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comic number one through four of f3
11 years ago
hero's
cuddlesmuch plain black lab/superpup cuddlesmuch in black and white batman-ish costume with roschac design(black and white ink spots that always chang but his whole suit is one inkspot)
olive is a black and white chicken/feather oliva wth a silver mask much like nightwing(from batman series) two smgs strapped too her hips, and a silver belt buckle with blue highlights(ment as a halo deck for increased storage)
mild mouse is a gray mouse with slightly larger ears then normal/moon mouse, mild mouse in dark purple and black fullbody jumpsuit with a yellow moon on the chest the head is covered by a purple and black visor (like zero from borderlands 2)
villians
reaper(working name feel free too change it) half human half furry head is muzzle but no nose half way up the muzzle it turns into flesh, one side is fur with a green eye, the other skin put the skin is super tight looking like it may tear, both ears are k9(wolf) covered in skin the skin so tight you can see bone. one arm is rotting skin as a child robotic as an adult, same with one leg. the tail is k9 but flesh pulled super tight so you can see the bones. all the fur is purple.
the commander is a gryphon but always hiding behind a mask all red, and a black cloak that covers his body under the cloak is a darth vader style suit(minus the stupid panel)
last one yet too be decided.
all characters not named here are yours too decide.
(2)---first two pages are a view of the back of a pups head looking through a car window at a factory(the same logo as the one on our rape victim from comic book two is on the building).
---page three panel one is the father asking the son what he is thinking about. second panel is the son answering "just wondering why we don't about mom". third panel the father "you really wanna know about mom ok when we get home I'll tell you." fourth panel "ok dad, I love you" fifth panel lights headed toward the car, sixth panel bright light fills the panel"
---next page the son in a suit at his fathers funeral.
---page 5 a txt box across the top "its been 20 years since my father died, The accident left me with radiation poisoning. when we hit the building I should have died but I didn't...." first panel an older cuddlesmuch sitting at a dive eatery.
second panel the door getting kicked in you see a bunny fur with a gun and an eye patch. third panel the bunny threating the waitress and a woman with a child. fourth panel cuddles standing up and the gunman telling him not too be a hero.
---sixth page cuddles in the mans face between him and the victims too be. second panel the gun man laughing. third panel gun man shoots cuddles in the gut. fourth panel cuddles falls as the gun man shoots the child and mother. fifth panel the gun man fleeing with the money.
---7th page cuddles in the hospital asking the doc if the others made it. second panel the doctor hanging his head and saying sorry but no. third panel cuddles crying. fourth panel cuddles questioned by the police about the robber he claims memory loss over tragic events.
----8th page cuddles getting released from the hospital. second panel cuddles reading the paper about the event at the diner. third panel cuddles in his home study looking up the killer from the news paper reports. fourth panel cuddles in a dark alley trailing a shady man.
9th page cuddles catching sad shady man. panel two cuddles shoving the man into a wall demanding too know about the bunny from the diner. panel three cops showing up(casual drive past) panel four cops approaching cuddles one puts his hand on cuddles arm asking him to calm down and put the man down.
----10th page cuddles ignoring the cop and demanding an answer from the poor man. panel two the cop pulling cuddles off(split panel) and cuddles hitting him. panel three the cops partner grabbing cuddles. panel four cuddles punches the partner cop
----11th page cuddles chasing the man who fled. panel two cuddles tackled by the cops. third panel cuddles being put in the cop car. fourth panel as cuddles is being driven off out the window he see's the bunny.
---12th page cuddles on trail prosecuting attorney is mild mouse(seeing only the end of the trail). panel two cuddles convicted to ten years in jail for assault.
---13th page cuddles in the prison yard working out. second panel cuddles approached by two inmate both grinning(one furry one human) third panel both inmates grabbing cuddles the weight falling. fourth panel cuddles getting hit in the gut as other inmates laughs and says initiation fresh meat.
---14th page close up of cuddles eyes going white and him grinning. second panel cuddles grabbing the one who hit him by the wrist and pulling his arm(shoulder, wrist ,and elbow)out of his socket. third panel the second inmate grabbing a weight and swinging at him. fourth and fifth panel cuddles get hit with the weight and barely moves still grinning.
---15th page cuddles punching the inmate in the gut the inmate falling over. panel two cuddles hitting the inmate in the back of the head with the weight blood spray on cuddles. panel three cuddles being thrown into a solitary cell. panel four cuddles working out in the cell(push up sit up whatever)
---16th page cuddles in the reading in solitary.
---17th page cuddles in the yard working out. second panel the inmate with messed up arm approaching cuddles cuddles standing. third panel inmate asking cuddles to join his gang. fourth panel cuddles grinning and saying he don't hang with scum.
---18th page the inmate backing away slowly cuddles approaching him. second panel cuddles grabbing him by the shirt and laughing. third panel cuddles shoving him and shaking. fourth panel cuddles walking away.
---19th page cuddles in the cafeteria. panel two cuddles cuddles getting approached by the gang the inmate up front. panel three cuddles stand and asking if they really want too do this. panel four cops getting in between them.
--- page 20 cuddles grinning being led back too his cell. panel two cuddles in the shower back showing. panel three cuddles in the yard(massive season change)panel four cuddles being prepped for release.
---page 21 cuddles walking out the gate along the top text reading "I learned a lot during my time, the two most important things, when my adrenalin flows I cant be hurt hell its like hitting bricks and im strong as an ox. even more important I learned how too harness my anger.
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oky day second comic in a nutshell. first page is a gritty black and white flashback, you see a female in a hasmat suit back to you setting down what appears to be a barrel of waste (with the flippo on it) your view is through the eyes of something k9 watching her. second pannel her lighting a cigerette and a side view of the k9(you now see is a furry dog in nothing but pants) he is almost on top of her and looks menecing a bulge in his pants. next panel him pinning her down to the barrel bulge against her butt her screaming. third pannel (your chioce) either her getting rapped or black pannel(or her face scared and crying) her screaming stop. next page is her with a very deformed baby(half human half furry) and her crying and wondering how this happened(genetics dont work). next pannel her being told by the doctor that the radation from the barrel got on her and muted her genes making the child possible. third pannel her leaving the hospitle and getting getting yelled at by the people on the street that her child is an abomonation and a freak. fourth pannel her getting run out of town by a mob throwing things at her.
next page is her and the child slightly grown up living in the gutters. second pannel is her son asking why they live in the gutters and her saying the world thinks he is a freak.third pannel is him asking her if she thinks so too, her answering that he is her son and she loves him even if he is different. . Fourth panel him screaming and slashing her throat. next page is modern in all color the child now grown in an abanded building looking out the window at furries passing by and scorning them. next pannel is him somewhere else in the building working on some sort of device muttering about the "furry scum".third pannel is him throwing the wretch and laughing crazy like. fourth pannel him dragging the device up the stairs laughing about killing them all.
