XCOM: The Known Enemy - Group Project Completed Draft!
9 years ago
Phew, this gave me a buzz to finally put to bed and produce a finished draft of. But yis, as promised in my last journal and primarily for those that were involved in it, here's a finished and compiled draft of 'XCOM: The Known Enemy'. It weighs in at 28 A4 pages in total counting the cover I put together, so is a pretty substantial read. Following feedback, I'll be giving it on final editing pass for corrections to be made and then pushing out onto my gallery and into the hands of those involved. And as stated, anything up to the epilogue has had ample time to be given feedback upon and I'm grateful to those that did, so apart from any grammar corrections to be made, any critical character detail I've missed and needs to be added, and any tightening up of structure I do during the final pass, it can all be counted as pretty much final. The epilogue has only been finalised today so I'm happy to make greater tweaks and additions to that.
So yeah, please let me know what you think! It was certainly a challenge to work with so many characters, more than I've ever done so before, but a lot of fun too.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/gb1904jso.....Draft.pdf?dl=0
So yeah, please let me know what you think! It was certainly a challenge to work with so many characters, more than I've ever done so before, but a lot of fun too.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/gb1904jso.....Draft.pdf?dl=0
Every character looks so alive and the action is already in the introduction! Well done drawing shark!
It feels awe- and hope-inspiring. Well done
-Dragonspike16
Before you finalize it there was a couple of minor typos I had sent to you in a note around the middle of June. Can you take a look?
Please let me know as projects come up!