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Two More Story Questions
11 years ago
Okay, so from last journal entry -> http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/5994881/ , I've shared a few ideas and asked a few questions for a new story of mine, where I'm the antagonist for a change. For the 1st question, did you guys want me to share my hairless werewolf transformation as a comic? Or as a piece that's similar to this? (by the way, I still need more votes for some of the questions from the previous entry XD) -> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4756464/
The other question ties with the 1st...For the transformation scene, how should it go? Here's what I have put in a document for each idea (I left the entire transformation sequences left out since I don't want to make this journal entry any longer, would rather keep the sequences a surprise, and the sequences aren't entirely finished):
- after I got shot by the main character in the gut and chest by a shotgun, character talks to his dying humanimal (that's one of the names I decide to give the animal-human hybrids) friend, then I get up slowly with the wound healing on its own, veins showing under the skin, my eye colour changing, and fangs, talons, and claws forming.
- I puke blood, then breathe heavy and giggle, "That really smart, urgh..."
- full transformation begins. During transformation, main character attempts to shoot me but there's no more ammo, so he resorts to throwing the shotgun at me, making me mad and go to chase him. I then collapse due to the pain of the transformation and finish the metamorphosis up.
- after holding the white knight of a humanimal held hostage and biting him on the neck vampire style, main character shoots me with the shotgun twice. 1st time making me let go, and the 2nd time on my gut & chest when I go to lunge at him.
- character and humanimal speak for a bit and humanimal gives remaining directions on how to get out before dying. He decides to stay and die on his own.
- character books it and makes his way to an area that the dying humanimal friend of his told him to go.
- I pop out of the room where I got shot. Reveals claws bursting out of my fingernails as I hold onto the door frame.
- I turn to direction that I feel character headed, and I limp down that direction, holding onto wounded chest & gut.
- character continues to make his way to room he was supposed to go.
- I continue limping in hallways. Vision begins to blur a bit with a heart beat sound happening.
- full transformation begins.
The other question ties with the 1st...For the transformation scene, how should it go? Here's what I have put in a document for each idea (I left the entire transformation sequences left out since I don't want to make this journal entry any longer, would rather keep the sequences a surprise, and the sequences aren't entirely finished):
Idea 1:- after I got shot by the main character in the gut and chest by a shotgun, character talks to his dying humanimal (that's one of the names I decide to give the animal-human hybrids) friend, then I get up slowly with the wound healing on its own, veins showing under the skin, my eye colour changing, and fangs, talons, and claws forming.
- I puke blood, then breathe heavy and giggle, "That really smart, urgh..."
- full transformation begins. During transformation, main character attempts to shoot me but there's no more ammo, so he resorts to throwing the shotgun at me, making me mad and go to chase him. I then collapse due to the pain of the transformation and finish the metamorphosis up.
Idea 2:- after holding the white knight of a humanimal held hostage and biting him on the neck vampire style, main character shoots me with the shotgun twice. 1st time making me let go, and the 2nd time on my gut & chest when I go to lunge at him.
- character and humanimal speak for a bit and humanimal gives remaining directions on how to get out before dying. He decides to stay and die on his own.
- character books it and makes his way to an area that the dying humanimal friend of his told him to go.
- I pop out of the room where I got shot. Reveals claws bursting out of my fingernails as I hold onto the door frame.
- I turn to direction that I feel character headed, and I limp down that direction, holding onto wounded chest & gut.
- character continues to make his way to room he was supposed to go.
- I continue limping in hallways. Vision begins to blur a bit with a heart beat sound happening.
- full transformation begins.
hexen109
~hexen109
Can't you just incorporate the first idea on the second one? You seem to have developed a longer and more cohesive story with the second one but the horror and gore from the first option give something for the readers to choke at for a bit, and maybe to be afraid of your villain self.
MoonBeast-AR
~moonbeast-ar
OP
I could but I dunno ^^; I'll think about it though.
