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UPDATE
UPDATE
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You can now get
'BLFC Room Party' AND
'Fitting In' AND
'The Big Deposit'
in one combo-pack, at a bargain price, >>>HERE<<<~
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NEWER CTF BOOKS RELEASED IN 2023!
The journal you're reading is from 2016 and is all about 'Fitting In', my snakecock novel, but this is an update from 2023. Check out my two latest naughty novellas - 'Sync Sin' and 'Summer Studies' - both full of snakes and CTF, here:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/53159790/
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UPDATE: READ A HUGE SAMPLE OF THE STORY HERE: www.furaffinity.net/view/21960808
UPDATE TWO: Read ANOTHER sample of the story here:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/22224204/ (this sample has way more sexy bits than the first, just FYI - the full book has 20x more!)
UPDATE THREE: Read ANOTHER sample of the story, here:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/38775014/ (this sample has even more TFs than the second one did!)
UPDATE FOUR: Read YET ANOTHER sample of the story, here:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/44225403/ (The largest free sample yet! A fetishy feast!)
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PRESENTING THE LARGEST, MOST SEX-FILLED STORY I'VE EVER WRITTEN (AND THE BIGGEST I HAVE EVER SEEN):
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What You Need To know, Short Version:
Brand new erotic story, inspired by Rhylithian concepts! (And my own twisted depravity!)
An orgy over-run with a metamorphic infection!
A Cavalcade of Cocksnakes!
Unending Transformation!
Conjoinments Galore! (Cocksnake-centric ones!)
This Is What the Main Characters Look Like, Naked!! (Do not click this, minors!! I MEAN IT)
Examples of just SOME of the other TFs:
Case I: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21565369/
Case II: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/28595393/
Case IVc: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21650895/
Case VII: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21695336/
Case VIIIa: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21769836/
Case VIIIb: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/51815095/
Case IXa: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/27222593/
Case Xb: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/29342470/
Case ???: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/47805484/
Case XII: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/49213867/
OVER 140,000 WORDS (approx 200 pages) IN 25+ DELICIOUS, DEVIANT SCENES
THIS EPIC-NOVEL-LENGTH BEAST HAS BEEN CUT UP INTO SIX ~SENSUAL~ SEGMENTS, FOR YOUR CONVENIENCE!
IT CAN ALL BE YOURS FOR THE LOW, LOW PRICE OF THREE DOLLARS (OR MORE, IF YOU FEEL LIKE IIITTT)!! 8D
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MORE INFO FOR YOUR EYES AND ALSO YOUR BRAIN:
The story revolves around Pylt and Poke, conjoined siblings; a gargoyle girl and her brother, a snake.. who also happens to be quite phallic and lives within her body! They're fairly shy, but all that will change when they're told about a very inclusive, very intense party happening very soon...!
It begins as a slice of life tale focusing on Pylt and Poke. You spend a nice 30K with them, and then the last 110,000 is all orgy!
But what's the content in it, you ask? Well, it's TF, snakecocks, conjoinment, changing into a snake, sexual metamorphosis, merging, shaftserpents, multi-dick, excessive cum, cum drinking, cum bathing, taurs, openings in non-standard places, slithering reptilian sex organs, cumTF, liquid shifting, multi-fur, unbirthing, cockvore, latex, Master/pet, blindfolding, ophidian penises
And what about the species? Mostly just the main gargoyle and the main snake, and then dozens and dozens of OTHER snakes, if you know what I mean!
But, since you asked, I'll tell you. But keep in mind, most of these have rather minor appearances, and others have blink-and-you'll-miss-them roles, but: Swan, otter, zebra, lemur, ocelot, moose, naga, drake, dragon, lizard, goat, salamander, wyvern, warthog, frog, sheep, lion, tiger, bear, red panda, raccoon, chipmunk, squirrel, crow, dolphin, buffalo, wasp, beetle, grasshopper, orca, wallaby, kangaroo, dhole, dingo, fox, deer, wolf, elk, badger, kitsune, hippo, gryphon, bat, clydesdale, mouse, cow.
