So question for you folks
10 years ago
So I got bored and a friend was sharing a story he was writing and I liked the style so I had some time to I whipped up something similar. The. shared this with some folks on Skype but not a whole lot of feed back but had a bit of an idea so first off how do you folks like this style of writing
We met in the middle and that is where things get a bit hazy. I can remember the feel of his fists as he hit me. I can remember the feel of him when my fists met his flesh. His smell was something I will never forget, sharp, heavy, musky and dominate, I hated and loved it all at the same time. I can remember the taste of my blood when he hit my nose, a quick lick to clear off what flowed down to paint my lips. I could see the surprise on his face when I bust his lip with a hard right. A glance down and I could see his dick throbbing, dripping, mine was doing the same.
I remember thinking I had to do something, get some kind of advantage so I did the first thing that came to my mind. I grabbed his dick. Man, that look in his eyes, rage, hate, surprise, and fucking lust. That shit turned him on. Turned me on too. He returned the favor and I don’t really remember if it was me or if it was him that did it first, but one of us started jacking the other off. Really pumping that dick you know. I mean fuck, if we were punching with that kind of power we were jacking each other off then this fight would have been over with. Instead we were beating each other off hard enough to send out balls bouncing. I mean have you ever had a guy jack you off so hard it felt like he was punching you in the nuts. That was what we were doing to one another. Then, fuck I think it was me but I used that dick as a handle to start punching him while pulling him in close. He grunted, and he spat on me when I did it. Blood, spittle, just hmm, fuck it was hot. Then he returned the favor and I swear I felt him punch my spine. I nearly came right there.
Back and forth we staggered, dicks leaking bodies grunting and just fucking hurting each other while trying to make the other guy just blow. I am not sure when, but we were suddenly chest to chest, more holding one another then really fighting, but still jacking that dick we held for everything we had.
“I hate you.”
“I fucking hate you.”
Then we kissed.
Well, ok kiss is a strong word. My lips hit his and his hit mine and then we were biting, sucking, tugging, and ripping at one another while our dicks were just about to blow. That is when the bastard hit me, with his knee. Right in the balls. The balls, fucker. I came. I mean fuck, I came harder and longer then I have ever done in my life. I broke the kiss and screamed like a girl. Not proud of it, but still. I came like a slut for him.
Then I remember we were on the ground, he was above me, eyes drilling into me and he said something. I don’t remember what it was but it was prideful, confident, and congratulatory. Then he flipped me on my back and rammed his dick into my ass. Gods, I never got so hard again so fucking fast in my life. I mean zero to aching again in 2.3 seconds flat. He slapped me hard and I slapped him back. The crowd, I didn’t hear anymore. All I could focus on was that mean in my ass. How hard he was pounding me, how much I fucking hated and loved him at the same time. It was so wrong but so right. I growled, well as much as bunny could and I slapped him back, hard, then I grabbed his nipples and then that fucker was howling, and cumming. Gods, he dumped a fucking gallon in me. So I hauled my legs back and kicked him right in the face. Bitch popped out and rolled onto his ass and he hit me in the face with his still erupting cum. He tasted great. I hate him for that. After that I don’t remember much. Some cheering, some shouting then I was back on my feet and so was he, still hard. So was I. He smirked, and I returned it. Then we charged again, I wasn’t done with this fucker, even with his seed dripping down my legs and out of my ass.
It isn't done but is a good example of the style. So you folks want to see more of it? Maybe even pay for something like it for yourself? Like 5 bucks gets you two pages or something on a single even or match? Anyways thoughts ideas molestations?
We met in the middle and that is where things get a bit hazy. I can remember the feel of his fists as he hit me. I can remember the feel of him when my fists met his flesh. His smell was something I will never forget, sharp, heavy, musky and dominate, I hated and loved it all at the same time. I can remember the taste of my blood when he hit my nose, a quick lick to clear off what flowed down to paint my lips. I could see the surprise on his face when I bust his lip with a hard right. A glance down and I could see his dick throbbing, dripping, mine was doing the same.
I remember thinking I had to do something, get some kind of advantage so I did the first thing that came to my mind. I grabbed his dick. Man, that look in his eyes, rage, hate, surprise, and fucking lust. That shit turned him on. Turned me on too. He returned the favor and I don’t really remember if it was me or if it was him that did it first, but one of us started jacking the other off. Really pumping that dick you know. I mean fuck, if we were punching with that kind of power we were jacking each other off then this fight would have been over with. Instead we were beating each other off hard enough to send out balls bouncing. I mean have you ever had a guy jack you off so hard it felt like he was punching you in the nuts. That was what we were doing to one another. Then, fuck I think it was me but I used that dick as a handle to start punching him while pulling him in close. He grunted, and he spat on me when I did it. Blood, spittle, just hmm, fuck it was hot. Then he returned the favor and I swear I felt him punch my spine. I nearly came right there.
Back and forth we staggered, dicks leaking bodies grunting and just fucking hurting each other while trying to make the other guy just blow. I am not sure when, but we were suddenly chest to chest, more holding one another then really fighting, but still jacking that dick we held for everything we had.
“I hate you.”
“I fucking hate you.”
Then we kissed.
Well, ok kiss is a strong word. My lips hit his and his hit mine and then we were biting, sucking, tugging, and ripping at one another while our dicks were just about to blow. That is when the bastard hit me, with his knee. Right in the balls. The balls, fucker. I came. I mean fuck, I came harder and longer then I have ever done in my life. I broke the kiss and screamed like a girl. Not proud of it, but still. I came like a slut for him.
Then I remember we were on the ground, he was above me, eyes drilling into me and he said something. I don’t remember what it was but it was prideful, confident, and congratulatory. Then he flipped me on my back and rammed his dick into my ass. Gods, I never got so hard again so fucking fast in my life. I mean zero to aching again in 2.3 seconds flat. He slapped me hard and I slapped him back. The crowd, I didn’t hear anymore. All I could focus on was that mean in my ass. How hard he was pounding me, how much I fucking hated and loved him at the same time. It was so wrong but so right. I growled, well as much as bunny could and I slapped him back, hard, then I grabbed his nipples and then that fucker was howling, and cumming. Gods, he dumped a fucking gallon in me. So I hauled my legs back and kicked him right in the face. Bitch popped out and rolled onto his ass and he hit me in the face with his still erupting cum. He tasted great. I hate him for that. After that I don’t remember much. Some cheering, some shouting then I was back on my feet and so was he, still hard. So was I. He smirked, and I returned it. Then we charged again, I wasn’t done with this fucker, even with his seed dripping down my legs and out of my ass.
It isn't done but is a good example of the style. So you folks want to see more of it? Maybe even pay for something like it for yourself? Like 5 bucks gets you two pages or something on a single even or match? Anyways thoughts ideas molestations?
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Commission wise, heck, I'd go for one if I had the money.