next page you see cuddlesmuch(black lab fursona) sitting at a desk working on a book and drinking a soda. next pannel an alarm going of him jumping up out of the chair tossing the book. third pannel him looking at a screen showing a robbery in progress. forth pannel him running down a flight of stairs behind a book case. fifth pannel him changing and jumping into a car. last pannel him driving out a cave through some bushes
sixth page the robbers in a quick shop holding up the teller. next pannel the lights go out with dark outlines of the people in the shop two robbers and the clerk. third pannel a fist hitting one robber and him falling.forth pannel the second robber slammed into the counter and knocked out. fifth pannel lights come up both robbers tied up.
ok next six pages are oliva/feather(black and white feathered hen) first page you see oliva in the cockpit of a plane in a fighter jet helmet. next pannel her looking over her shoulder from the front plane with a speech bubble saying"drop in 3 boys" you can also see six soldiers(furry or human dont matter) third pannel is seeing that have already jumped out with there chutes not yet open and a third ready to jump, fourth pannel oliva running to the back of the plane screaming missal(sp the rocket thing that goes boom lol) last pannel is the plane getting hit and going down.next page first pannel plane in two peices oliva laying on the ground one very dead soldier over her legs one hanging out of the plane dead and the third one a few feet off dead. next pannel is zoomed in on her face and a vioce is heard off the pannel saying "over here it went down over here" third pannel oliva jumping into the bushes. fourth pannel two soldiers in red walking up to the dead bodies one saying"well they all look dead". fifth pannel is the soldier who said nothing saying "lets make sure" and shooting a body. next page is the three soldiers who jumped from the plane one with a broken leg laying leaned against a log, one with his chute stuck in a tree hanging there, and one who is standing asking if every one is ok. next pannel is the one with the broken leg saying"minus a walking problem im fine" and the one in the tree chuckling. third pannel the one who is ok helping up the one with a busted leg, and the one in the tree reaching for his knife. fourth pannel same as the last but with gun barrels around the edges and a vioce off pannel saying" dont move". fifth pannel is then being led off by red suited gaurds in cuffs.
next page is the three captured soldiers tied up spread eagled in the middle of a room and a dark figure sitting on a chair infront of them(them seen from behind). next pannel is the dark figure saying "where is the rest of your crew?" and the soldier who was fine asking why he wants to know. next pannel is the figure asking the question again, and the same soldier opening his mouth only to get hit by a soldier in red who says "answer him". third pannel is the soldier saying there dead and the hooded figure saying show me. fourth pannel is the soldier who has talked saying "we jumped we dont know where it is". fifth pannel is the soldier with the broken leg getting hit in the leg with a bat and screaming. last pannel is hooded man saying again "where is the plane". next page, is the captives getting lead through the jungle. next page is oliva in a part of the plane checking on equiment(guns radio ect on the tables) with a vioce off pannel saying "there it is". third pannel is oliva jumping up into the top of the plane and hiding there. fourth pannel is the soldiers in red walking into the crashed plane. fifth pannel is soldiers outside looking into the plane with the one with bat inside it. next page is olivia jumping from her spot and knocking out the man with the bat. next pannel is her rolling into cover and grabbing a gun with the soldiers in red shocked. third pannel olivia popping out of cover and shooting two of the soldiers in red. fourth pannel is the last soldier in red screaming "come out now" fifth pannel is the captives beating down the last soldier with there cuffs. last page is a full page picture of oliva freeing her partners and saying "lets do what we came here to do.
full page seen of a court room the two on trail are the two robers from the qick shop as well as seeing a well dressed mouse(the prosocuter) in front of the judge. next page the mouse talking to the judge saying "these two men not only robbed an innocent man, but they tried to kill him. do we really want these men to have any chance of release, any chance to possibly kill someone?" pannel two on the page is an explosion and the doors of the court room being blown open. third pannel is two heavly armed men shooting there way into the court room. third pannel is the mouse laying on the ground scared as the judge is shot above him. fourth pannel is the two on trail and the two gun men walking out the door as the gun men fire into the room killing two guards. next pannel the mouse fleeing through a side door. last pannel the gun men setting up a bomb. next page a full page seen of the mouse in an alley as the courthouse explodes. next page again full page of the mouse in a dirty one bedroom apartment sitting on a bed head hung a beer in his hand.next page is the mouse talking to himself saying "i let them get away" then a pannel of him haggered standing in front of a mirror looking at himself. then a pannelof him looking away from the mirror tears falling from his face. next pannel him saying to himself "never again" then a view into a closet his paw hitting a small button in the corner. last pannel is the closet with an open hidden door revealing a costume folded up all we see is a very dark blue almost black body peice and a dark green cape. last two pages a full veiw of the costume laid on the bed and the mouse with his shirt off saying "dad im sorry but its time to take up the family bussiness"
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-1 olive holding the gun she shot the red clad soldier with walking through the jungle followed by the other three soldiers from her division the two "healthy" ones carring the injured one all with weapons. panel two the hurt soldier taking a sniper round. panel three olive yelling get down. last panel all of them heading for cover(sept our now dead friend).
-2 the soldier who did most of the talking from comic number two(lets call him mark) asking if anyone saw where the bullet came from. panel two the other soldier(lets call him ty) saying "yea right out of johns head". panel three mark saying not be a smart ass we're under fire. last panel ty saying he thinks it came from the north.
-3 olive asking ty too put his knife( flippo on the handle) in the side of the tree so she can use the reflection to find the sniper. second panel ty saying "that wont work and im not getting shot". third panel olive telling ty if they don't find the sniper they will all get shot. fourth panel ty sighing and putting the knife sideways in the tree.
-4 the knife getting shot off. panel two ty saying told you it wouldn't work. panel three olive saying "oh it worked I was looking for the shot not the reflection. panel four ty "so I almost got shot for nothing?"
-5 olive "not nothing I know where he is" second panel ty "good now we know where we'll got shot from great"
third panel mark"so what are we going to do about it" fourth panel olive Im going to grab the marksman rifle of our dead friend.
-6 mark "how the hell do you plan on doing that?" second panel olive "on the count of three we are going to switch spots and im grabbing the gun on the way there." third panel this is suicide but I trust you ok lets do this. last panel oliva "1...2...3"
-7 olive and mark switching spots, panel two olive grabbing the gun and a bullet wizzing past, panel three olive and mark in the other spots olive asking mark if he is ok. panel four mark saying yea he just took a bullet he is fine.
