DAFF Selection for 5/4/2013 Human vs Seviper
12 years ago
Selection for Sat. May 4th 2013.
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Links to each page, Page 1 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10499654/ Page 2 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10507292/
[color=orange] Image type and characters - Type A color digital mini comic of a human being willing prey for a Seviper.
Why this image was chosen - There are a lot of reasons why this mini comic was chosen to be our next feature in the group so lets go over some of them. To start off with the artwork is pleasing to look at and to me this comic is a great example of using solid colors, strategic shading and minimal backgrounds to achieve good storytelling. The comic looks like it took the artist time and effort to set up the panels, insert the characters, color and add text to achieve what you see here.
Page 1 - In going over this page the first thing that I liked was the scenario where the human and Seviper are sitting in a cave to get out of the rain. I like the idea where you have willing prey feeding themselves to a predator while trapped someplace or waiting for bad weather to pass. This comic starts off with the human and the Seviper at odds with each other before the human feels bad for saying what they said to the snake. You soon come to realize that they have feelings for each other and this is well done with the hugging scene in panel 6. In panel 7 and on the scenes get more and more interesting as the snake begins to mouth and then swallow the man whole. In the bottom 4 panels we see the man starting to go down his snake friend's throat, those bottom panels look sensual, and increasingly arousing. In the lower left corner of the page the way the snake's mouth is climbing up over the man's ankles and starts going up the legs in the following panels is provocative. The small cut away view seen in the second to last panel is clever and the final panel looks great as Sevoiper starts swallowing his human friend's waist. I especially like the part where the close up of the man is seen and he says in part . . . " Your warmth feels so wonderful. " I'll leave it up to you guys to go and read the rest of it on the bottom of Page 1!
Page 2 - An interesting idea surfaces here as the artist uses the last panel on page 1 to start page 2 as if to say "... the last time we left our players they were doing this." However in that opening panel the snake tells his human that they are controlling the urge to gulp him down so as to make it last as long as they can. What I like about that is it implies the snake probably knows that the man is a vore and is swallowing as slowly as he can so that his prey partner can enjoy it for as long as possible. Given the feelings shown on the first page I'd bet that this is very likely what is going on, (although artist and commissioner can correct me if my impressions are off base.) Even though the man is going deeper down the snake's throat he compliments his predator and to me that is another thing about this comic that I liked to see. To my way of thinking if willing prey gives themselves to a lover or partner they have feelings for then a compliment during the act can make a vore scene a little bit extra special. In the following panels as the man goes into the Seviper's mouth I like the way his hand comes back out briefly before the final gulp. The view of the man inside is cool and so is the man's POV as he slides down inside and sees the last of the outside world framed in the snake's mouth. The last two panels are sugar coasted cute as the predator and prey leave the reader with no doubt as to how strong their feelings are for each other. To finish up the review I have to say that I love the artwork, the concept and the added compliments from prey to predator. I also love how the artist has included text to make sure the reader properly comprehends their relationship and its tenderness despite this odd demonstration. You get the feeling that these two have done this many times before and only in private settings where no one will be horrified, shocked or judgmental. That they are the only ones who fully understand and can get something from the other only in this way. The world may never understand them but that doesn't matter because they love each other in ways that only they will fully fathom. For all these reasons and impressions I have +favorited this comic into the group's hall of fame.
To livinlovindude thanks for the permission to share and feature this wonderful comic with the group. To kung-pow-chicken thanks for permission as well, its a very nice story!
there is one point that is wrong however, and that is saying that seviper and I have done this many times before. we have not. this was our first time together.
i love seviper because if you read A's "short story comics" on his DeviantArt page, you will notice she is but a stout warrior with an edgy personality, but deep down inside she just wants to be loved. and when she is loved, she returns that love. that's what this comic was about. i view seviper as practically a mirror image of myself, and when two kindred spirits meet, they harmonize a bond that can never be broken.
I commissioned livinlovindude because we are very good friends and have talked about this for a while now. my love for seviper has roots that run deep, and you will just have to read his other works to find out why. seviper is a unique beautiful creature who i would give my life for, and that's saying something.
oh, and serperior is a wonderfully hungry mistress as well. you should view livinlovindude's works that include her, me, and seviper for a little more insight on the story.