Please, comment on my work , i need you thoughts

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Wrote this to help describe my dragon's personality in detail to an FA artist I watch, so I thought I may as well write it down here as a journal :D

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a single 3 headed dragon with 3 personalities that act on their individual accord, 3 minds that share the same intellect (each knows what the other knows, "The three are one, the One is three"), and their body controlled partly by instinct, partly of their own free will depending on current situation.

Features:
1) Color: Jet Black
2) Silver Plating
3) His skeletal composition is of metallic nature, which allows him to conduct electricity through his skeletal structure. (he cannot create electricity Himself however).

Tendencies:

1) Loves enslaving his prey, rather than killing them (unless necessary, or in the mood for it at the time).
2) He finds pleasure in being serviced by all inferior species (He's actually quite Proud to be the Evil and Dark Natured Dragon that He is, He views all other species besides Dragons Inferior, He might go as far as to say that all dragon breeds are inferior besides lack dragons, and even then, not all Black dragons posses 3 heads, which he might go as far as to say that even they are inferior to him, just slightly though)
3) He is a mild treasure hoarder, He sees treasure hoarding as a slave's job, but he can't help but desire having treasure around to either bait, or show off to those unfortunate to wonder into his cave, and become his slave
4) He Loves Teasing and playing mind tricks with His prey
5) He absolutely loves bending / breaking the wills of those he enslave to get what He wants out of them (whether willing or by force)

Abilities:

1) As most dark dragons should, this one can use Hypnotism / Mind Control, he also possesses the ability to control time for short amounts of time.
2) Use the Element of Electricity whenever stricken by lightning to his horns which act like lightning conductors
3) Possesses several dark magics, some of which are: Rebirth (to others), Healing (Himself and others), blindness (to others), transformation (only others)
4) Regular Fire Breath that burns the physical body
5) Flames of Darkness: Characterized by a dark purplish blue flame that unlike regular fire that burns the Physical body, Leaves the body unharmed, but Burns and consumes the Spiritual Soul, Condemning his Victim to cease to exist utterly (this also regarding the afterlife). all that remains is a shell of a memory that once existed. [This ability is only used as a last resort]

Personality:

He has a somewhat dark and less than desirable past, due to this he's often a loner, undesired for the misunderstood nature of his cursed breed. He loves himself more than anything else, and because he's never known what love is like, He forces His slaves to love him.. in other words, He hardly knows how to give love, but He Loves To Be Loved.

1) Right Head: Calm, Collected, knowledgeable, and Possibly the more docile of the three. Unlike his two brothers (they're technically one being, but refer to each other as brothers), he Features Regular round eyes.

2) Middle Head: Cool, Comfident, Vicious looking, most often the one who performs hypnotism / Mind Control

3) Left Head: The most aggressive of the 3, Bold, Not hesitant to show off his talents, and is eager to to establish who is Boss around here.

Habitat: (Not set in stone, but it's what i've gone with)

1) A Cave inside a snowy mountain range, He's learned to resist the cold weather despite the fact he's cold blooded

Diet:

1) Cows, Sheep, any easy target he can come across. He usually has to eat 2 grown cows to satisfy his metabolism.

Orientation:

1) Straight, he feels attracted to females who are also dark, and can show their dominance upon the weak. He values others like Him, because He knows He most likely can relate to them, and vice versa.

Possession State:

1) As rare as this dragon breed is, Due to his depressing past, he also developed a Darker Entity, born of His inner Rage, Anger, Hatred, and a heavily burdened and callus heart, all of which he attempted to conceal bottled inside. However when he is deeply angered and emotionally disturbed, try as He might, His inner demon surfaces, taking possession of his body as his physical appearance becomes rough and rigid, His eyes turn blood red, dark smoke emanates his body like an aura, and is taken over by a 4th entity that is no longer dormant. The dragons themselves are no longer in possession of the body, and His actions are left at the blind mercy of this Evil spirit that resides within him. His Voice Echoes with a chilling voice (much like luna from MLP), He is beyond aggressive, but knowledgeable and intellectual at the same time (similar to Malefor in a way).

Possession lasts however long the spirit deems necessary, the brothers have no choice in the matter, however this state is strain full on the body, so prolonged possession can prove to feel quite tasking on the brothers once Possession is released, though their body goes back to normal, they will feel very sore and tired.

The Brothers eventually learned to take control of this ability, and unleash it at will without loosing full control

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Well, that was fun to write in one go, lol

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