Story concept/offer. Opinions?
10 years ago
General
So I'm thinking of bring back an old idea of mine, one that I had a lot of fun with but that I never considered for a commission-style deal. Call it a "Gauntlet" if you will. A custom made framework story, set up in a particular way so that one person's character can take what I call The Challenge.
A simple example of where this will go:
Our story begins with a bar. Dim, crowded and a bit on the seedy side, if one has to be truthful. But the bar itself isn't the point of interest. What is important is the poster hanging in a back nook, vaguely illuminated by a single bare bulb. It's mildly torn around the edges and has seen better days, but still clearly legible and easy enough to understand.
The poster has a considerable amount of text and an illustration at the top of a Griffon in flight, a coiled serpentine Dragon below, and what appears to be a Minotaur (very nude and very male) standing astride the Dragon with his arms crossed. The text reads as follows: "Salutations, adventurers! Bored of your every day existence? Looking for fame, fortune and excitement? Or perhaps you're looking to have the sort of sexual encounters you'd normally only fantasize about?
Then welcome to the world of Dungeons & Debauchery! Our real-time role playing events are custom tailored to your own personal interests, from the high-tech to the medieval, with a wide range of exciting packages provided for reasonable prices.
Looking for an adventure in Space, with busty Alien seductresses or ravishing Tentacle Beasts? We've got it. Looking to play the brave Knight or the virginal Mage, hoping to save the damsel from some menacing beast (or be the damsel being "menaced")? We are here to serve! Or, perhaps you're looking for something a little more perverse and a lot messier?
Take the Fantasy Fuck Challenge! Sign a binding contract that states you won't back out, and our services will provide you with a marathon stream of well endowed and lusty fantasy partners, really and willing to fill your needs and body in unspeakable ways. No backing out once you're going, though! You're as much there for their pleasure as they are for yours. Give it a try, if you dare..."
Below all of that text, a final box contains a warning: "Warning: FFC, while 100% health screened and safe, has an almost 100% guarantee of: Pregnancy, multiple penetration, possible bondage burns/scrapes, aching, soreness and difficulty walking. Binding contract cannot be broken; once engaged all parties much reach satisfaction. Lubricant and special amenities provided on request."
At the very bottom of the poster is a "Take One" row of slotted tabs, with only two or three remaining. Each tab sports a phone number, for a Mr. J. Hord, Proprietor.
__________________
How would this work as a commission? Simple: An "applicant", either the commissioner or their character, would fill out a simple form:
Name:
Species:
Gender:
Setting:
ReOrganizer:
Additional Amenities:
Number of Participants:
All Kinks Permitted?:
Pregnancy Expected/Allowed/Wanted?:
Helpers:
In Bondage?:
Prejudices?:
For reference: Helpers would simply be "Yes" or "No". They'd be side-characters, fluffers and fuck-buddies who would show up every few partners for clean-up and help. Prejudices would be possible species, races, etc. you'd prefer avoided (Don't like Reptiles? No reptiles. Etc. Don't like Elves? No Elves.) And ReOrganizer...Well, it depends on the level of realism you want. ReOrganizer is a sort of "Magic MacGuffin" meant to allow play with partners that, in all fairness, would kill a human man or woman on penetration. Let's just say Old ReO evens the odds.
From there, I'd craft a framework story to set things up and then an initial encounter. Here's the deal, though:
I write as much as I want on each playmates or group of playmates, and you pay only $15 per "session" so to speak. So you could do it as an episodic deal, or let me write and I'd give you batches depending on how many you wanted to go for. Basically it's a flat $15 for each block of the story, which is a steep deal given normal writing prices.
The one catch? You'd roll digital dice to decide how many sessions your character can expect to go through. I've had someone during a long-term RP roll up sixty-five sessions. That...Is a lot of fucking.
So it's an ambitious endeavor, and one I'm interested in expanding on. If someone is interested, they can let me know. I see this being a lot of fun, and there's no expectation to FINISH the whole Challenge, just to pay for the slots/individual sessions as short commissions as part of a whole. If it does get finished, though? Again, that is a LOT of fucking.
