Story guide
12 years ago
Story information: https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/10826933/
Universal information: https://www.heavy-weapons.com/
Universal information: https://www.heavy-weapons.com/
Timeline of the current stories - I'm writing two stories side by side right now and i have no doubt its a little confusing for people, so i'll order them next to each other and it should hopefully clear things up.
Intro - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8514042/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 2 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8628540/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 3 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9003982/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 4 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12200860/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 5 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9493619/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 6 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9500534/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 7 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9508235/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 8 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9586265/ Plasia: Diary of events - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9758568/
Chapter 9 - Diego: WIP Plasia: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10362986/
Chapter 10 - Diego: WIP Plasia: WIP - Infomation here - http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4874902/ about the previous 2 chapters
Chapter 11 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10541725/
Chapter 12 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11025351/
Chapter 13 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11048654/
Chapter 14 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11181526/
Chapter 14.5 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11878131/
Chapter 15 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12008295/
Chapter 16 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12208395/
Chapter 17 - Part 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12333984/ Part 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12347539/
Chapter 18 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12354621/
Chapter 19 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12389099/
Chapter 20 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12493639/
Chapter 21 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12565283/
Chapter 22 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13821333/
Chapter 23 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14771508/
Chapter 24 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15069112/
Chapter 25 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15170929/
Chapter 26 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15180627/
Chapter 27 - part 1 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15261898/ - part 2 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15423609/
Chapter 28 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15753279/
Hey everyone, in an attempt to both busy myself and to tidy up my stories and universe (Which are slightly shambolic right now in their display) I’m putting together a beginners guide to my stories of this arc to explain to new readers what the bloody fuck is going on and what these creatures are. So if you’re new to reading my stuff and are quite interested in what you’ve seen, or you’d like a reminder of what things are, this is the place to be.
Beginners guide to the Rewritten
What are the Rewritten?
The Rewritten are a corrupted faction in my sci-fi universe that spread a crystalline based corruption to others through sex. They generally operate through brute force and surprise tactics on populated but unsuspecting areas, and use sneakier infiltration techniques against more dangerous opponents who could present an armed threat.
What is a Czarite?
This - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8327953/ is a normal Czarite, they are very happy, warm, friendly and charismatic creatures who thrive on love and friendships, all of them are herms and are capable of both mothering and fathering children with most species. They are extremely adaptable and surprisingly hardy creatures too. Generally are very well received and brilliant people to know. Czarites make excellent (if frisky) lovers and fantastic friends.
What is a Corrupted Czarite?
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8435803/ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12188268/
Otherwise known as a Controller, Corrupted Czarites are the above creature after being infected with the Rewritten’s infestation. They lose the ability to reproduce in all aspects and gain several other traits, including external testis and far larger sexual organs to accommodate their needs. They exist almost exclusively to spread their corruption and it generally completely consumes their life. Seeth and Plasia however are examples of Corrupted Czarites trying to defy this lifestyle.
What is Corruption, what does it do and how does it effect people?
The Corruption was originally created by someone as a distraction for a greater operation, but the Czarites sheer adaptive-ness to the corruption made the whole thing grow out of control. It is spread through sexual intercourse and is currently irreversible due to its growth into the nervous system and brain activity. Upon being infested, the victim will fall unconscious a few minutes after intercourse and will remain comatose until the process is complete. There are two degrees of corruption and the extend of which depends on the person and not the infector. Physical changes are dependant on the type as seen below, but all people infected will have their skin/flesh/fur changed to dark grey and their eyes usually change to a block purple colour.
1. Slaves – Weak willed or weak bodied people
People with low will-power or fragile bodies will be turned into slaves. Slaves are utterly mindless and function similarly to zombies, apart from the whole brain eating thing is replaced by sex instead. Slaves are controllable by Controllers and Nodes. All of their sensory information is available to Controllers as well. Slaves retain their gender and don’t have many physical changes, other than their skin and eye colour, and general demeanour.
2. Nodes – Strong willed and adaptable people.
People with stronger wills and more adaptable bodies will have more brain function intact after the transformation and will be turned into Nodes instead, Nodes are capable of thought and decisions but are still controllable by Controllers. They act as leaders for groups of Slaves and are larger and stronger than Slaves too. All nodes are herm versions of their formers selves. Nodes have increased size, strength and generally change to look more feminine to suit their new gender. Nodes are intelligent but still submissive to controllers and utterly committed to their cause.
3. Controllers – Exclusively corrupted Czarites.
Controllers are in charge of everything, only Czarites can become Controllers and all czarites who become Corrupted will be Controllers.