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QUOTES FROM THOSE WHO HAVE BEEN EXPOSED:
Rhylith "Jesus Ame, could have warned me about how hot that finale was, I'm not even finished reading half of it and I was squirming in painfully restricted, embarrassing awkwardness at the grocery store after reading a bit of it on my phone."
9Delta wrote this journal about it: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/8409274/
Taonas-Deridran "I just finished it and ooooooooh boyyyy do I love this story ^.^ I had to finish it. I couldn't think of anything else but that story, and I had to know how it was going to end."
Prostap "Ame's story is great and worth every one of your pennies! - Inside this story you'll find glorious amounts of smut, which Ame marvelously manages to keep interesting and new the whole time. - His style of writing also keeps a very nice, sophisticated tone throughout despite all the messy depravity you'll find, making reading it all the more enjoyable!Also $6 for 140000 words of quality kinky porn is just stealing! GET IT NOW! XD"
SSj3Mewtwo "It's a fetish tale, of course. But it's presented differently than the usual fap fodder on sites like FA. All of the usual stories that have similar content are one-shotters. Ame's work here is a unique and different approach to have it be a long-form and slice-of-life piece, with characters that can actually be identified with. - After the slice-of-life (with a little of its own erotica) there comes what fans of merging and erotic TF would definitely call the... the 'meat' of the piece, which involves... well, it involves a LOT, to be not spoilery. But, if odd TF and merging is what you want, you're definitely getting it."
Aubrin "An awesomely naughty romp from one of the best cocksmiths around!"
0-kado-0 "It'll help you cum, for a nominal sum! =D"~
WHAT PEOPLE ARE SAYING ABOUT THIS AMETHYSTINE PERSON:
Amaranth "I'm not a human anymore. I have transcended. Amethystine destroyed my flesh prison and released my spirit. I'm one with the universe now."
ShadowFenris "I've always enjoyed Ame's writing style, and the concepts that he puts into his works. Whether it's a silly little short done for a friend, or a fully fleshed out (forgive the potential puns there lol) story, his work has always been creative and fun to read."
Echoen "Some of the best written smut you'll read."
TwilightMaster/
DragonFlayer "Amethystine has delivered some of the most delightful erotic writing in the fandom, with good pacing and interesting fetish choices, his stories will certainly thrill and excite you!"
Sovandar "Awesome and alliterative, Ame's amazingly arousing authorial activities are always actively anticipated! :D "A mysterious fan was heard to say: "A quote? Sure! I have to pay you back for all the times you made me cum with your writing anyway, lol."
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Rhylith hired me to write, but HE JUST COULDN'T GET ME TO STOP! FOR THE ENTIRETY OF SEPTEMBER (or Serpentember), I CRAFTED THE COCK-SNAKE-IEST ROMP YOU EVER WILL SEE, and now he and I are passing the savings onto yyooooooouuuuuuu~~~~!
If you've ever wanted to tip me for cool/sexy things I've done in the past, NOW IS THE TIME!
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About the length:
Each of the 'six sensual segments' is about 30 pages. Most of the 25+ scenes throughout the tale range from about 3K to 7K of carnal lust.
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Did you know: 'The Lord of the Rings: The Return of the King' was a paltry 131,000 words?
Were you aware: Stephen King's 'The Dark Tower: Song of Susannah' was also a MERE 131,000 words?
How much did you pay for THOSE, in book and or in movie form? MUCH more than I'm asking, surely!
And I bet no one ever came from reading those two books. Not as many times as my book will make you, anyway!
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TXT, PDF, RTF & Epub Formats Included!
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Buy now! >>>HERE<<<
*bows down and receives it like a medal from your hyper-hung-highness*
But, uh, first: "How much did you pay for THOSE, in book and or in movie form? Not as much as I'm asking, surely!"
You may have said this backwards.
-Ahem!-
That aside, while the book's contents aren't really my cup of tea (I am, unfortunately, terribly gay), I shall have to purchase a copy. I learned a lot from studying your way with words, and still do to this day! Plus, making a sex scene last for over 100,000 words is incredibly impressive.
Now to decide if I'm also going to be purchasing a copy for my boyfriend, who is not terribly gay and may rival you in levels of sheer kink.
Anyway, imma likely grab it too. Duh. Amethystine's writing at this scale, gotta be fun.