-8 ty asking where he took a bullet that is fine? panel two mark saying it was paw but he can still shoot small arms so he is fine. panel three olive saying sorry he got shot panel four mark saying just shoot him already panel five olive pointing around the tree and firing.
-9 a soldier falling from a tree clad in old gritting blue camo dead. panel two ty "hey that's not one of the reds who the hell is he?" panel three olive crouching and inspecting the body. panel four olive" im not sure but I think its the rebels who have my husband, panel five all three looking upset(madish sad)
-10 olive "questioning a dead man isn't possible lets see if we can pick up his trail" panel two olive following tracks. panel three mark and ty looting the body. panel four mark and ty get guns pointed at them from blue glad soldiers(all there gear is worn out like old and patchy).
- 11 ty and mark getting led off. panel two oliva hearing a twig snap from them being led off. panel three Oliva sneaking through the forest following them.
- 12 ty and mark getting tossed into a cell next to a similarly glad soldier.
panel two ty looking up shocked saying "holy shit its you, your alive." mark laying on the ground in the cell. panel three the clad soldier weakly grinning "yea too stupid too die, so what brings you guys too my cell?"
panel four mark telling them both too shut up we're prisoners we're going too die."
- 13 the clad soldier (lets call him jim for now tell i get feed back from the person responsible for oliva). "if your here where is oliva?" panel two mark "she ditched us" panel three ty "she did not she was following tracks like we should have been not looting the body we messed up again" panel four grungy blue glad guard yelling at them too shut it.
-14 red clad soldiers come firing into the camp. panel two the blue clad soldiers panicked and firing back. panel three olive sneaking into the camp fighting going on in the background. panel four olive taking the key off the dead guard.
-15 jim saying "took you long enough lets get out of here". panel two olive opening the cage "im here aren't I?" panel 3 the cage door open and ty mark and jim on there way out. panel four the shadowy figure from the second comic walking up towards them through the fighting.
-16 ty and mark seeing the figure and going holy shit. panel two olive and jim pushing them and screaming run. panel three all three running away. panel four close up of the figures mask(gryphon mask's outline) grinning.
-17 a chopper flying over head and dropping smoke. panel two smoke over the field and a ladder falling from the chopper. panel three ty and mark climbing the ladder and olive and jim aiming down there sights towards the smoke.
panel four olive, ty, and mark in the chopper and jim climbing into the ladder.
-18 a voice coming from the chopper radio sayinh "olive glad too finally meet you, the rest of you as well im glad your safe" panel two olive asking who the voice on the radio is. panel three the voice "im your employer and after we drop these three off I have a job for you" panel four "olive saying she works for the us government not some voice on the radio"
-19 the voice saying "every one has a price, so whats yours?" panel two olive saying she isn't for sale. panel three bullet wizzing into the plane and hitting jim and mark one in the head one in the chest. panel four the chopper swerving too avoid another bullet and the bullet hitting the hull of the chopper.
-20 mark, jim and ty falling out of the plane. panel two olive yelling nooooooo. panel three olive demanding they land.
panel four the voice saying they cant its too dangerous.
-21 olive saying she don't care land it. panel two the voice saying even if they did land all they would find is bodies and most likely be dead as well, all they can do is survive and get revenge. olive saying "you where right everyone has a price mine is revenge, what do you need done?" panel four the voice saying "I need you too save my city......."
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-1 miles mouse in the super hero costume from issue two sitting on a rooftop. panel two a close up of his eyes behind a dark purple mask the eyes all black an angry look on his face. panel three the view from seen one but miles mouse (working super hero name is cheese but feel free to improvise) standing and saying where too start. panel four a gun shot from off panel mild mouse turning too look.
-2 mouse dropping into an alley (flippo on the side of dumpster). panel two turning too see super pup holding the wrist of the bunny from the dinner. panel three super pup turning too see mouse. panel four the bunny head butting superpup.
-3 super pup falling backwards. panel two the bunny pulling a gun out of his pocket. panel three the bunny aiming at superpup. panel four mouse hitting the bunny in the jaw.
-4 view of mouse from behind behind him superpup holding the gun too the bunny. panel two mouse turning and yelling no. panel three the bunny kicking super pup in the gut. panel four the bunny holding the gun aimed at superpup.
-5 mouse telling the bunny "shoot me if you must shoot someone". panel two the gun going off. panel three the bullet bouncing off of mouse. panel four mouse walking towards the bunny.
-the bunny shooting mouse again. panel two the bullet bouncing off mouse. bunny shooting again looking scared. panel four mouse grabbing the gun.
-6 mouse crushing the gun in one paw. panel two mouse lifting and throwing the bunny. panel three superpup tying up the bunny. panel four mouse "I guess your not gonna kill him?"
-7 superpup "And risk a fight with some one who can deflect a bullet, yea im good. I think i'll let the cops take this one." panel two mouse helping pup too his feet. panel three mouse "bonus of the suit I guess, dad said it gave great power." panel four superpup "defecting bullets is more then just great power it makes you a true force too be reckoned with."
-8 oliva as feather standing at the end of the alleyway clapping. panel two cuddlesmuch and miles looking over. panel three feather saying "nice work but do you boys want too make a real difference?" panel four cuddles and miles looking a each other then back too oliva. panel five both asking "what exactly do you mean?"
-9 panel oliva saying "follow me" panel two oliva running off around the corner. panel three miles and cuddles looking at each other shocked.
-10 panel one miles and cuddles hurry after oliva. panels 2-5 miles and cuddles chasing oliva through the city and over roof tops.
-11 panel 1 oliva stopping infront of a warehouse. pannel two miles and cuddles catching her panting. pannel 3 oliva going through the door. pannel four cuddles and miles following.
-12 panel 1 the three of them walking into a large open room with an elevator in the center. panel 2 oliva heading towards the elevator motioning for them too follow. panel 3 everyone on the elevator as its headed down. panel 4 view from behind there heads of a lounge style room.
-13 panel 1 front veiw of them walking into the room miles looking around in awe cuddles looking unimpressed. panel 2 oliva turning too the boys and saying "my boss says we can make a difference if we work together." panel 3 cuddles asking "who is your boss?" panel 4 a radio on the desk (like old timey radio think the radio from brave little toaster or charlies angles) that has a 2 with a loins tail circling it much like an @ sign turns on and a voice comes out "i am, and we need your help too save this city."