What are Marks? Why do Controllers desire them?
Marks are people who are Immune to the corruption, for reasons unknown, usually genetics or sheer luck. They cannot ever be corrupted by any means. They are highly sought after by Controllers due to the fact that they are rare and because of the Controllers nature desire to fuck uncorrupted people. For them, they experience far more pleasure from uncorrupted people than from their own kind, so to a Controller, a Mark is a sex slave who can provide tremendous amounts of pleasure at their will. Finding an attractive Mark who they actually like the look of… now that’s something they’d trade a million slaves for.
Thats all i can think of for now, but if you have any questions about anything i haven't answered yet, go right ahead.
I have written a catch up journal about what happens during chapters 9/10, as well as that, the Diego and Plasia story lines come together at chapter 11 anyway... i was supposed to write a lot more about Plasia but i plowed on into the storyline and got too caught up in it. IF, theres a lot of demand to see what happened to Plasia then i'll write the stories out rather than abridging them. Comment to let me know what you want/think.
As always people, thank you for reading my stuff, leaving a comment/favourite is the best way to let me know if you liked my stuff... and if the gooey butt secks give you a boner or a lady boner... you'd better press that fav button!
FAQ
Why can't Diego be corrupted?
He's a mark due to his species.
Can the corruption be reversed or removed?
No, its a very physical infection and currently completely permanent. The only way to truly fight it is by force of will.
Just how horny are Corrupted Czarites?
Very. Very fucking horny. If they could spend every minute of every day of the rest of their lives fucking their favourite victims and marks, they would.
How do the different slimes they produce work?
Corrupted Czarites produce 3/4 main types of slime/ooze. Saliva, lube, breast ooze (not all produce breast ooze) and cum. All are pretty oozy and gooey but they work slightly differently. Saliva is the least potent in terms of corruptive power and works mainly like it does with humans, aside from Plasia, who's neon blue saliva is far stronger. The lube slime is produced from the dick of the czarite and functions as natural lube, it is produced in very copious amounts when the corrupted czarite is fucking and makes a ton of mess, its corruptive potential is quite small however. The breast ooze (similar to milk i suppose, but its a little thicker than milk and a completely different colour/texture) is extremely corruptive and only certain Czarites produce it, usually the bigger breasted ones. Finally, the cum is by far the most potent corruptant the corrupted czarite has at her disposal and the arrival will usually signify the full corruption of the victim (unless they are a mark).
Intro - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8514042/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 2 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8628540/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 3 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9003982/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 4 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12200860/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 5 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9493619/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 6 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9500534/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 7 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9508235/ Plasia: N/A
Chapter 8 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9586265/ Plasia: Diary of events - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9758568/
Chapter 9 - Diego: WIP Plasia: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10362986/
Chapter 10 - Diego: WIP Plasia: WIP - Infomation here - http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4874902/ about the previous 2 chapters
Chapter 11 - Diego: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10541725/
Chapter 12 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11025351/
Chapter 13 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11048654/
Chapter 14 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11181526/
Chapter 14.5 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11878131/
Chapter 15 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12008295/
Chapter 16 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12208395/
Chapter 17 - Part 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12333984/ Part 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12347539/
Chapter 18 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12354621/
Chapter 19 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12389099/
Chapter 20 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12493639/
Chapter 21 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12565283/
Chapter 22 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13821333/
Chapter 23 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14771508/
Chapter 24 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15069112/
Chapter 25 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15170929/
Chapter 26 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15180627/
Chapter 27 - part 1 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15261898/ - part 2 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15423609/
Chapter 28 - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15753279/
Hey everyone, in an attempt to both busy myself and to tidy up my stories and universe (Which are slightly shambolic right now in their display) I’m putting together a beginners guide to my stories of this arc to explain to new readers what the bloody fuck is going on and what these creatures are. So if you’re new to reading my stuff and are quite interested in what you’ve seen, or you’d like a reminder of what things are, this is the place to be.
Beginners guide to the Rewritten
What are the Rewritten?
The Rewritten are a corrupted faction in my sci-fi universe that spread a crystalline based corruption to others through sex. They generally operate through brute force and surprise tactics on populated but unsuspecting areas, and use sneakier infiltration techniques against more dangerous opponents who could present an armed threat.
What is a Czarite?
This - http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8327953/ is a normal Czarite, they are very happy, warm, friendly and charismatic creatures who thrive on love and friendships, all of them are herms and are capable of both mothering and fathering children with most species. They are extremely adaptable and surprisingly hardy creatures too. Generally are very well received and brilliant people to know. Czarites make excellent (if frisky) lovers and fantastic friends.