Speaking on comparisons to established media and the prices thereof, I had also meant to draw comparisons to the Amazon-Kindle-Store and the amount of smut on there, where they charge 3-6 bucks for, like.. 10-20 pages of material. Booooo! I'm a much better deal!
The idea of you buying a copy, despite your lack of affinity for the M/F parts, means a lot to me, TB! Thank you so much! :}
Hopefully you'll like the more M/M bits (I should have said that there's some in there, somewhere in my journal). Even if the guys might sometimes [always, I guess] end up with a pussy, thanks to the way the TFs go. :}
And ohhhhh, you'd get/give a copy to Corinoch? That'd be awesome. :} I've always thought he was a cool kinkster, out there in the FA wilds!
Also, I have had YOUR STORY OPEN IN A TAB NEXT TO MY FA INBOX FOR MONTHS NOW, ARGH. That story you did for Zsisron, with the Seviper and the Keldeo. I refuse to let it fade from my mind before I actually read it.. and its sequel, now, too, I saw! I got halfway through it one time and was thoroughly enjoying it, I just got a bit busy with... well, writing three novels' worth of TF content, I guess! Haha :}===<
Anyway, thanks for dropping by, it means a lot, after I said I'd read your work and then stalled out on that immediately. >__>
'Tis true, your works are an inherently better deal than the likes of Chuck Tingle's "Scary Stories To Tingle Your Butt" and "Slammed In The Butthole By My Concept Of Linear Time". Though I will have to check one of those out sometime, they sound hilarious.
You areeee welcome! You are, indirectly, a mentor of in the art of writing. There is plenty for me to learn. x] And I am certain the M/M components will be very much titillating. As far as ending up with a pussy goes, I have a story I'm going to work on that involves just that!
As far as the story goes - take your time! I have improved vastly since then, but that particular story is still unique in that it takes place across the longest time frame of all my hypnosis/corruption pieces. Albeit it's a little short considering that! I hope you do enjoy it when you finish it however~
A mentor? Me? D'awww shucks. *dips snout, bashful, blushing* I'm sure I could learn from you too, or any writer out here. I just need to find time to read others, and I will thusly be enriched! I will absorb all your tricks, I am an author blob. o__o
Or something.
Anyway, yes, I'm sure Lord of the Cockrings has at least been used once before as a joke title of a supposed and/or fictional porn parody, if not a very real one.
And yeah, Tingle is the one who gets all the press / notoriety, and his stuff is actually meant to be good, but as far as I can tell, it's good in its purposeful badness. Not bad writing, just insane ideas. I like insane ideas, but, well.. he's doing it to be obtuse! But that's fine.
Still, starting in April 2014, I've been slowly exploring the seedy smutty underbelly of Amazon (wow that's a good image, since the actual amazon is a huge swampy river basin anyway), picking out the most deviant things I can find and reading them. Or rather, the things that actually appeal to me amid the sea of other, not-quite-my-fetish stuff. Some of it's pretty good, but it's mostly terrible, but I feel like I've at least learned a few things to avoid.
But, yeah, I gotta read more from you. As soon as I finish the small pile of commissions that amassed while I worked/finished work on this monster above us
~Please let me know if you end up getting this one and/or sharing it with Corinoch! You two can share a copy ONLY UNTIL the moocher realizes he's enjoying it enough to buy it himself. >:} Haha
You are a skilled enough craftsman of words that I indeed consider you a mentor of sorts! Don't think doing cute, blushy things will make me change my mind. -folds his arms stubbornly!- I am not certain you have much to gain from my writing, but I am flattered nonetheless! And reading is enriching fun.
I've never actually read any of Tingle's books! I may publish one of my own sometime along those lines, but if I do it shall be a legitimate story of love and/or kink. You know how it is.
I was not aware of Amazon's smutty underbelly! You shall have to introduce me once I've purchased your book. Which will happen after work today! I may simply pay double the price for a copy. My decision shall be made clear in twelve hours. :D
I tried to show someone else said underbelly only a few weeks ago, and it resulted in me saying "hrmm, I could have sworn there was more worth pointing out here, but all I seem to be able to relate now is the horror stories of the terrible writing I've found! D: "
And, I look forward to seeing what your decision will be. Have a good work day!