-14 panel 1 cuddles smerking, and miles saying "your boss is a radio?". Pannel two olive with a smile saying to cuddles "that smirk is cute and let's be honest I thought the same way you are.... Panel 3 olive still speaking "...but he knew about you two and says he knows of a plan to try and blow up the city" panel 4 cuddles and miles in shock
-15 cuddles "how does he know?" Panel two miles "does it matter we have to stop it there are to many lives at risk to ask how right now"
Panel three Olivia "he's right we can ask the how's later, what we need is there where."
Panel four the radio "I can help with that, my contacts say one of the bombs is in the old power plant"
-16 cuddles in shock "that plant was nuclear if a bomb goes off...."
Panel two Olivia "... it'll level the city"
Panel three miles "not to mention the fallout"
Panel four Olivia "there's a chopper on the roof we must hurry"
Panel five all three running up steps at the back of the room
-17 Olivia jumping into the driver seat as cuddles and miles jump into the back
Panel two miles "do you know how to fly this thing?"
Panel three Olivia grinning "I'm a chicken we pretend well"
Panel four the chopper taking off
-18 cuddles and miles looking at each other in shock. Panel two cuddles "your just joking about the pretending right?" Panel three Olivia looking over her shoulder "we flying ain't we?"
-19 the chopper landing on the roof of the nuclear power plant
-20 all three jumping out of the chopper, panel two all three running to the door on the roof
-21 bold letters CATCH THE NEXT ISSUE TOO SEE THE EXITING CONCLUSION...
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-1 moon mouse(miles) walking into a room full of pipes and dails on the walls in the room is two henchmen.
Panel 2 miles "evening fellas, you do know this place is condemned right?". Both henchmen surprised
Panel 3 both henchmen shooting miles but the bullets bounce off
Panel 4 zoomed in on miles feet bullets at his feet/ feathers foot appears.
-2 feather two guns aimed at the henchmen "my turn" miles has a look of shock
Panel 2 miles stepping in front of feather "we don't kill"
Panel 3 super pup dropping from the ceiling on to the henchmen
Panel 4 the henchmen hitting the ground unconscious super pup "I wouldn't argue with him"
-3 feather annoyed "what the fuck am I supposed to do with all these bullets then?"
Panel 2 super pup "incapacitate them, no mortal wounds"
Panel 3 miles shocked "but..."/ Super pup "we don't have time right now, we can deal with your moral code later"
Panel 4 moon mouse to feather "no killing"
-4 reaper in a room filled with nuclear barrels(flippo on one) the device from issue two next to him.
Panel 2 the heros running into the room
Panel 3 a split panel of both reaper and super pup faces shocked a shared speach bubble "YOU"
-5 close up of reapers metal hand holding a detonator
Panel 2 reaper holding the detonator at arm's length "I'm already half gone, I have no issue blowing us all away"
Panel 3 split panel gunshot/close up of a bullet hitting the wrist of reaper bolts and wires flying
Panel 4 reaper screaming "BITCH"
-6 super pup lunging at reaper
Panel 2 cuddles hitting reaper
Panel 3 reapers metal arm letting out a blinding light
-7 blinding white panel with a speach bubble saying "what the..."
Panel 2 all three heroes on the ground
Panel 3 feather holding her head sitting up "who was that?"
-8 super pup leaning against the device"his name is reaper. Dude has a chip on his shoulder"
Panel 2 moon mouse on fours trying to get up "how do you know him?"
Panel 3 super pup offering to help feather up "we've met before, ran into him while tracking the murdering bastard bunny you let live."
-9 feather accepting help up moon standing in the background
Panel 2 feather moving towards the bomb "let's disarm this thing and get out of here."
Panel 3 super pup "can you disarm it?"
-10 feather working on the bomb most of her obstructed by it moon and super pup looking on
-11 panel 1 feather standing "I think we are safe"
Panel 2 super pup "let's get out of here"
Panel 3 all three climbing into the helicopter.
-12 reaper in a dark room similar to the one in issue two fixing his robotic hand
-13 reaper "thinks he won huh, thinks this changes anything I'll show him...."
Panel 2 reaper head thrown back eyes wide drool pouring from his mouth both hands in the air and the mechanical one working "...I'LL SHOW THEM ALL"
-14 the helicopter speaker kicking on with a static sound
Panel 2 from the speaker " I've found bomb number 2 it's under the Orange Mile Bridge
Panel 3 the helicopter landing on the bridge (looks similar to the Golden gate bridge)
-15 feather "why bomb this bridge? No traffic, and it only leads to Pencon island"
Panel 2 moon mouse "blowing up this bridge means no way out but more importantly no way in till it's fixed."
Panel 3 super pup "meaning a stay at another prison one he could escape from easier"
Panel 4 them finding the bomb on a support beam
-16 Feather disarming the bomb
Panel 2 moon mouse "odd no one is protecting it"
Panel 3 super pup turning shocked
-17 mostly black room with a semi visible bookcase/rug on the left side and the front end part of the top of a desk with bird like talon hands clasped together on it the wrists disappearing into the shadows. The only other thing visible is a pair of eyes. "That nut job thinks he can blow up my factory with out consequences?"
-18 same as 17 "time to teach him you don't mess with me"
Panel 2 close up of the eyes with a smile underneath having perfect teeth. Only eyes and smile revealed
-19/20 feather stopping the time
Panel 2(and the whole other page) all three hero's turning to see a humaniod figure made of sewage
-21 bold letters in a slanted font on a black background"DIE HEROS"
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-1/2 spread page veiw
Orange Mile bridge in the background the three hero's on the banks of the bay the bomb disarmed behind them in the foreground right side the hulking creature made of sewage from behind.
-3 Feathers face disgusted "what is that"
panel 2 moon mouse also disgusted "try the most foul thing I've ever smelt ugh"
Panel 3 super pup glaring "it's like every nut job I've ever fought is out tonight."
-4 the sewage creature turning and yelling at the heroes sewage spewing from its mouth.panel 2 moon turning to super pup “how do we fight this cause I am not punching that.” Super pup reaching into his utility belt tossing a pair of gloves to moon “there now shut up and punch him”
Panel three feather unloading a clip at the creatures
-5 the bullets barely leaving an impact as the creature growls
Panel two moon with the gloves on hitting the creature sparks shocking through it before the creature shoves moon away with an extended arm of sludge.
Panel three feather throwing a grenade at the creature the explosion causing it to separate
Panel 4 super pup throwing a blue canister at the creature
-6 the canister exploding freezing the creature before it fully reassembles
Panel two miles punching the creature while dripping in sewage the creature shatters
Panel three the parts of the creature slinking like worms into the river
Panel four moon and feather “I’m never swimming again”
-7 moon mouse starting to fly off “I need a shower “
Panel two super pup “hang on only feather knows how to get ahold of the radio mystery man, take this just in case”
Panel three super pup handing feather and moon mouse digital looking disks
Panel four Feather”these look like military gps...but more advanced how’d you get these?”
