Critique Raffle!
10 years ago
If you wish to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first invent the universe - Carl Sagan
I posted a journal about this a little over a week ago, and I've decided to go through with it. ^^
Leave critique on a recent story
I'm using a wide definition of critique here, so you can pretty much say anything as you explain why. Your comment can be as long or short as you please, but for it to count towards this, I have to know what makes you feel that way. Additionally, you don't have to point out something positive. I'm just as concerned with what I've done wrong as what I've done right.
For the sake of the drawing, a recent story is anything posted within the last two months. I will do the drawing once a month on the first, so the first one will be in July. That means that anything posted on stories from May and June will be eligible for that one. Additionally, comments are only removed from the drawing pool when the story falls out of the two month window. So, posts on stories I put up in June can win in both the July and August drawings. Finally, critique left before this announcement will be counted retroactively.
A free 2.5k word commission. Normal commission rules apply, however.
TL;DR: Leave constructive comments on my stories and potentially win one
NOTE: This is not me saying I don't appreciate general comments on my things. It's just a way to offer something in return for helping me improve. I really enjoying reading what you guys have to say, and if you don't feel comfortable with leaving criticism, that's perfectly alright. ^^ I'd still love to hear from you.
How to enter
Leave critique on a recent story
I'm using a wide definition of critique here, so you can pretty much say anything as you explain why. Your comment can be as long or short as you please, but for it to count towards this, I have to know what makes you feel that way. Additionally, you don't have to point out something positive. I'm just as concerned with what I've done wrong as what I've done right.
For the sake of the drawing, a recent story is anything posted within the last two months. I will do the drawing once a month on the first, so the first one will be in July. That means that anything posted on stories from May and June will be eligible for that one. Additionally, comments are only removed from the drawing pool when the story falls out of the two month window. So, posts on stories I put up in June can win in both the July and August drawings. Finally, critique left before this announcement will be counted retroactively.
What you can win
A free 2.5k word commission. Normal commission rules apply, however.
TL;DR: Leave constructive comments on my stories and potentially win one
NOTE: This is not me saying I don't appreciate general comments on my things. It's just a way to offer something in return for helping me improve. I really enjoying reading what you guys have to say, and if you don't feel comfortable with leaving criticism, that's perfectly alright. ^^ I'd still love to hear from you.

enmesarra
~enmesarra
Are you still doing this?

Vic Waite
~victorthemaker
OP
Not anymore unfortunately. X3


Well, I'm going to keep reading your work no matter what. Interesting stuff

Vic Waite
~victorthemaker
OP
Awesome ^^ Be sure to let me know if you find something you really like