Ah, the horror stories of smut. I know it well. Mostly because sometimes I browse the story section of FA.
Is it bad that I still wanna say your BF could maybe buy his own copy if he likes it enough from what you show him? >__>; But since you did 15, I shouldn't! But I've said it now anyway, because I'm a horrible, greedy person. u_u
I feel like badly written stuff is okay to see on FA, for free, but when it's on amazon, and you've paid for it, it's like.. come onnnn. :P
But yeah, I get you with dental fees. I'm lucky enough (hah) that my f̶o̶r̶c̶e̶d̶ ̶s̶l̶a̶v̶e̶r̶y̶ military job has a free dental plan. On the flip side, they pay me $560 per month for 47 hour weeks... That's about 400 of your US dollaroos! And my country is widely considered to be one of the most expensive ones out there. D:
Actually fun fact: I'm going for a wisdom tooth extraction next week. >__>;
What I can probably do to help you, if you're still hurting by whatever your deadline is, is to open up emergency commissions and donate half the proceeds to you. uwu
I mean, it really depends! Some of it is quite literally just a copy/paste from a roleplay session - which, okay, fine, I did that once too. I needed something to upload, haha. But there are transcriptions of roleplays that are really nothing more than:
A: *puts his cock in*
B: *moans*
A: *starts moving his cock*
B: *moans louder*
For the record, I'm not really calling anyone out. If anyone reads this who posts this kinda stuff... Sorry. XD
And yeah, posted RPs are... well, they are what they are, heh. Depends on the people RPing. You'll need two good writers, at the least, in that case.
Speaking of RPs, though, once or twice, I took an RP I had done and story-converted it, adding some text and rejiggering the existing text to be the right tense and stuff. I need to finish that for one of my stories, in fact. I made a part 1 out of the first half of a long RP, never quite got through the tedious conversion of the second half.
Oh, and I'm Canadian, which is like.. 400USD = 500CAND, or so. In any case, I could see that it was real low. X__X
And, ouch: good luck with the wisdom teeth thing. O:
$25 just seems like a fair price for a book of that length. Kind of the older price, before books started to cost $50 and basically were impossible to afford unless you just went to the library all the time. Which I did. >__>
I still have no formal English knowledge, believe it or not. Didn't pay a lick of attention in English class, no idea what the classes of words are. My grammar operates on pure instinct.
I need to story-convert my RPs... but man, I'm lazy about editing. Editing takes me a lot longer than a traditional story. I'm very anal about my editing, haha.
It's like $3/h maybe? It blowwws. But hey, dental benefits.
And, yeah! I thought pop-fic books were still about 30 bucks, but I wouldn't be surprised if all the new hot ones by the big name authors were 50 nowadays. @__@
I don't have anything more than a college level 'intro to lit' class, myself. But, it doesn't stop some people from thinking I majored in Literature, or one person thinking I was a professor of Lit or English. But the perceptions of others aren't the be-all end-all. I know I'm not that great.
Story-converting that RP is actually harder than just writing something brand new, honestly. Probably why it's been years and I haven't done it.
Speaking of prime-time for posting, I meant to post a pic that has content that's adjacent to what's in the story, and link to this journal, but.. well, I just keep getting distracted with other story-launch related things to do. Ah well! I'll appreciate you posting it, whenever, of course. <: Thanks again!
As far as books go: one of the most expensive countries in the world here!
Writing wise, you are pretty much that great, whatever my opinion may be worth. x] There are elements that could be improved, of course, but that's the case for any writer! There is a reason I admire your work so very much. Those poems you did for WhiteMantis are also beautifully crafted; you have a knack for finding the perfect placement for your words.
Editing in general sucks. Word. -high five-
Post picsss!
You've mentioned your country being expensive, but even before that, I was guessing you were Australian, though I can't remember now why I was trying to figure that out. When you mentioned your country being so expensive, that sort of confirmed that hypothesis for me. But maybe it was a false positive! Tell me where you hail [hale?] from. :}
What could I improve upon? Maybe being able to write more in less words? >__> *glances at 140K story*
*high fours* -- Okay okay, I'll go post!
Australia was a pretty close guess though!
