Is Kyuterasu a Mary-Sue?
13 years ago
When you are a man... sometimes you wear stretchy pants... in your room... is for fun...
I will destroy any man who dares abuse my trust!
I will destroy any man who dares abuse my trust!
Oh come on people, like you don't already know the answer to that!
XD
I mean, I took the online quiz a LONG time ago and out Mary-Sued Superman.
;D
Stoaled from
PherociousEso
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[x] They are possessed by a demon [were at one point, got it exorcized]
[x] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie/dragon
[x] They are physically strong
[x] They have a rare hair/fur color
[x] Their eyes are an unusual color
[x] This happens to be red [how did you know? ;D]
[x] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[x] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[x] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc [I guess having the heart of a star counts as pyrokinesis? o.O]
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[x] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[x] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[x] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature [Duh, werewolf]
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[x] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends
[x] They are emo/cutesy [cute, never emo!]
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[x] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[x] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[x] Some part of their body glows
[x] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummer's Night, The Winter Solstice etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[x] They are connected with a certain element
[x] They are connected with a certain animal [This question is kinda dumb to ask of a furry character, XD]
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[x] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga [popular, no, anime style, definitely]
[x] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[x] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[x] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[x] They are hiding from someone/something
[x] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[x] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[x] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[x] They have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia [does being a night owl count? cuz if not, then no, ;p]
Overall points: 39
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[x] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[x] They are addicted to drugs, sex [yay, sex!]
[x] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 36
[<5 -Anti-Sue Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are
scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 -Balanced Character If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and
interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26< -Mary-Sue Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?]
Kinda was tempted to cut this last section out, since it seems to lecture people for making their characters interesting for themselves.
;p
But, you be the judge.
If making a character interesting makes them "annoying to others" then, hey, they don't have to read the stories I put her in.
;p
XD
I mean, I took the online quiz a LONG time ago and out Mary-Sued Superman.
;D
Stoaled from
PherociousEso[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[x] They are possessed by a demon [were at one point, got it exorcized]
[x] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie/dragon
[x] They are physically strong
[x] They have a rare hair/fur color
[x] Their eyes are an unusual color
[x] This happens to be red [how did you know? ;D]
[x] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[x] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[x] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc [I guess having the heart of a star counts as pyrokinesis? o.O]
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[x] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[x] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[x] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature [Duh, werewolf]
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[x] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends
[x] They are emo/cutesy [cute, never emo!]
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[x] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[x] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[x] Some part of their body glows
[x] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummer's Night, The Winter Solstice etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[x] They are connected with a certain element
[x] They are connected with a certain animal [This question is kinda dumb to ask of a furry character, XD]
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[x] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga [popular, no, anime style, definitely]
[x] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[x] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[x] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[x] They are hiding from someone/something
[x] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[x] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[x] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[x] They have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia [does being a night owl count? cuz if not, then no, ;p]
Overall points: 39
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[x] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[x] They are addicted to drugs, sex [yay, sex!]
[x] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 36
[<5 -Anti-Sue Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are
scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 -Balanced Character If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and
interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26< -Mary-Sue Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?]
Kinda was tempted to cut this last section out, since it seems to lecture people for making their characters interesting for themselves.
;p
But, you be the judge.
If making a character interesting makes them "annoying to others" then, hey, they don't have to read the stories I put her in.
;p
FA+

Then gives traits that barely anyone would choose that "excuse" a point a piece at the bottom.
Then it tells people what to do to make them "less boring" or "less annoying" which, really depends on if you're talking about someone's sona or an actual character.
D:
I don't mind being labeled a Mary-Sue, because I created Kyu to be the main character, the focal point, of her story.
I can't help it if being an immortal werewolf comes with a lot of extra "points" in the meme.
XD
Sure, if I take out the fact that she's a werewolf, I'd score under 16, but really, she'd become a wall flower in that case.
XD