A heavily underdeveloped story concerning Bale and Akira
14 years ago
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She enjoys portraying herself as a half-aware and dimwitted beast, drunken in the stupor of her own bodily composure.
For reference
"Bale" is "The Angel of Sorrow." He's a still underdeveloped character that Chartreux mentioned in this unfinished story between him and Chanda: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6064313/ ("colorless" version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6064541/ ).
{Scene}
As Bale looks to the sky.
Bale: So you left me...
[narration where he is attack rushed by Akira, but he grabs Akira's head tightly, causing him pain as he brings Akira's face to his own]
Bale: In who's name do you speak?
Akira: AGH! Tsh-WHAT?!?!
Bale: For whom do you offer utterances?
Akira: Let go of me!
Bale: Are you too laden with many burdens?
[narration conveying a struggle]
Akira: I ain't gotta tell you SHIT!
Bale: Lowborn... *[suggestive actions]* It isn't fair. But I guess humor was at the forefront of the idea, otherwise this would not be.
[narration involving Shila]
Bale: You.
Shila: *[suggestive actions]*
Bale: I'm looking for a certain person, though I doubt that you have ever so much as happened upon him. Do you dream often?
[narration]
Bale: I'm beginning to believe that he is beyond my reach. But considering that he may be in a moment of regression, he may be closer to us than I know.
[narration centered around Bale and Shila]
Bale: What ails you? I honestly don't think that a child your age could be allowed subconscious visions of such a...horrifically powerful being. But if the name under which you offer up your prayers is in fact that of whom I suspect, then may Heaven give you rest. No one should ever say His name. But in youth, the ignorance of innocence is unavoidable. What a terrible religion.
[narration]
Bale: I want...to stop him. I want to give your side a fighting chance. But I haven't a clue as to where I should start. I was abandoned too. But that doesn't mean that innocent beings like yourselves should suffer. To have placed such a daunting task in the laps of mere children...
[narration]
Bale: *to Akira* I didn't think you were that strong. Or, to be proper, I didn't think that you were loved as much...
Akira: What? "Loved?"
Bale: You saw Him, didn't you?
Akira: Saw...who?
Bale: You saw the devil.
Akira: I can't...remember...
Bale: You were only a child. It's understandable, yet...
Akira: "Yet" what?
Bale: ...He spared you?
Akira: I don't even know what you're talking about.
Bale: The memory... It's incomprehensible to you, isn't it?
Akira: Incomper...what???
Bale: The fiend. I don't doubt that he stole MANY things from you that day. Here you are, alive and well. But if He had so chosen...
Akira: ...
Bale: You're not blind. And your hearing hasn't diminished. However, I believe that He robbed you of the one thing you could not regain in all your life...
Akira: Like what, dude?
Bale: Your very sanctity of mind.
All of this is subject to possibly extensive editing, as I do not feel that any of it is consistent just yet.
I wanted to characterize Bale. I have a few vague ideas in mind for his appearance, and a very simple idea in mind for, yes, "what his voice sounds like." For the most part, he sounds like a solemn human being/humanoid being, but in a slightly "altered" way. I've always had ideas in mind that would imply that the larger characters - and the unorthodox characters - have distinctly different tones of voice. I'm no expert on sound though...
I'm honestly undecided as to whether or not Bale should be a "friendly" character, or somewhat of a "shady" figure like Chanda. There are simply too many ideas in my head that surround him. X.X
I haven't really developed ALL of my characters very "far" just yet...
In an off-note, SoulCalibur 4 and Tekken 6 are gonna rock.^^