Any interest? Seem like a fun idea? Hit me up.
A simple example of where this will go:
Our story begins with a bar. Dim, crowded and a bit on the seedy side, if one has to be truthful. But the bar itself isn't the point of interest. What is important is the poster hanging in a back nook, vaguely illuminated by a single bare bulb. It's mildly torn around the edges and has seen better days, but still clearly legible and easy enough to understand.
The poster has a considerable amount of text and an illustration at the top of a Griffon in flight, a coiled serpentine Dragon below, and what appears to be a Minotaur (very nude and very male) standing astride the Dragon with his arms crossed. The text reads as follows: "Salutations, adventurers! Bored of your every day existence? Looking for fame, fortune and excitement? Or perhaps you're looking to have the sort of sexual encounters you'd normally only fantasize about?
Then welcome to the world of Dungeons & Debauchery! Our real-time role playing events are custom tailored to your own personal interests, from the high-tech to the medieval, with a wide range of exciting packages provided for reasonable prices.
Looking for an adventure in Space, with busty Alien seductresses or ravishing Tentacle Beasts? We've got it. Looking to play the brave Knight or the virginal Mage, hoping to save the damsel from some menacing beast (or be the damsel being "menaced")? We are here to serve! Or, perhaps you're looking for something a little more perverse and a lot messier?
Take the Fantasy Fuck Challenge! Sign a binding contract that states you won't back out, and our services will provide you with a marathon stream of well endowed and lusty fantasy partners, really and willing to fill your needs and body in unspeakable ways. No backing out once you're going, though! You're as much there for their pleasure as they are for yours. Give it a try, if you dare..."
Below all of that text, a final box contains a warning: "Warning: FFC, while 100% health screened and safe, has an almost 100% guarantee of: Pregnancy, multiple penetration, possible bondage burns/scrapes, aching, soreness and difficulty walking. Binding contract cannot be broken; once engaged all parties much reach satisfaction. Lubricant and special amenities provided on request."
At the very bottom of the poster is a "Take One" row of slotted tabs, with only two or three remaining. Each tab sports a phone number, for a Mr. J. Hord, Proprietor.
__________________
How would this work as a commission? Simple: An "applicant", either the commissioner or their character, would fill out a simple form:
Name:
Species:
Gender:
Setting:
ReOrganizer:
Additional Amenities:
Number of Participants:
All Kinks Permitted?:
Pregnancy Expected/Allowed/Wanted?:
Helpers:
In Bondage?:
Prejudices?:
For reference: Helpers would simply be "Yes" or "No". They'd be side-characters, fluffers and fuck-buddies who would show up every few partners for clean-up and help. Prejudices would be possible species, races, etc. you'd prefer avoided (Don't like Reptiles? No reptiles. Etc. Don't like Elves? No Elves.) And ReOrganizer...Well, it depends on the level of realism you want. ReOrganizer is a sort of "Magic MacGuffin" meant to allow play with partners that, in all fairness, would kill a human man or woman on penetration. Let's just say Old ReO evens the odds.
From there, I'd craft a framework story to set things up and then an initial encounter. Here's the deal, though:
I write as much as I want on each playmates or group of playmates, and you pay only $15 per "session" so to speak. So you could do it as an episodic deal, or let me write and I'd give you batches depending on how many you wanted to go for. Basically it's a flat $15 for each block of the story, which is a steep deal given normal writing prices.
The one catch? You'd roll digital dice to decide how many sessions your character can expect to go through. I've had someone during a long-term RP roll up sixty-five sessions. That...Is a lot of fucking.
So it's an ambitious endeavor, and one I'm interested in expanding on. If someone is interested, they can let me know. I see this being a lot of fun, and there's no expectation to FINISH the whole Challenge, just to pay for the slots/individual sessions as short commissions as part of a whole. If it does get finished, though? Again, that is a LOT of fucking.
Any interest? Seem like a fun idea? Hit me up.
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