So, lets begin at the beginning:
Some friends and I are doing a "Build your own custom Space Marines Chapter" - no special rules beyond whats in the codex of choice.
After seeking some advice, I've made mine out of the Dark Angels. They have all the Terminator Armor, and Shields I am looking into, plus they have a lot of self-support.

Now, as all first-drafts this list isn't spectacular - that's why I'm posting it here. I'm lookin' to get some help.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7424330/ for Image.

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Belial (130 Pts)
w/ Thunder Hammer & Storm Shield

x4 Deathwing Terminator Squad (235 pts each)
w/ x5 Thunder Hammer & Storm Shield + 1 Cyclone Missile Launcher

x1 Upgraded Deathwing Terminator Squad (290 pts)
w/ x5 Thunder Hammer & Storm Shield + 1 Cyclone Missile Launcher + 1 Apothecary + 1 Standard Bearer

x3 Venerable Dreadnaughts (190 each)
w/ Twin-Linked Lascannon & Missile Launcher + Extra Armor + Venerable

x3 "Ravenwing Support" Landspeeder (75 each)
w/ Multi-Melta & Typhoon Missile Launcher

x3 Whirlwind (155 each)
w/ Extra Armor & Hunter-Killer Missile

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I really only added the H-K's to the list, to fill in the last few points

2500 on the nose. =D

To free up points I could easily drop the HK missiles from the Whirlwinds, switch the dreads from TL-LasCannons to Multi-Meltas, and drop the Standard Bearer - this would give me 130 more points.

I'm not sure what I can do w/ that.