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cuddlesmuch plain black lab/superpup cuddlesmuch in black and white batman-ish costume with roschac design(black and white ink spots that always chang but his whole suit is one inkspot)
olive is a black and white chicken/feather oliva wth a silver mask much like nightwing(from batman series) two smgs strapped too her hips, and a silver belt buckle with blue highlights(ment as a halo deck for increased storage)
mild mouse is a gray mouse with slightly larger ears then normal/moon mouse, mild mouse in dark purple and black fullbody jumpsuit with a yellow moon on the chest the head is covered by a purple and black visor (like zero from borderlands 2)
villians
reaper(working name feel free too change it) half human half furry head is muzzle but no nose half way up the muzzle it turns into flesh, one side is fur with a green eye, the other skin put the skin is super tight looking like it may tear, both ears are k9(wolf) covered in skin the skin so tight you can see bone. one arm is rotting skin as a child robotic as an adult, same with one leg. the tail is k9 but flesh pulled super tight so you can see the bones. all the fur is purple.
the commander is a gryphon but always hiding behind a mask all red, and a black cloak that covers his body under the cloak is a darth vader style suit(minus the stupid panel)
last one yet too be decided.
all characters not named here are yours too decide.
(2)---first two pages are a view of the back of a pups head looking through a car window at a factory(the same logo as the one on our rape victim from comic book two is on the building).
---page three panel one is the father asking the son what he is thinking about. second panel is the son answering "just wondering why we don't about mom". third panel the father "you really wanna know about mom ok when we get home I'll tell you." fourth panel "ok dad, I love you" fifth panel lights headed toward the car, sixth panel bright light fills the panel"
---next page the son in a suit at his fathers funeral.
---page 5 a txt box across the top "its been 20 years since my father died, The accident left me with radiation poisoning. when we hit the building I should have died but I didn't...." first panel an older cuddlesmuch sitting at a dive eatery.
second panel the door getting kicked in you see a bunny fur with a gun and an eye patch. third panel the bunny threating the waitress and a woman with a child. fourth panel cuddles standing up and the gunman telling him not too be a hero.
---sixth page cuddles in the mans face between him and the victims too be. second panel the gun man laughing. third panel gun man shoots cuddles in the gut. fourth panel cuddles falls as the gun man shoots the child and mother. fifth panel the gun man fleeing with the money.
---7th page cuddles in the hospital asking the doc if the others made it. second panel the doctor hanging his head and saying sorry but no. third panel cuddles crying. fourth panel cuddles questioned by the police about the robber he claims memory loss over tragic events.
----8th page cuddles getting released from the hospital. second panel cuddles reading the paper about the event at the diner. third panel cuddles in his home study looking up the killer from the news paper reports. fourth panel cuddles in a dark alley trailing a shady man.
9th page cuddles catching sad shady man. panel two cuddles shoving the man into a wall demanding too know about the bunny from the diner. panel three cops showing up(casual drive past) panel four cops approaching cuddles one puts his hand on cuddles arm asking him to calm down and put the man down.
----10th page cuddles ignoring the cop and demanding an answer from the poor man. panel two the cop pulling cuddles off(split panel) and cuddles hitting him. panel three the cops partner grabbing cuddles. panel four cuddles punches the partner cop
----11th page cuddles chasing the man who fled. panel two cuddles tackled by the cops. third panel cuddles being put in the cop car. fourth panel as cuddles is being driven off out the window he see's the bunny.
---12th page cuddles on trail prosecuting attorney is mild mouse(seeing only the end of the trail). panel two cuddles convicted to ten years in jail for assault.
---13th page cuddles in the prison yard working out. second panel cuddles approached by two inmate both grinning(one furry one human) third panel both inmates grabbing cuddles the weight falling. fourth panel cuddles getting hit in the gut as other inmates laughs and says initiation fresh meat.
---14th page close up of cuddles eyes going white and him grinning. second panel cuddles grabbing the one who hit him by the wrist and pulling his arm(shoulder, wrist ,and elbow)out of his socket. third panel the second inmate grabbing a weight and swinging at him. fourth and fifth panel cuddles get hit with the weight and barely moves still grinning.
---15th page cuddles punching the inmate in the gut the inmate falling over. panel two cuddles hitting the inmate in the back of the head with the weight blood spray on cuddles. panel three cuddles being thrown into a solitary cell. panel four cuddles working out in the cell(push up sit up whatever)
---16th page cuddles in the reading in solitary.
---17th page cuddles in the yard working out. second panel the inmate with messed up arm approaching cuddles cuddles standing. third panel inmate asking cuddles to join his gang. fourth panel cuddles grinning and saying he don't hang with scum.
---18th page the inmate backing away slowly cuddles approaching him. second panel cuddles grabbing him by the shirt and laughing. third panel cuddles shoving him and shaking. fourth panel cuddles walking away.
---19th page cuddles in the cafeteria. panel two cuddles cuddles getting approached by the gang the inmate up front. panel three cuddles stand and asking if they really want too do this. panel four cops getting in between them.
--- page 20 cuddles grinning being led back too his cell. panel two cuddles in the shower back showing. panel three cuddles in the yard(massive season change)panel four cuddles being prepped for release.
---page 21 cuddles walking out the gate along the top text reading "I learned a lot during my time, the two most important things, when my adrenalin flows I cant be hurt hell its like hitting bricks and im strong as an ox. even more important I learned how too harness my anger.
