cutter with ultra dicks and ultraboobs, i mean, i love my massive tits, but like them small, medium, large, flat, round, droopy, freckled, furry. So many wonderful flavors of tits.

There will be more variety :)

I'm going to agree with some others here:

Saturation:
Colors are usually a tad too saturated, and that makes things feel. . .really fake at times. . .I'm all for stylization, but sometimes colors can be so saturated, that they don't look as good, or "feel right". (Could be your monitor, if not intentional, I have no clue as to the quality and calibration of the hardware you work on.)

Genitals:
I like meaty everything, but I'm often uninterested/unaroused by your stuff, just because it's "off" enough, to look. . ."fake". . .and unappealing. The veins are a good example. I don't really think yours have "too much", but the way they're drawn makes it feel that way. They just don't seem believable to me. That "Spaghetti" look that some have mentioned is pretty much what they look like to me.

Body:
Same as Genitals. Some of your pics hit it right on target, but others are just off enough in anatomy to make me uninterested. I LOVE meaty girls, booty, and pretty much all the stuff that you put into your pics. But often, things are just "off" enough, to make me pass them over. Close, but not quite there. Maybe that's just me. Stylized proportions still need to feel "real", and contain enough "real" anatomy to be believable.

Technical:
I think you've got a verry good polish and technical finish on your pics, but the stuff I mentioned can make me uninterested.


Personal pref:
Too bony. You've got meaty girls, with bony elbows and knees, and it just makes it feel "wrong" You'll find that meaty anybody, whether they be muscled, or just heavier, are not going to have protruding bones. . . they're softened by fat, or diminished by muscle. . .and on a softer girl with curves, those squared off or pointy parts, really work against the feeling of softness". Or even muscles.

Hope this helps!!!!

Wanted to mention that I LOVE a lot of your concepts and ideas, but sometimes those things make it uninteresting to me, visually . . .

Thanks once again.

1. Intentional. I love bright juicy colors ^_^
2. I'll fix that.
3. I see. More variety will be soon
4. Thanks.
5. Good point, by the way.

It will help.

I'm glad!

Let me know if you'd like any more specific critiques, or anything. I've been following your work from when I was on HF, I was much more interested in it then, and I'd love to see it evolve to a point where I can get interested in it again! :) Like I said, I like love your general Ideas, and technical execution, just some things in between have made me become a little bored. . . . .

Huzzah!

Oh, also, I wanted to be clear, that on 3) It's not about proportions, I really like the meaty proportions you give, it's just something about the way it's executed that makes it feel off. . . perhaps the combination of the bonyness, and lack of a feeling of "weight". . . . I think they tend to feel "inflated". . which, could lie with personal pref, I suppose. . . . .

Also!

1) I love bright juicy colors too, but sometimes it's just too much for me, on your pics. Like I said, that could be up to monitor difference. Not sure what you work on, but unless you've got a calibrated monitor, keep in mind that on others it might look more saturated than you see it. (I don't know what hardware you use, so disregard this if you've taken it into account, obviously)

Of course, others are going to see it differently, for sure, depending on their monitor, but that's why making sure you don't go too far on saturation might help keep it from looking too saturated on their monitors. . . .

Polls would probably be great to determine how others are seeing it. . . . .I think you did one of these a while back. . .don't remember the outcome. . .


Sorry for much blahblah! :P

proportion maybe um I dunno

That from matter of taste theme. Sorry.

Having in mind that your style is comic and somewhat ... maximized.
Boobs: Looks rubbery, pay attention to the areola and shape.
Penii: The veins looks like varicose. Perhaps a little more research in the anatomy of male and female?
Mind you I do like healthy robust women, but perhaps more variation is needed.
A interpretation of the body types with your style perhaps?.
Sorry I cannot be more technical, but I hope this may help.

Boobs: got it.
>>Perhaps a little more research in the anatomy of male and female?
References, photos, porn... Believe me, I do my homework :)
There will be more variety

It will help. Thanks.