And haha, sort of. I can give you more detail if you'd like (perhaps over IM if you have it?) but what I've read has a bit of what I call NaNoWriMo syndrome. It's what I do a lot when I'm trying to reach a high word count; some extra, not entirely necessary bits.
And, whoa, yikes, that's crazy, those costs! @__@
Yeah, but I swear I'm not writing so much on purpose! O: -- and yeah, we can talk on IM, but I need to get to bed for tonight, it's almost 2am here. Been nice comment-talking with you, though. :}
Pretty fun to see two writers I both enjoy discuss all this stuff. Talking about proofreading, I would offer to help like I usually do on stories/writers I enjoy - but holy christ 140k words.
Couldn't resist buying, obviously. Fun times!
Any fave 'Cases' or characters, or moments?
I'm sure with that offer price, however, you should get a lot of downloads of it :)
Hope you enjoy it. Feel free to share your thoughts in an email to me, when you're done reading it [or at any point throughout]. My email is provided when you buy the story, and is also in the 'ThankYouForYourPatronage' file in the top-level folder.
Uh.. sorry, though, if you, uh, wanted it fatal. >__> heh
No deaths here at all, the only thing we see is the creation of a bunch of new life, when you get right down to it. :} Not pregnancy, though. Just.. more snakes! Snakes don't always have to have been someone who got TFed after all. <:
I hope you enjoy it. Feel free to share your thoughts in an email to me, when you're done reading it [or at any point throughout]. My email is provided when you buy the story, and is also in the 'ThankYouForYourPatronage' file in the top-level folder.
Thanks for that! :}===<
Honestly, I don't think I did that much, no huge long overtly attention-grabbing ones, I don't think.
Anyway, you can get it whenever, sure.
Anyway, I hope you'll try this story out, because even if there were, like two annoying/noticeable instances of alliteration, the rest of the 140K would make up for it, I would hope! :}
And, if I figured out your email as being the one that mentions your nationality and your species, thanks for the tip! :D
i have a family gathering but this will be bought by me the moment i get back home
Anyway, I hope you'll enjoy it! - Also, if you like CTF, stick around my page in general / check my CTF folder. >__>
Also, you might not remember me, but you would have seen me / something I helped bring to light, before: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9835025/
And, uh, tell your friends about the story, maybe! c: If they are also kinky like you!
yeah ive seen a lot of your stuff in the past, its pretty good
yesss i saw that, it was great
Halfway through part two, eh? Well, things are just going to keep getting kinkier. >:} I'd love it if you could comment here again after you make it through a few another part or two.
yeah i finished it, its really good! nice and sweet
If you can recall at this point!
I should get a picture of them after their initial TF. (Of course, I want to get all the cases illustrated!) If you haven't seen it, there have been more scenes done since the book came out: http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/.....334/Fitting-In
Ask me anything to help you make your decision!
Wha wha whhhaaaa? Tazel! I can't believe it! O8====8O Tazel! You bought this and read it all? We totally didn't think you would!
*The two torsos bow down, palms together*
We thank you, sincerely! *says one, smiling* {:
*The other peeks up* We also wonder what made you take the plunge! :}===<
Very, VERY well done, my dear(s).
Stine: We can't blame you for being a bit skippy, of course. *pets at blooness* When you say Chapter 6, do you mean the sixth part, in the series of separate files? If so, that would have just been.. the stuff with the mouse, and the cow, and the drake.. and the finale. *tries to work out which part in particular had Sixy so attentive.*
Ameth y Stine, in unison: Thanks again, we really appreciate your patronage, since we know it was against your tastes in a general sense.
Yes, when listed out the scenes that were in Part 6, I figured it must have been the Drake. >==={:
Thank you for buying it and reading it and enjoying it! Perhaps if you need a writer for something in the future, you'll know where to look. :}===<
You can just link to this journal here. Only if you think it's worth it to share it with your watchers, of course. <:
Besides, the promotions you have obviously work - they got ME here! ;)
And, erk! Luckily in this form we don't have a tail to shove in our mouths, or it would be in there deep right now S: We forgot you were a writer and offered you future writing services. X__X U__U
-Hmm! {:
I've only read through most of the third part, but is very good. I did end up skipping around to read the Boa-naga parts, love that character. And those parts with the cum stealing and eating/drinking...yes...all of my yes.