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oky day second comic in a nutshell. first page is a gritty black and white flashback, you see a female in a hasmat suit back to you setting down what appears to be a barrel of waste (with the flippo on it) your view is through the eyes of something k9 watching her. second pannel her lighting a cigerette and a side view of the k9(you now see is a furry dog in nothing but pants) he is almost on top of her and looks menecing a bulge in his pants. next panel him pinning her down to the barrel bulge against her butt her screaming. third pannel (your chioce) either her getting rapped or black pannel(or her face scared and crying) her screaming stop. next page is her with a very deformed baby(half human half furry) and her crying and wondering how this happened(genetics dont work). next pannel her being told by the doctor that the radation from the barrel got on her and muted her genes making the child possible. third pannel her leaving the hospitle and getting getting yelled at by the people on the street that her child is an abomonation and a freak. fourth pannel her getting run out of town by a mob throwing things at her.
next page is her and the child slightly grown up living in the gutters. second pannel is her son asking why they live in the gutters and her saying the world thinks he is a freak.third pannel is him asking her if she thinks so too, her answering that he is her son and she loves him even if he is different. . Fourth panel him screaming and slashing her throat. next page is modern in all color the child now grown in an abanded building looking out the window at furries passing by and scorning them. next pannel is him somewhere else in the building working on some sort of device muttering about the "furry scum".third pannel is him throwing the wretch and laughing crazy like. fourth pannel him dragging the device up the stairs laughing about killing them all.
next page you see cuddlesmuch(black lab fursona) sitting at a desk working on a book and drinking a soda. next pannel an alarm going of him jumping up out of the chair tossing the book. third pannel him looking at a screen showing a robbery in progress. forth pannel him running down a flight of stairs behind a book case. fifth pannel him changing and jumping into a car. last pannel him driving out a cave through some bushes
sixth page the robbers in a quick shop holding up the teller. next pannel the lights go out with dark outlines of the people in the shop two robbers and the clerk. third pannel a fist hitting one robber and him falling.forth pannel the second robber slammed into the counter and knocked out. fifth pannel lights come up both robbers tied up.
ok next six pages are oliva/feather(black and white feathered hen) first page you see oliva in the cockpit of a plane in a fighter jet helmet. next pannel her looking over her shoulder from the front plane with a speech bubble saying"drop in 3 boys" you can also see six soldiers(furry or human dont matter) third pannel is seeing that have already jumped out with there chutes not yet open and a third ready to jump, fourth pannel oliva running to the back of the plane screaming missal(sp the rocket thing that goes boom lol) last pannel is the plane getting hit and going down.next page first pannel plane in two peices oliva laying on the ground one very dead soldier over her legs one hanging out of the plane dead and the third one a few feet off dead. next pannel is zoomed in on her face and a vioce is heard off the pannel saying "over here it went down over here" third pannel oliva jumping into the bushes. fourth pannel two soldiers in red walking up to the dead bodies one saying"well they all look dead". fifth pannel is the soldier who said nothing saying "lets make sure" and shooting a body. next page is the three soldiers who jumped from the plane one with a broken leg laying leaned against a log, one with his chute stuck in a tree hanging there, and one who is standing asking if every one is ok. next pannel is the one with the broken leg saying"minus a walking problem im fine" and the one in the tree chuckling. third pannel the one who is ok helping up the one with a busted leg, and the one in the tree reaching for his knife. fourth pannel same as the last but with gun barrels around the edges and a vioce off pannel saying" dont move". fifth pannel is then being led off by red suited gaurds in cuffs.
next page is the three captured soldiers tied up spread eagled in the middle of a room and a dark figure sitting on a chair infront of them(them seen from behind). next pannel is the dark figure saying "where is the rest of your crew?" and the soldier who was fine asking why he wants to know. next pannel is the figure asking the question again, and the same soldier opening his mouth only to get hit by a soldier in red who says "answer him". third pannel is the soldier saying there dead and the hooded figure saying show me. fourth pannel is the soldier who has talked saying "we jumped we dont know where it is". fifth pannel is the soldier with the broken leg getting hit in the leg with a bat and screaming. last pannel is hooded man saying again "where is the plane". next page, is the captives getting lead through the jungle. next page is oliva in a part of the plane checking on equiment(guns radio ect on the tables) with a vioce off pannel saying "there it is". third pannel is oliva jumping up into the top of the plane and hiding there. fourth pannel is the soldiers in red walking into the crashed plane. fifth pannel is soldiers outside looking into the plane with the one with bat inside it. next page is olivia jumping from her spot and knocking out the man with the bat. next pannel is her rolling into cover and grabbing a gun with the soldiers in red shocked. third pannel olivia popping out of cover and shooting two of the soldiers in red. fourth pannel is the last soldier in red screaming "come out now" fifth pannel is the captives beating down the last soldier with there cuffs. last page is a full page picture of oliva freeing her partners and saying "lets do what we came here to do.
full page seen of a court room the two on trail are the two robers from the qick shop as well as seeing a well dressed mouse(the prosocuter) in front of the judge. next page the mouse talking to the judge saying "these two men not only robbed an innocent man, but they tried to kill him. do we really want these men to have any chance of release, any chance to possibly kill someone?" pannel two on the page is an explosion and the doors of the court room being blown open. third pannel is two heavly armed men shooting there way into the court room. third pannel is the mouse laying on the ground scared as the judge is shot above him. fourth pannel is the two on trail and the two gun men walking out the door as the gun men fire into the room killing two guards. next pannel the mouse fleeing through a side door. last pannel the gun men setting up a bomb. next page a full page seen of the mouse in an alley as the courthouse explodes. next page again full page of the mouse in a dirty one bedroom apartment sitting on a bed head hung a beer in his hand.next page is the mouse talking to himself saying "i let them get away" then a pannel of him haggered standing in front of a mirror looking at himself. then a pannelof him looking away from the mirror tears falling from his face. next pannel him saying to himself "never again" then a view into a closet his paw hitting a small button in the corner. last pannel is the closet with an open hidden door revealing a costume folded up all we see is a very dark blue almost black body peice and a dark green cape. last two pages a full veiw of the costume laid on the bed and the mouse with his shirt off saying "dad im sorry but its time to take up the family bussiness"
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-1 olive holding the gun she shot the red clad soldier with walking through the jungle followed by the other three soldiers from her division the two "healthy" ones carring the injured one all with weapons. panel two the hurt soldier taking a sniper round. panel three olive yelling get down. last panel all of them heading for cover(sept our now dead friend).
-2 the soldier who did most of the talking from comic number two(lets call him mark) asking if anyone saw where the bullet came from. panel two the other soldier(lets call him ty) saying "yea right out of johns head". panel three mark saying not be a smart ass we're under fire. last panel ty saying he thinks it came from the north.
-3 olive asking ty too put his knife( flippo on the handle) in the side of the tree so she can use the reflection to find the sniper. second panel ty saying "that wont work and im not getting shot". third panel olive telling ty if they don't find the sniper they will all get shot. fourth panel ty sighing and putting the knife sideways in the tree.
-4 the knife getting shot off. panel two ty saying told you it wouldn't work. panel three olive saying "oh it worked I was looking for the shot not the reflection. panel four ty "so I almost got shot for nothing?"
-5 olive "not nothing I know where he is" second panel ty "good now we know where we'll got shot from great"
third panel mark"so what are we going to do about it" fourth panel olive Im going to grab the marksman rifle of our dead friend.