Need a bit more of tame art. Porn is great but...vary it a little?

*shrugs*

Tame? You mean not porn pics?
I noticed my non-prOn is not so popular here.

Yeah...not porn pics :3~

And yes, but thats a general observation of any "general artist". People don't give a shit about really awesome traiditomal or digital tame pieces. Whih kind ticks me off ):<

But it's your decision. I don't get many views either but I manage :)

The boobs look a lil.. stiff.

Put some sag into them! It's ok, we'd love that. ^^

I agree with Xadera, try fattening up some hips and butts. They go nicely with big bellies and 'mature' women/futa. ^^

Stiff like silicone or like rock? o_O

Will do.
Thank you :)

You draw them like you draw muscles; Perfectly round with no 'give'. So.. yes, kind've rocky? xD

Slope them some more! Don't make them so.. tight. It's all fat, so it's ok if it it flattens out a lil or succumbs to pressure.

But keep those lovely long nipples! I love fat nips! >> << ^.^

Wouldn't change a thing. Keep at it and keep improving!

Can't really say that there's anything I don't like about your art, but if you are looking for things to work on I would have to say variety in regards to the body types.

As much as I love the big curvy women you draw, it'd be cool to see you take on some other looks. Tall and thin, chubby, wide hips, small hips... There's a ton of things for you to play around with. You can even focus this advice in on the way you draw the vagina as well, bigger clits, meatier lips, or the opposite and make them smaller. (Personally I love seeing art of chicks with big clits, but that's beside the point.)

But yeah, that's what I would advise, otherwise keep rocking out the pics like you have been!

All of what I would have commented on has been said already, and you've acknowledged them.

I personally would like to see a variety of body shapes, not that I don't like the curvy boobs and hips, but occasionally seeing someone small and flat is refreshing (I like tiny boobs once in a while myself, probably because I'm not really well endowed :C).

As for colors, I like the bright shiny colors, but seeing a black/white/gray + one color piece from you would be nothing short of a fun change of pace.

And as Sashi said, I would LOVE to see some bondage works from you.

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...the cum seems a little lumpy...

(In Confessional is looks right)

And I guess show a little more interaction (muscles/boobs being morphed as their squeezed)....

I think this may have been mentioned but I have a small issue (although being a far, far lesser artist I feel as if I am being hypocritical of myself to critique), is that a lot of your penises have over emphasized veins, like- it's just a little disturbing. But that's all I really find troubling. Your art is far, far better than what I have done. Period.

After careful inspection, I can say definitely that I have no critiques.

Your style and the details there of are fantastic, especially for the things you draw. My only feedback on any changes that should be made are thus. I notice with many humans you draw the same nose. roughly the same shape with the same inward curvature and such. I would only that that perhaps you should draw a larger variety of noses and perhaps eyes. Giving noses different shapes sizes and curves as well as doing the same for eyes since features are the human face are so defining. Aside from that. love your style, Im sure there is plenty I can learn from it.

I suggest varying body types a bit.

Also, the man with tits syndrome with the futa stuff. Typically, a futa has both pats and not just one is all.

A but more variety in facial expressions too.

Other than those lil' nitpicks, I love your stuff.

The facial expressions could use a little work, hope that helps.

Unless something has one single big glaring flaw, I tend to look at art as a whole piece, so if it looks good, it's cool.

Also, your unicorn pic got used as a "muscle beast" picture In a homestuck fan adventure:
http://www.mspaforums.com/showthrea.....=1#post5066760

But if you really need feedback...um...Not enough cocks? Can never have too many right?

You could be a bit more realistic in the boobie physics and whatnot. Other than that your fine

Well, only thing i don't like in your art are futa character, but only because i don't like she-male, not the way you draw hers.

I agree with an earlier comment about you needing to work on are facial expressions, and also you need to work on not making everyones' skin so shiny-looking - they tend to look like they're covered in oil or made of latex.