I can say it definitely pushes a lot of my buttons because it keeps distracting me from something that I'm trying to write!
I keep noticing your signature alliteration too, it's clear who wrote it. *chuckles*
I had hoped people would have various fave 'Cases' they'd skip around for, so I'm very happy to hear just that from you now. :D
I might have once felt a little silly about something being so 'clearly Amethystinian' but now it makes me pleased, partly because it makes me less worried someone might claim it as their own work, at some point.
I pride myself on being a distraction, in every way I can. >:} I'm curious what you're writing, though.
I'll post it eventually when I finish it. I could poke you when I post it if you want.
[and by this dancing, I mean: Thanks for buying my story! :}===< ]
I hope you continue to enjoy it. <:
Thanks for your patronage! :D
Tell all your friends to come and get a copy. :}===<
So, that would be around 6-8K at the very very least, though it could certainly be made longer, and perhaps compressed shorter, too.
6k - 8k, at $5 per K is $30 - $40.
I'm going to guess you mean one of these, but I apologize if I'm way off:
1) Transformation, as a fetish, has no limits, and therefore can easily become overdone. This is opposed to how finite other kinks can be, like a certain type of clothing or a specific species, or a specific act, perhaps. [?]
2) Specifically excessive, unlimited sexual transformation where a character will end up super mutated, with cocks everywhere. [?]
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3) Scenarios that specifically draw attention to the infinite nature of their expansion / spread / growth. The fetish for a large partner extending into macro, which goes into the extreme level of things where characters are as big as planets, or cloning/infection/viral content that becomes worldwide. Perhaps you're saying you don't get the appeal of taking something to such extremes, where you cannot even contextualize the scale or the sheer immensity of it all. [?]
On this third point, I'm going to say that my story here does not do that, the spread of 'infection' in this tale ends up being limited to a single orgy. -- But, while I don't specifically see the appeal of planet-sized macro or world-covering infections, I'm going to theorize that the appeal is the fact that the enormity of it all DOES go beyond what could ever be grasped.
Put simply, I guess it would be like talking about your favourite food: We could talk about what you like most, let's say, pizza, or a steak, or a chocolate cake - and talk about how great it is... then in the context of a fantasy narrative, I could set forth the idea of a steak that tastes 10 times as good as the best you've ever had. That's graspable, and sounds amazing.
Then I could continue to say it gets better and better, somehow, and while it ceases to be anything one can contextualize, it continues to sound appealing on some level. It becomes a matter of saying your tastebuds can barely even perceive the incredible nature of this food. It becomes impossibly good, and perhaps even the impossibility of its quality is, in and of itself, appealing.
In the case of extreme macro, I would imagine that even though it's impossible to really grasp the idea of a being that big, the only thing that matters is the simple fact that it is extremely big, AND perhaps also the very fact that it is _immeasurably_ big. The very idea that you can't contain the scope of it in your mind might be the appeal. Again, I don't know, I'm not into macro or hyper fat or hyper muscle or hyper inflation, etc.
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4) Maybe you just mean kinks that are not grounded in reality at all. [?]
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Of course, I'm just guessing it's one of those four. I'd love you to tell me what you meant.
Also, never say never, you might eventually understand, who knows.
It's perfect! :D
Of course, I should hope you think it's perfect, given how much you paid for your copy! O:
A__A;;;
I Jump ahead a bit but ill read the whole thing in time probably when procrastinating lol.
That's pretty great. :}
You bought it, right? You should have all the parts! O:
Also, thanks for the watch! :}===<
I'd happily talk extensively about it if it wouldn't spoil the story for you XD
So what I'll say is that inside this story you'll find glorious amounts of smut, which Ame marvelously manages to keep interesting and new the whole time.
His style of writing also keeps a very nice, sophisticated tone throughout despite all the messy depravity you'll find, making reading it all the more enjoyable!