-6 mark "how the hell do you plan on doing that?" second panel olive "on the count of three we are going to switch spots and im grabbing the gun on the way there." third panel this is suicide but I trust you ok lets do this. last panel oliva "1...2...3"
-7 olive and mark switching spots, panel two olive grabbing the gun and a bullet wizzing past, panel three olive and mark in the other spots olive asking mark if he is ok. panel four mark saying yea he just took a bullet he is fine.
-8 ty asking where he took a bullet that is fine? panel two mark saying it was paw but he can still shoot small arms so he is fine. panel three olive saying sorry he got shot panel four mark saying just shoot him already panel five olive pointing around the tree and firing.
-9 a soldier falling from a tree clad in old gritting blue camo dead. panel two ty "hey that's not one of the reds who the hell is he?" panel three olive crouching and inspecting the body. panel four olive" im not sure but I think its the rebels who have my husband, panel five all three looking upset(madish sad)
-10 olive "questioning a dead man isn't possible lets see if we can pick up his trail" panel two olive following tracks. panel three mark and ty looting the body. panel four mark and ty get guns pointed at them from blue glad soldiers(all there gear is worn out like old and patchy).
- 11 ty and mark getting led off. panel two oliva hearing a twig snap from them being led off. panel three Oliva sneaking through the forest following them.
- 12 ty and mark getting tossed into a cell next to a similarly glad soldier.
panel two ty looking up shocked saying "holy shit its you, your alive." mark laying on the ground in the cell. panel three the clad soldier weakly grinning "yea too stupid too die, so what brings you guys too my cell?"
panel four mark telling them both too shut up we're prisoners we're going too die."
- 13 the clad soldier (lets call him jim for now tell i get feed back from the person responsible for oliva). "if your here where is oliva?" panel two mark "she ditched us" panel three ty "she did not she was following tracks like we should have been not looting the body we messed up again" panel four grungy blue glad guard yelling at them too shut it.
-14 red clad soldiers come firing into the camp. panel two the blue clad soldiers panicked and firing back. panel three olive sneaking into the camp fighting going on in the background. panel four olive taking the key off the dead guard.
-15 jim saying "took you long enough lets get out of here". panel two olive opening the cage "im here aren't I?" panel 3 the cage door open and ty mark and jim on there way out. panel four the shadowy figure from the second comic walking up towards them through the fighting.
-16 ty and mark seeing the figure and going holy shit. panel two olive and jim pushing them and screaming run. panel three all three running away. panel four close up of the figures mask(gryphon mask's outline) grinning.
-17 a chopper flying over head and dropping smoke. panel two smoke over the field and a ladder falling from the chopper. panel three ty and mark climbing the ladder and olive and jim aiming down there sights towards the smoke.
panel four olive, ty, and mark in the chopper and jim climbing into the ladder.
-18 a voice coming from the chopper radio sayinh "olive glad too finally meet you, the rest of you as well im glad your safe" panel two olive asking who the voice on the radio is. panel three the voice "im your employer and after we drop these three off I have a job for you" panel four "olive saying she works for the us government not some voice on the radio"
-19 the voice saying "every one has a price, so whats yours?" panel two olive saying she isn't for sale. panel three bullet wizzing into the plane and hitting jim and mark one in the head one in the chest. panel four the chopper swerving too avoid another bullet and the bullet hitting the hull of the chopper.
-20 mark, jim and ty falling out of the plane. panel two olive yelling nooooooo. panel three olive demanding they land.
panel four the voice saying they cant its too dangerous.
-21 olive saying she don't care land it. panel two the voice saying even if they did land all they would find is bodies and most likely be dead as well, all they can do is survive and get revenge. olive saying "you where right everyone has a price mine is revenge, what do you need done?" panel four the voice saying "I need you too save my city......."
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-1 miles mouse in the super hero costume from issue two sitting on a rooftop. panel two a close up of his eyes behind a dark purple mask the eyes all black an angry look on his face. panel three the view from seen one but miles mouse (working super hero name is cheese but feel free to improvise) standing and saying where too start. panel four a gun shot from off panel mild mouse turning too look.
-2 mouse dropping into an alley (flippo on the side of dumpster). panel two turning too see super pup holding the wrist of the bunny from the dinner. panel three super pup turning too see mouse. panel four the bunny head butting superpup.
-3 super pup falling backwards. panel two the bunny pulling a gun out of his pocket. panel three the bunny aiming at superpup. panel four mouse hitting the bunny in the jaw.
-4 view of mouse from behind behind him superpup holding the gun too the bunny. panel two mouse turning and yelling no. panel three the bunny kicking super pup in the gut. panel four the bunny holding the gun aimed at superpup.
-5 mouse telling the bunny "shoot me if you must shoot someone". panel two the gun going off. panel three the bullet bouncing off of mouse. panel four mouse walking towards the bunny.
-the bunny shooting mouse again. panel two the bullet bouncing off mouse. bunny shooting again looking scared. panel four mouse grabbing the gun.
-6 mouse crushing the gun in one paw. panel two mouse lifting and throwing the bunny. panel three superpup tying up the bunny. panel four mouse "I guess your not gonna kill him?"
-7 superpup "And risk a fight with some one who can deflect a bullet, yea im good. I think i'll let the cops take this one." panel two mouse helping pup too his feet. panel three mouse "bonus of the suit I guess, dad said it gave great power." panel four superpup "defecting bullets is more then just great power it makes you a true force too be reckoned with."
-8 oliva as feather standing at the end of the alleyway clapping. panel two cuddlesmuch and miles looking over. panel three feather saying "nice work but do you boys want too make a real difference?" panel four cuddles and miles looking a each other then back too oliva. panel five both asking "what exactly do you mean?"
-9 panel oliva saying "follow me" panel two oliva running off around the corner. panel three miles and cuddles looking at each other shocked.
-10 panel one miles and cuddles hurry after oliva. panels 2-5 miles and cuddles chasing oliva through the city and over roof tops.
-11 panel 1 oliva stopping infront of a warehouse. pannel two miles and cuddles catching her panting. pannel 3 oliva going through the door. pannel four cuddles and miles following.
-12 panel 1 the three of them walking into a large open room with an elevator in the center. panel 2 oliva heading towards the elevator motioning for them too follow. panel 3 everyone on the elevator as its headed down. panel 4 view from behind there heads of a lounge style room.
-13 panel 1 front veiw of them walking into the room miles looking around in awe cuddles looking unimpressed. panel 2 oliva turning too the boys and saying "my boss says we can make a difference if we work together." panel 3 cuddles asking "who is your boss?" panel 4 a radio on the desk (like old timey radio think the radio from brave little toaster or charlies angles) that has a 2 with a loins tail circling it much like an @ sign turns on and a voice comes out "i am, and we need your help too save this city."
