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12 years ago
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ship-wreck
go to her journal and give her some critique as well (and enter to get free art from her!)
https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4902390/
Some wise old guy once said "Any fool can be given advice, but only the truly wise profit from it" (or something like that) I have been trying to improve my art work and looking at work from a year ago I've seen some improvement but I would like to continue to grow and improve. In order to improve, I need to know what needs to be practiced...in other words I need some critique. So I'm going to ask those watching me (or who just stumbled across my gallery) to offer me some help.
Those who post within the rules will be entered to win free art from me. I don't know how many people I will be drawing but I will be entering a person's name into the drawing once for every 2 points they earn. You earn one point for each critique point up to five (no points for repeats) and you get one point for properly replying in this journal.
To enter you must reply with the following:
1. 1-5 things you LIKE about my art work (must be equal to the number of things I need to improve)
2. 1-5 things you think I need to improve (must be equal to the number of things you liked)
3. Character reference
4. Pimp this journal by posting a journal linking here
5. Be watching me
example:
1. +I like how you draw foxes
+I like how you draw skunks
2. -improve how you draw penis
-improve the boobies
3. www.fakereference.com
4. www.fakejournal.com
5. I watch you sleep at night
Ok it's a weird example but you get it. The free art will depend on references, what I need to improve/practice and what ever I feel like drawing :p
THANK YOU ALL for your help, with any luck I will find a few things to focus on and can improve my work in the months to come.
ship-wreckgo to her journal and give her some critique as well (and enter to get free art from her!)
https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4902390/
Some wise old guy once said "Any fool can be given advice, but only the truly wise profit from it" (or something like that) I have been trying to improve my art work and looking at work from a year ago I've seen some improvement but I would like to continue to grow and improve. In order to improve, I need to know what needs to be practiced...in other words I need some critique. So I'm going to ask those watching me (or who just stumbled across my gallery) to offer me some help.
Those who post within the rules will be entered to win free art from me. I don't know how many people I will be drawing but I will be entering a person's name into the drawing once for every 2 points they earn. You earn one point for each critique point up to five (no points for repeats) and you get one point for properly replying in this journal.
To enter you must reply with the following:
1. 1-5 things you LIKE about my art work (must be equal to the number of things I need to improve)
2. 1-5 things you think I need to improve (must be equal to the number of things you liked)
3. Character reference
4. Pimp this journal by posting a journal linking here
5. Be watching me
example:
1. +I like how you draw foxes
+I like how you draw skunks
2. -improve how you draw penis
-improve the boobies
3. www.fakereference.com
4. www.fakejournal.com
5. I watch you sleep at night
Ok it's a weird example but you get it. The free art will depend on references, what I need to improve/practice and what ever I feel like drawing :p
THANK YOU ALL for your help, with any luck I will find a few things to focus on and can improve my work in the months to come.
Said right on it that not everyone would get chosen and that if you absolutely wanted one done commissions would still be open. Not trying to be a punk about it, just don't want anyone getting the idea that he's a slacker because he does work really hard at making his watchers happy.
Well, I really have to learn how Furaffinity works ^^'
And no, I can't ask him about commision, beacuse I can't have a paypal account yet. That's the reason why I asked him about art trade, which in my opinion is the best form of gettig pictures form other artists and at thesame time you also get something which you don't have to pay for.
+Your femboys always have really beautiful body shapes. (Might sound weird but I like the way their ribs look.)
+You've shown improvement and the ability to take constructive criticism in order to adapt.
+Your shading is usually spot on. You have a keen eye for it.
2. -You could work on drawing backgrounds or even suggested settings more.
-Challenge yourself! You usually just stick to what you know. Try doing something you think you'll stink at and you might suprise yourself with the results! (Example: Vaporeon)
-You should work on uploading in a more timely manner. Sometimes your work just sits there and drives me crazy!
3. You know my reference.
4. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11231880/
5. I watch you sleep at night.
(Don't actually enter me for the raffle please, I mainly did it to put in my personal opinion somewhere you couldn't hit me with a frying pan).
-More actual sex between characters would be good. I like porn
Feminine body shapes are well done
Good expressions
Needs improvement:
Actual snouts (elongated faces for more realism)
Masculine body shapes
Ref:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/11166234/
Journal:
https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4903530/
Watching:
Yes
+ You experiment with poses, and generally works well. There isn't a time when I see a pic from you and think, "there is no way their spine could bend like that," or, "wouldn't they fall over standing that way."
+ You try not to leave large corners of empty white space, especially while keeping the main focus of the picture in the center.
2- You generally only have one body type you draw people with. Everyone tends to have an hourglass figure, with the only difference in girls being in the breast and hip size.
- Stop shying away from feet. A lot of your art ends at the knees, which is kinda sad when it comes to your character dressed in armor you've taken a lot of time to drawn.
- The female anatomy. Generally, when you draw a female, either her nether regions are covered or you give the character a rather small slit. Granted, I'm a firm believer that something hidden makes it sexier, so I like the constant panties on. Still doesn't change the fact that, while you can do the male anatomy in so many different unique ways, your fully naked girls all look like they've never hit puberty.
3 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6963923/ (if i get picked, as usual, no showing naughty bits)
4 http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4903547/
+I really love your pencil work and your pencil shading. When it comes to sketch/pencil work you're probably my favorite artist in that category
+You do an excellent amount of detail in your work.
2:
-You really only do one position... full frontal profile. Almost every single one of your pieces have a sole character facing the viewer. Fiddle around with positions! Do shots with more characters, each one in a different position and at a different distance from the viewer (ya, I know, it won't be easy...)
-Your color isn't bad, but it lacks the shading depth and detail that your pencil sketches have. More specifically you don't do much with light, so a place that is blue is only one shade of blue in your art, as opposed to its shade being dependent on the light/shadow play on the area being looked at
3:
The only references I can use are all pieces I've commissioned from you...
4:
Shameless plug here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4906006/
1. I like your bondage artwork, beacuse it's very cute and contains a lot of nice positions and interesting bondage toys :) . I also like the type of ball gag without strips which you draws very often I think :) I also admire that you keeps good proportions of characters' bodies in opposite to me - I suck in proportions. And I like on your drawings which contains females - big, very big boobs :) Oh, and I
2. Well, in my opinion you should try doing more pictures in color. Maybe paints, colored pencils or digital coloring. Also most of your pictures would look better if there was a background - even simple one, but it's enough. And in my opinion you could draw more females - of course if you want, I'm not forcing you to anything :)
3. Well, I think it's a good reference http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11240548/
4. There you go https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/4907169/
5. Yes, I'm watching you
What you do well:
* Femboys. Yeah, no surprise, but you've got some very appealing effeminate males.
* Costume. Sometimes your clothes are pretty samey (you seem to really like skimpy bikinis -- not that there's anything wrong with that), but that's not because you're not good at different types of clothing. You can do superheroes, science fiction, fantasy, modern, harem, all sorts.
* Expression. Not just the face, either. Your poses are pretty fluid.
* Shading. You seem to have a pretty good sense of lighting.
What you could use work on:
* Body types. You really have only one. Males are slender, effeminate, and hourglass; females are slender, effeminate, and hourglass, but sometimes with very large breasts. You could stand to experiment more here.
* You like to cut off feet. I'm not sure why, because you seem to draw them well enough, but I noticed a lot of your pieces end at the ankle or mid-calf.
* Not really a weakness, but I'd like to see you do more pieces with backgrounds and/or color. I realize that's a lot more work, though.
* You're too good at sketching, and it makes me envious. :p