Also $6 for 140000 words of quality kinky porn is just stealing! GET IT NOW! XD
You really outdid yourself with this piece of work, well worth money in both lusty length and pure creamy quality. Some of your previous stories left me a bit lost among the events, the work to figure out what was happening getting lost in the jumble. Yet in this I only encountered that in one or two couplings. Right around chapter three I felt a bit of jumbling then again in four, but only in small parts! Considering the chaos of cum, snakes and body parts... thats amazing! You have such control of the readers perception of events, focusing on the right points to describe in exact order to get across the otherworldly concepts.
(I haven't read the last chapter so consider this a place holder for my take on the end XD)
As a fan of every concept it contains... Thank you for writing this!
Or maybe you simply thought that my work here wouldn't be that great, based on past experiences with what I have on display on my FA gallery? [Ah, I just read a little more of your comment and I see you say some of my previous works left you lost at times, I'll cop to that]
I'm very pleased to see you were almost 100% able to follow everything happening in this book. I would think that, given how very very many words are in there, plenty of them are used to ensure that things are clear, and well detailed, so that people who enjoy imagining all the little moments are able to perceive them in their mind's eye.
Anyway, thank you for giving it a shot and I'm glad you were suitably impressed (and that you let yourself be open to enjoying it).
As for you thanking me for writing it: You're very welcome! I'm quite happy that you are a fan of _every_ concept in there. :D
Thank you again for buying it and for reviewing it, here. <:
Was excellent ending! I wasn't sure how the chaos could be salvaged considering how many people were changed! But it turned out PERFECT, the fact the transformed had an option in the end really made it for me.
I can't help but think what I would have chosen.... Almost certainly I would have been one of the liquid ones that escaped into someone. Can't imagine a more comfortable future. Again wonderful story!
I hope you'll tell all your CTF/snake-cock-loving friends to consider a purchase. Aside from that, I hope you'll be inspired in your own works, and/or return to re-read certain cases, sometimes.
Overall, I'm just overjoyed to hear you were a fan of _every_ concept, which I wouldn't think would really happen for anyone but Rhylith, whose ideas it was all based upon.
Also Rhylith is wonderful and has been the "cause" of so much enjoyable material. Some people have great ideas and are capable of commissioning or producing tons of art for the things they like. Always makes them seem like a celebrity to me, hard to approach and tell them how much I love their characters/works. You included.
With my CTF game I hope to prove myself in some small way to feel "worthy" of chatting with other paragons of the fetish extremes I enjoy so much. And this story definitely has given me a few more ideas for it. Certainly solidified the need to add a snake cock configuration to it.
Thank you for calling me a paragon and a celebrity (or that I seem like one to you), but I'm also just someone who is (and has been) trying to prove I'm worthy of being in the TF community that had entertained me so thoroughly for so long.
And yes, I had not forgotten about your CTF game. I'm going to have to give it another run-through at some point - certainly I will when there are serpentine organ options. :D
Thanks for the review/comment, Sir Stoat.
Just bought it, so I'll give it a read!
This is perhaps the only time when I saw the email notification of a sale pop up in my inbox [I usually find them hours later] AND I also had the buyer tell me of the sale on FA [people often don't say anything, sneaking away with the smut :}===<]
Also, thank you for the watch! :>
Oh, and: If you think to do so, I'd love it if you could leave a little review here in the comments, as others have done, above.
Although much of the focus was on the erotic scenes and whatnot, I still very much liked the story behind Pylt and Poke, and their growing acceptance throughout. Very welcome and heartwarming, through the chaos that was the rest of the book, haha
I find it kinda interesting how, despite this book not needing any, the cock-naga ended up playing the role of antagonist. Leaving everyone behind him wanting and unfulfilled. His sections were always excellent, and you really could feel his need for the perfect host, haha
I'm kinda just finding myself writing the first thoughts that come to mind. It was truly a wonderful book! I'm looking forward to going back to it in the future
Thank you for calling out the more personal side of the book, the development of Pylt and Poke. That's what keeps it from just being a bunch of mindless sex. And yesss, Case VIII, the boa/cocknaga, he was very fun to use as a disruptive element. >:D
And you're looking forward to going back! [What a fun turn of phrase that is, hehe] Truly, though, that's the highest compliment I can ever get: the idea that someone might re-read, when the novelty is gone, the surprise of newness departed. To do it all again, without the pull of the mystery of not knowing what will happen. It shows so much that someone truly enjoyed it. <3