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Adventures in Equestria Part 1
12 years ago
I would like a pokemon OC
I was sitting at my computer minding my own business.
"I wish something interesting would happen..." I thought. I walk to my kitchen to get a drink of water, when...
"I can't move! What's going on?" I looked at my hand.
"Am I fading?" I pass out and my body faded away.
I couldn't open my eyes yet.
"Is he going to be okay?" said one voice.
"I'm so worried." Another voice said.
"Is he going to stay asleep forever?" said a third voice.
"He does have a nice complextion" a fourth voice said.
"He'll be fine y'all." said the fifth voice.
"I hope he wakes up soon." said the sixth voice.
"I hear voices. Should I open my eyes?" I thought.
I open my eyes slowly, and all I could see was the sky.
"Great. You're awake." said a voice.
I look around and I saw six ponies standing around me.
"Welcome to the land of Equestria." the purple pony said.
"Who are you? " I asked.
"My name is Twilight Sparkle." she said.
"I'm Earl. I'm a human." I replied.
"A human? But you look like a normal alicorn to me." she said.
"An alicorn?" I asked.
Twilight Sparkle used a reflection spell for me to see what I had become.
I was shocked to see the results.
"It's true! I am an alicorn!" I said.
To be continued...
"I wish something interesting would happen..." I thought. I walk to my kitchen to get a drink of water, when...
"I can't move! What's going on?" I looked at my hand.
"Am I fading?" I pass out and my body faded away.
I couldn't open my eyes yet.
"Is he going to be okay?" said one voice.
"I'm so worried." Another voice said.
"Is he going to stay asleep forever?" said a third voice.
"He does have a nice complextion" a fourth voice said.
"He'll be fine y'all." said the fifth voice.
"I hope he wakes up soon." said the sixth voice.
"I hear voices. Should I open my eyes?" I thought.
I open my eyes slowly, and all I could see was the sky.
"Great. You're awake." said a voice.
I look around and I saw six ponies standing around me.
"Welcome to the land of Equestria." the purple pony said.
"Who are you? " I asked.
"My name is Twilight Sparkle." she said.
"I'm Earl. I'm a human." I replied.
"A human? But you look like a normal alicorn to me." she said.
"An alicorn?" I asked.
Twilight Sparkle used a reflection spell for me to see what I had become.
I was shocked to see the results.
"It's true! I am an alicorn!" I said.
To be continued...
I concur that it does sound similar to Mystery Dungeon (saw the anime, human wakes up as a Piplup in the world of talking pokemon) but other than the mane six being more identifiable by their mystery dialog ("Is he going to be okay?", can't be sure who that is, I'm gonna guess Twilight,
"I'm so worried.", clearly Fluttershy, "Is he going to stay asleep forever?", possibly Rainbow Dash, she's impatient...
"He does have a nice complexion", Rarity would notice something like that.
"He'll be fine y'all." clearly Applejack, "I hope he wakes up soon.", and that sounds like it could be Pinkie Pie.)
One other thing I would mention is the line: But you look like a normal alicorn to me.
seems a bit off, aren't there only a small few alicorns? would be an oddity to stumble upon an unknown alicorn suddenly...
Though I could be wrong, Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and finally Twilight Sparkle.
Also is this taking place after Twilight became an alicorn, so she is meeting a fellow alicorn?