Nigel and a reptilian devil
13 years ago
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She enjoys portraying herself as a half-aware and dimwitted beast, drunken in the stupor of her own bodily composure.
(iPod Note of 7-1-11)
{Conceptualization}
(It is very vague for now...)
Nigel is in Hell. After a few horrifying occurances, he enters a place where he finds someone who seems to be some sort of huge reptilian person who is sitting at a huge table. Nigel is terrified of everything going on in this new existance. To certain extents, he is both terrified and also slightly interested in how this massive reptilian person looks.
[brief description of this devil goes here] He is wearing reading glasses, and seems to be reading a book.
He doesn't readily take notice of Nigel, even though Nigel tries - with much hesitation - to get his attention.
His voice purrs and flutters as he speaks.
His eyes are a bright yet deep red, seeming almost identical to a transparent ruby, yet not overly transparent.
{Nigel enters some manner of building that seems to be normal enough to warrent the decision he made to enter it. He confronts this particular devil, yet he doesn't at all know what to call it, thinking it to be just a very large slith}
Nigel: (he is too terrified to even speak, observing his surroundings that look unnaturally welcoming given that he is in Hell)
[narration of this devil's appearance goes here]
Reptilian Devil: (he is reading something quietly, his ruby red eyes seeming to closely examine each and every word on its pages)
Nigel: (he backs away from all of this, opening "what was the front door" in trying to escape this place. But [must convey this part better] upon hearing blood-curdling sounds no one should ever be so very surrounded by, let alone upon seeing some manner of horrid creature begin to approach him with terrifying celerity, he tries to press the door shut, only to see an utterly grotesque hand almost instantaneously slip behind the door where he was. He fell back on what was not previously a wooden floor, feeling as though his heart stopped at the brutal realization that he found himself paralyzed by. "Die" came first in utterly vague immediacy, followed by "dead" in only a tenth of a second's time. These words tormented him in an endless loophole of understandable logic, causing the impulses of his body to motion him both away from that hand, but also in every direction concievable. Lost to maddening instinct, the very image of his being became likened to that of nothing more than a miserably chaotic compilation of uncertainty. Nothing in his reaction made any coherent sense. In this moment, he was like nothing more than a crawling thing of the soil that, in the mixed emotions of the agony of its pain, could do no more than writhe unwillingly in the assurance of its coming death)
The hand slowly pulled the door shut...
...leaving but a crack in its opening, which was more than enough to allow those ear-deafening screams to enter this odd home.
The large reptilian didn't seem to care...
[convey a conversation - that takes a considerable while to get to - between Nigel and the Reptilian Devil, where after a while of ignoring Nigel, he slightly, slowly turns his eyes from his book to stare at him, simply staring at him and breathing slowly, which, upon Nigel's vague realization that this is even transpiring (because he initially couldn't tell if whether or not what were the pupils of the devil's eyes were even directed towards him at all, which nearly stopped his heart upon realization...because his sense of assurance of safety had been building slowly as if this person was not an enemy. He was ignorant to the devil's anatomy, and nearly died - in a literal sense - upon these terrifying realizations...), terrifies Nigel to no end. Eventually, the large reptilian Devil returns to his eyes to his book. Nothing outside of his staring and Nigel's fear had occured...for but only a small ammount of time before Nigel began to feel extreme sensations all over his body that were so overwhelmingly peaceful, he couldn't even stand up straight. He collapses onto the floor, seeming to have fallen into a deeply satisfying sleep]
The reptilian devil continues to read his book. A moment later, [convey that a random, beautiful demon enters his home, skittering across the floor past Nigel and to the devil's right foot, crawling up his body in purposely making its way through the enclosure of his huge thighs, up his belly and chest, and to his book's two open pages. When he had crawled within the Reptilian Devil's crotch, it made the devil close his eyes slightly, purring his deeply sensual draconic purr. The small demon then had crawled up his right arm and to his shoulder, whispering something to him]
Reptilian Devil: Of course. *his voice fluttered in his response to the much smaller demon*
[I want to convey that this "lizardous devil" is of a highly sensual nature that sees to it that he ends up molesting Nigel in very peaceable, "considerate" ways. But somehow, I want~]
[lost my train of inspiration here]
Author's notes
I want to convey a conversation between this devil and Nigel, where the devil speaks to him in judgemental allusions regarding Katherine - whom he refers to as "quite a convenient catch" among women - and why Nigel would care for her over caring for a woman of what he believes would be "a more befitting young lady."
I want the conversation to be very intertwining, and I want it to lead up to something terrifying.

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~angeltigerchris
O: I'd like to read some more 8)