What is a Corrupted Czarite?
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8435803/ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12188268/
Otherwise known as a Controller, Corrupted Czarites are the above creature after being infected with the Rewritten’s infestation. They lose the ability to reproduce in all aspects and gain several other traits, including external testis and far larger sexual organs to accommodate their needs. They exist almost exclusively to spread their corruption and it generally completely consumes their life. Seeth and Plasia however are examples of Corrupted Czarites trying to defy this lifestyle.
What is Corruption, what does it do and how does it effect people?
The Corruption was originally created by someone as a distraction for a greater operation, but the Czarites sheer adaptive-ness to the corruption made the whole thing grow out of control. It is spread through sexual intercourse and is currently irreversible due to its growth into the nervous system and brain activity. Upon being infested, the victim will fall unconscious a few minutes after intercourse and will remain comatose until the process is complete. There are two degrees of corruption and the extend of which depends on the person and not the infector. Physical changes are dependant on the type as seen below, but all people infected will have their skin/flesh/fur changed to dark grey and their eyes usually change to a block purple colour.
1. Slaves – Weak willed or weak bodied people
People with low will-power or fragile bodies will be turned into slaves. Slaves are utterly mindless and function similarly to zombies, apart from the whole brain eating thing is replaced by sex instead. Slaves are controllable by Controllers and Nodes. All of their sensory information is available to Controllers as well. Slaves retain their gender and don’t have many physical changes, other than their skin and eye colour, and general demeanour.
2. Nodes – Strong willed and adaptable people.
People with stronger wills and more adaptable bodies will have more brain function intact after the transformation and will be turned into Nodes instead, Nodes are capable of thought and decisions but are still controllable by Controllers. They act as leaders for groups of Slaves and are larger and stronger than Slaves too. All nodes are herm versions of their formers selves. Nodes have increased size, strength and generally change to look more feminine to suit their new gender. Nodes are intelligent but still submissive to controllers and utterly committed to their cause.
3. Controllers – Exclusively corrupted Czarites.
Controllers are in charge of everything, only Czarites can become Controllers and all czarites who become Corrupted will be Controllers.
What are Marks? Why do Controllers desire them?
Marks are people who are Immune to the corruption, for reasons unknown, usually genetics or sheer luck. They cannot ever be corrupted by any means. They are highly sought after by Controllers due to the fact that they are rare and because of the Controllers nature desire to fuck uncorrupted people. For them, they experience far more pleasure from uncorrupted people than from their own kind, so to a Controller, a Mark is a sex slave who can provide tremendous amounts of pleasure at their will. Finding an attractive Mark who they actually like the look of… now that’s something they’d trade a million slaves for.
Thats all i can think of for now, but if you have any questions about anything i haven't answered yet, go right ahead.
I have written a catch up journal about what happens during chapters 9/10, as well as that, the Diego and Plasia story lines come together at chapter 11 anyway... i was supposed to write a lot more about Plasia but i plowed on into the storyline and got too caught up in it. IF, theres a lot of demand to see what happened to Plasia then i'll write the stories out rather than abridging them. Comment to let me know what you want/think.
As always people, thank you for reading my stuff, leaving a comment/favourite is the best way to let me know if you liked my stuff... and if the gooey butt secks give you a boner or a lady boner... you'd better press that fav button!
FAQ
Why can't Diego be corrupted?
He's a mark due to his species.
Can the corruption be reversed or removed?
No, its a very physical infection and currently completely permanent. The only way to truly fight it is by force of will.
Just how horny are Corrupted Czarites?
Very. Very fucking horny. If they could spend every minute of every day of the rest of their lives fucking their favourite victims and marks, they would.
How do the different slimes they produce work?
Corrupted Czarites produce 3/4 main types of slime/ooze. Saliva, lube, breast ooze (not all produce breast ooze) and cum. All are pretty oozy and gooey but they work slightly differently. Saliva is the least potent in terms of corruptive power and works mainly like it does with humans, aside from Plasia, who's neon blue saliva is far stronger. The lube slime is produced from the dick of the czarite and functions as natural lube, it is produced in very copious amounts when the corrupted czarite is fucking and makes a ton of mess, its corruptive potential is quite small however. The breast ooze (similar to milk i suppose, but its a little thicker than milk and a completely different colour/texture) is extremely corruptive and only certain Czarites produce it, usually the bigger breasted ones. Finally, the cum is by far the most potent corruptant the corrupted czarite has at her disposal and the arrival will usually signify the full corruption of the victim (unless they are a mark).
