FA+
Shop
Description of a certain "broken one" (unfinished).
14 years ago
Go here --> 
for a comprehensive list of all of my significant writings, WIPs, and conceptual works posted as submissions and in journals.
(journal link) The flair of my writing, displayed for thoughtful browsing
for a comprehensive list of all of my significant writings, WIPs, and conceptual works posted as submissions and in journals.(journal link) The flair of my writing, displayed for thoughtful browsing
She enjoys portraying herself as a half-aware and dimwitted beast, drunken in the stupor of her own bodily composure.This is what I do in my spare time.
I did this dialogue several months ago.
The asterisks are my placeholders for who it "should" be that's conversating here.
I know how conversations might go. As for "who" gets swept into them, that is always the funnest part of the mystery.
For reference to what a "broken one" is like: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5606905
(I want her concept to be in dialogue form. For now, she will only be known as "she" and "her.")
*: You might want to leave her alone...
**: ?
*: She is, well... Let me explain. She does not live life in the same ways that others do. Her body forever loses its life force.
**: I don't understand...
*: She...does not live life as most do. She is forever within death's reach. And she does not speak to us, because upon occasionally falling prey to death, she comes to see things that would be most beings' final sights before drifting off into the afterlife.
**: Wait a minute. What do you mean "occasionally falling prey to death?"
*: She is dead. Or rather, she is always dying.
**: ???
*: She was born with a perpetual curse. At times, she is alive, but at most times, she is dead.
**: I don't understand how someone could be born in such a way...
*: It's not so very complicated. She is the offspring of an angel and a shade.
**: But I thought the shades were condemned souls who could only wait to be sent to hell...
But the smallest exertion of hers could send a man flying; him, and possibly others as well, shattering much of the pride of many an unknowledgeable foe within mere seconds.(link) Something Massive (Unfinished)
(link) The Fetishism of My Works, Displayed For Easy Finding.
Go here -->
To see my YouTube videos! 
I think that I have it in mind to imply that for where she lives, it's not common that someone; someTHING like her is an everyday sight. She is secluded from others, because no one wants to be harmed by her in any way. Yet...there's something missing. Someone needs to "be there" for her; take care of her when no one else would want to.
I've typed up a small exchange of dialogue concerning her, and the four nephils that I usually write about (Akira, Katherine, Nigel, and Sheryl). She is worried about [what I might imply is] the eventual arrival of a particularly powerful being. She is worried about what she might "need to do" to keep everyone safe (even though most of those people shun her and are prejudiced against her). Akira is baffled by how she speaks. Sheryl is worried about her. Kathering is rude to her. Nigel is the main one trying to be calm and peaceable towards her and decipher the meaning in her words.
I want it to build up towards something a bit epic. =3