What subject matter(s) do you like in my writing?
I do enjoy the stories where characters converse and interact with each other, even with some fattening and teasing shenanigans. You are very descriptive and build the scenes very vividly.

What aspect(s) of my writing style do you like most/least?
Most, the descriptiveness. As mentioned above you describe the scenes and actions very well and can easily picture them in my head. As for what I like least... I really don't know ;n;

What would you like to see more/less of?
I would be happy to see more of the same really. Different stories to keep us interested, always good. Sort of like one of those "If it's not broken don't fix it" type things.

What do you like about my characters?
I do enjoy how different they are to one another, as well as how they interact among themselves. It's very interesting to me, as well as how they speak, picturing their voices.

What do I need to improve on?
I... really cannot suggest anything, not being a reasonable writer. I cannot really give you any criticisms or suggestions, sadly. Makes me feel I didn't help much in this survey D:

Honesty time: It's been awhile since I've read anything you've written. Mostly because I find it kind of hard to get into reading anything about Pokemon; at least, about Pokemon outside of my list of favorites. The ones I do remember reading (the first part of your gluttony-demon story and that one about the golden-fat creatures) I enjoyed. The gold one's concept was interesting; the idea of a creature almost-literally being currency was intriguing, albeit (as you yourself admitted) troubling economically, and I wanted to see the concept expanded upon.

My tired mind fails me, now; I must sleep. I'll probably be back sometime later, probably midnight, when I'm off work and more lucid.

I will probably be the first to admit that I write too much about Pokemon; in the past year and a half or so since I started writing more regularly, I've only written one thing that didn't involve Pokemon (not counting a story currently in the works that's something different). I ought to be branching out a lot more, not only to fit a wider audience but also because I should be trying to have more original content. :C

Butcher and Value of Flesh have been outdated for quite a long time; with the former I didn't like a lot of the things I did with the tone and setting for how it set up the series so I'm going to be reworking everything I've done on it so far (which isn't much), and with the latter I didn't really know where to go with the way I started it and there were many inconsistencies and moments of questionable logic so I just scrapped it. I did like the general concept for the Aureans a lot though and I still wanted to try to do something with them - I've actually already thought of a new story with what I feel is a much better setting, it's mostly just a matter of finding a way to manage myself to get out all of the cluttered ideas I have. Maybe I should try doing a snippet with them...

I really do like your fat fur writing, and there isn't much on FA in way of fat Arcanines so I'd definitely love to see more of that.

Heh, I don't know about any potential future plans to do another story with an Arcanine but I do have one story already that involves one, if you haven't seen it already. I'm kind of surprised though that you'd think that, I've often found Arcanines to be one of the most common Pokemon used for fatty shenanigans; Eddy and VDO have done quite a few things with fat Arcanines, just for starters. Thanks though, I'm glad to hear you like my work. c:

So this is a taste of my writing And I would like some constructive criticism on it and maybe get some pointers on how to write better and make it *Maybe* more creative (I guess?):
deviantart.com/art/New-Life-on-the-Surface-713792347?edit=1
I have peeps at home who say that I write good but idk so since you are the professional writer that writes stuff like the stuff I linked to, I would like some pointers and maybe some help.

Btw love your work, it's the best, just wish there were more female oriented works. Still good tho.

TL:DR: deviantart.com/art/New-Life-on-the-Surface-713792347?edit=1
^^^^^I need some pointers and help on my writing, demo here^^^^^

Alright, I'll try giving it a look over.

I'm really not sure why you'd post here of all places for that, but to keep things more relevant to this journal, what exactly makes you say that? I know I've done herm stuff with greater frequency, but I think the majority of my uploads are still on female characters.

Well I want a little more stuff on weight gain and female pokefurs And I kinda feel there isnt enough of it like more about a female lucario, Rapidash, Luxrays, Pikachus and Raichus, maybe some about mewtwo female, and/or gardevoir? You are the only famous writer that does this.

Your work is still admirable and desirable to reach the skill and level you have achieved to say the least. But I kinda find alot of male orientated works or not enough of it on the current internet to date. You still do works like that and I have no place to be ordering anything from you (Because I'm currently broke and have no money to speak of.) I think we need more female orientated works.

Love your work.

Thank you if you are reading this and I will go to the other place to talk somemore.


Love,
Supersquirtle6

(Sorry if this sounds rude or mean in any way... I Mean this sincerely, I do love all of your works [except eldritch cuz im not really a fan of that but it was well drawn and made very well] and I hope to get help from you with you reviewing my work.)