If only FA had folders...
I have a few questions about Czarites though.
- You say all Czarites are herms, but in all the pics I've seen (I haven't read any of the stories yet), they all have female bodies, a penis and no vaginas. That translates as either a transsexual female or a dickgirl in my book. Are they in fact supposed to have pussies, or do we just have different definitions of the word "Herm"?
- The bonegrowths on a Czarite's body (I think this is the best reference to date http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12184390/ ), are they always the same color (seems to be a universal black-ish brown most of the time) and in the same general places?
- What color is Czarite's (both non-Corrupted and Corrupted) sperm? It seems to be all over the place, but in general the same as their skin coloration. Also, does it glow, for either types?
- Do Czarites in fact breed within their own species? I'm assuming they do, but I'm getting some Asari from Mass Effect vibes whenever I hear "can mate and reproduce with most known species" and I'm curious about the mechanics of it.
Hope I'm not asking too many questions.
Not really, although they have most places to have carapace, it can vary. And the colour is always going to be dark for corrupted Czarites, unlike the normal kind who can have more varied colours, but they still have tints to their darker carapace that can vary.
Normal czarites sperm is usually white with a tint of their flesh colour to it. Corrupted Czarite's cum tends to be the same as their flesh entirely, and it does faintly glow.
Normal czarites do, yes, they are very similar to the ME Asari, the can both mother and father children with pretty much any other species but the children will always be Czarite in nature.
And not at all, if theres anything else you wish to know, just give me a shout.
I was actually thinking about getting a commission of my OC Andreas (you can see him as my avatar) enjoying the feminine aspects of a new Czarite lady, though I'm not sure who I'd go for yet.
Would you be okay with this? I would of course give you full credit for her race and link you in the description.
I haven't said "i'm never writing this" but the plot has moved so much further since then that i can't really see the point in going back and finishing it. I mean chapter 5 showed you the aftermath of what happened to Diego, do you really wanna read about the gangbang he had so badly?
Like i said, i am not saying "Never doing to do it.", more "I'm not sure when i'll do it."
But I'm also a rather perfectionist person, I'm picky about everything and even just to know there is a gap does annoy me somehow (yeah, that's my problem alone, I know), it's that bugging little spot of imperfection in a damn good thing!...and that's just sad somehow <_< I mean, you said it yourself, it's only the gangbang~ so how long would it take to write that down anyway *shrugs* to leave out a dramatic scene like this is also frustrating for a reader, maybe you don't feel the same cause you already know exacly what happened, after all you had planed to write that scene so you're familiar with the details while we have to sit here and wonder what cruel things they have done to the main-character, if it would be just a damn rape scene with a random side-char you will never see again, I wouldn't care much but imagine something like a superman comic where someone left out exacly all the pages that show a dramatic battle, all you get is the following chapter with superman beaten down in the dust because the cartoonist says "what?...he is still alive isn't he, that's all you need to know! the bad guy won somehow, dunno, just use your imagination...his enemy was Magneto so he had most likely pummeled him with some heavy metal object or something that way, why should I draw that, it's so obviously what happened isn't it?"
And this is pretty much the same to me you see <_< of course he was raped, how else would he end up immobilized with a belly full of rainbow jizz~ if writers would leave out everything that is "obviously" than some books would end up pretty small don't you think?
#2 you said that slaves turn grey in color, but the nodes and controllers seem to be more colorful. How does the coloration of nodes and controllers change upon corruption?
To answer your questions:
1. Holy fuck thank god NO - Azuri's are made of otherworldly materials and their body structure is not vulnerable to the corruption, they're not generally vulnerable to anything aside from raw damage. But that is a very good thing. If Azuri's could be corrupted, they'd literally be unstoppable rapists. Corrupted Czarites are hard enough to put down and they're no where near the same strength as the Azuri's.
2. Nodes and Controllers generally change into more toxic and dangerous looking colours, darker hues and deeper saturation. Leech for example used to be more of a light lime green colour but she's now that darker, more intimidating green. There isn't a set process to it however, already dark characters will likely stay roughly the same with slight hue changes.
It was more of a "thank god they're not! Imagine if they could be corrupted! They'd be a nightmare!" sort of thing, not angry at yourself in the slightest! :)
And have as many fantasies as you want! :)
See here for DA species: https://www.furaffinity.net/journal...../?#jid:4255687