Dream Story 201 And New Story Idea With Questions
11 years ago
Dream Story 201This one's quite a short one cause I don't remember all the details about it. This one's about that I'm in some cathedral fighting some evil priest, and I end up defeating him with a giant wooden cross.
New Story Idea With Questions So yes, I have come up with another story but may need a little help with it because I have all these ideas swimming around in my head, but I cannot decide which idea to choose. So I thought I'd do a vote, I guess. Anyway, this story doesn't have a title yet (may need help with this one too), and....Sad to say that I've involved myself in the story again ^^; But this time's different Instead of being the main protagonist or a side character, I've made myself as the villain this time >:-3 And I transform once again into a hulking beast Seeing as how much quite a bit of you liked my hairless werewolf pic ( http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12128425/ ) I thought I'd make use of it for a story Now, here are a few ideas and questions:
The story itself is about that I'm the leader of a secret mafia group that manufactures these drugs that have the ability to transform people into part animal (you could say this idea of the story is based a bit off of Island of Dr. Moreau, and the one episode of Batman Beyond called, "Splicers"). The reason for this is because I wanted to prove that humans and animals can live in harmony...And to get a bit rich of course, due to the economy and crap-paying jobs.
Not many drugs have been released due to how limited and expensive the ingredients are to making it but the drug trade still has to be stopped. When overdosed with the drug, it will cause a very slow transformation process into a hairless version of the animal itself. So say that you overdose on the stuff and your favourite animal is a lemur. Instead of transforming into part-lemur, you would become a full lemur but hairless.
The reason I become a completely different animal-like being (some kind of werebeast) is because the formula that was made for me is a special one, and is sort of a test one to see what side effects this formula has, and to see if this one's more superior than the original formula. Speaking of side effects, the side effects for the drug itself (not my special drug) involves being very aggressive, attacking almost any living thing. While in my hairless werebeast form, I have absolute control (so you could say it's basically superior compared to the previous drug formula...With the only side effect being the extreme muscle growth XD).
** What should the main protagonist's name be? (They all start with "K" because as I was looking up random names, I shuffled to see which letter I could go with for name suggestions) **1. Kenner
2. Knox
3. Keldan
4. Kelven
5. Kenward
6. Kenway
** What should my hairless werewolf form look like? (I do not plan on adding any naughty bits like the bush and nips, sorry) **1. My human hair remaining on my head (like what was displayed in my art piece).
2. No human hair remaining on my head (so technically, bald).
** What should the story be like? **1. The setting takes place in a secret facility. The main character's role (his occupation is being a DEA agent) is to put my plans to a stop. For the part about why I have this drug trade, I would shy away from the truth that the formula was a failure. I would make excuses as to why things would go wrong. For example, there would be these 2 animal-like humans fighting each other. In reality they're really killing each other. In my mind, I would think they're just playing, and not even notice the fact that they're getting injured. Later, I would admit that I actually knew all along that the formula was a failure (but still think it's a complete success in my eyes), and was just shying away from the truth the entire time to make myself stay positive.
For the hairless werewolf transformation, one idea for it is to have me transform in a hallway as I'm hunting the main protagonist down for ruining my plans. The other idea of the transformation is to have me transform right in front of the main protagonist's eyes.
2. The setting takes place in a city. I'm with a group of friends (the main protagonist being one of them, and his occupation is some sort of detective. His job in the story is to figure out the cause of the animal-like humans to go on a rampage), and they don't find out about me being part of the mafia group till near the end of the story (and before I change into the hairless werewolf). So I would play along with my friends, and no one, not even viewers new to this story would figure out that I'm the villain.
And that's all the ideas I have so far....I feel like I'm missing something (this is why I should learn to take notes of my ideas instead of trying to remember them all XD).
hexen109
~hexen109
Honnestly, I'd love to see all of those in a story at some point... and really you should think about implementing them, let your creative waters flow! Also... you as a villain? You'll have to think about some really nasty business for character you to do in order to make the protagonist want to act.
MoonBeast-AR
~moonbeast-ar
OP
I am already doing something kind of nasty XD For when I change into my hairless werebeast form, I plan on killing the main protagonist.
MoonBeast-AR
~moonbeast-ar
OP
Plus, not all villains are really nasty for a hero to take action. The hero will only get cautious and act when need be.
hexen109
~hexen109
But the villain has to keep the hero's meaning to fight... well not always but the antagonist is supposed to cause conflict and pose a threat to the protagonist.
MoonBeast-AR
~moonbeast-ar
OP
True but not just the protagonist, it could be another character who's a friend of the protagonist's, or the entire universe itself, society, etc. For my villainous role, I caused harm to society, which would then make the character take action since he's an agent. But for doing harm to him, I would make him "play" with some of the animal-like humans in the facility, and he would take that as a threat, and get really cautious of me if something else happened. And when he attempts to do everything in his power to shut down my career, I would attempt to kill him so nothing happens to it, even if he attempted to call the FBI, or whatever (he can't anyway since the only way of connecting outside the facility is from a special satellite micro chip in the members of the facility, and their electronic devices. So since the character doesn't have one, he can't connect to a phone, computer, lock pad, etc., since he doesn't have a chip in himself that matches in the devices).
hexen109
~hexen109
Sounds cool, you should go for it!
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