-14 panel 1 cuddles smerking, and miles saying "your boss is a radio?". Pannel two olive with a smile saying to cuddles "that smirk is cute and let's be honest I thought the same way you are.... Panel 3 olive still speaking "...but he knew about you two and says he knows of a plan to try and blow up the city" panel 4 cuddles and miles in shock
-15 cuddles "how does he know?" Panel two miles "does it matter we have to stop it there are to many lives at risk to ask how right now"
Panel three Olivia "he's right we can ask the how's later, what we need is there where."
Panel four the radio "I can help with that, my contacts say one of the bombs is in the old power plant"
-16 cuddles in shock "that plant was nuclear if a bomb goes off...."
Panel two Olivia "... it'll level the city"
Panel three miles "not to mention the fallout"
Panel four Olivia "there's a chopper on the roof we must hurry"
Panel five all three running up steps at the back of the room
-17 Olivia jumping into the driver seat as cuddles and miles jump into the back
Panel two miles "do you know how to fly this thing?"
Panel three Olivia grinning "I'm a chicken we pretend well"
Panel four the chopper taking off
-18 cuddles and miles looking at each other in shock. Panel two cuddles "your just joking about the pretending right?" Panel three Olivia looking over her shoulder "we flying ain't we?"
-19 the chopper landing on the roof of the nuclear power plant
-20 all three jumping out of the chopper, panel two all three running to the door on the roof
-21 bold letters CATCH THE NEXT ISSUE TOO SEE THE EXITING CONCLUSION...
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-1 moon mouse(miles) walking into a room full of pipes and dails on the walls in the room is two henchmen.
Panel 2 miles "evening fellas, you do know this place is condemned right?". Both henchmen surprised
Panel 3 both henchmen shooting miles but the bullets bounce off
Panel 4 zoomed in on miles feet bullets at his feet/ feathers foot appears.
-2 feather two guns aimed at the henchmen "my turn" miles has a look of shock
Panel 2 miles stepping in front of feather "we don't kill"
Panel 3 super pup dropping from the ceiling on to the henchmen
Panel 4 the henchmen hitting the ground unconscious super pup "I wouldn't argue with him"
-3 feather annoyed "what the fuck am I supposed to do with all these bullets then?"
Panel 2 super pup "incapacitate them, no mortal wounds"
Panel 3 miles shocked "but..."/ Super pup "we don't have time right now, we can deal with your moral code later"
Panel 4 moon mouse to feather "no killing"
-4 reaper in a room filled with nuclear barrels(flippo on one) the device from issue two next to him.
Panel 2 the heros running into the room
Panel 3 a split panel of both reaper and super pup faces shocked a shared speach bubble "YOU"
-5 close up of reapers metal hand holding a detonator
Panel 2 reaper holding the detonator at arm's length "I'm already half gone, I have no issue blowing us all away"
Panel 3 split panel gunshot/close up of a bullet hitting the wrist of reaper bolts and wires flying
Panel 4 reaper screaming "BITCH"
-6 super pup lunging at reaper
Panel 2 cuddles hitting reaper
Panel 3 reapers metal arm letting out a blinding light
-7 blinding white panel with a speach bubble saying "what the..."
Panel 2 all three heroes on the ground
Panel 3 feather holding her head sitting up "who was that?"
-8 super pup leaning against the device"his name is reaper. Dude has a chip on his shoulder"
Panel 2 moon mouse on fours trying to get up "how do you know him?"
Panel 3 super pup offering to help feather up "we've met before, ran into him while tracking the murdering bastard bunny you let live."
-9 feather accepting help up moon standing in the background
Panel 2 feather moving towards the bomb "let's disarm this thing and get out of here."
Panel 3 super pup "can you disarm it?"
-10 feather working on the bomb most of her obstructed by it moon and super pup looking on
-11 panel 1 feather standing "I think we are safe"
Panel 2 super pup "let's get out of here"
Panel 3 all three climbing into the helicopter.
-12 reaper in a dark room similar to the one in issue two fixing his robotic hand
-13 reaper "thinks he won huh, thinks this changes anything I'll show him...."
Panel 2 reaper head thrown back eyes wide drool pouring from his mouth both hands in the air and the mechanical one working "...I'LL SHOW THEM ALL"
-14 the helicopter speaker kicking on with a static sound
Panel 2 from the speaker " I've found bomb number 2 it's under the Orange Mile Bridge
Panel 3 the helicopter landing on the bridge (looks similar to the Golden gate bridge)
-15 feather "why bomb this bridge? No traffic, and it only leads to Pencon island"
Panel 2 moon mouse "blowing up this bridge means no way out but more importantly no way in till it's fixed."
Panel 3 super pup "meaning a stay at another prison one he could escape from easier"
Panel 4 them finding the bomb on a support beam
-16 Feather disarming the bomb
Panel 2 moon mouse "odd no one is protecting it"
Panel 3 super pup turning shocked
-17 mostly black room with a semi visible bookcase/rug on the left side and the front end part of the top of a desk with bird like talon hands clasped together on it the wrists disappearing into the shadows. The only other thing visible is a pair of eyes. "That nut job thinks he can blow up my factory with out consequences?"
-18 same as 17 "time to teach him you don't mess with me"
Panel 2 close up of the eyes with a smile underneath having perfect teeth. Only eyes and smile revealed
-19/20 feather stopping the time
Panel 2(and the whole other page) all three hero's turning to see a humaniod figure made of sewage
-21 bold letters in a slanted font on a black background"DIE HEROS"
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-1/2 spread page veiw
Orange Mile bridge in the background the three hero's on the banks of the bay the bomb disarmed behind them in the foreground right side the hulking creature made of sewage from behind.
-3 Feathers face disgusted "what is that"
panel 2 moon mouse also disgusted "try the most foul thing I've ever smelt ugh"
Panel 3 super pup glaring "it's like every nut job I've ever fought is out tonight."
-4 the sewage creature turning and yelling at the heroes sewage spewing from its mouth.panel 2 moon turning to super pup “how do we fight this cause I am not punching that.” Super pup reaching into his utility belt tossing a pair of gloves to moon “there now shut up and punch him”
Panel three feather unloading a clip at the creatures
-5 the bullets barely leaving an impact as the creature growls
Panel two moon with the gloves on hitting the creature sparks shocking through it before the creature shoves moon away with an extended arm of sludge.
Panel three feather throwing a grenade at the creature the explosion causing it to separate
Panel 4 super pup throwing a blue canister at the creature
-6 the canister exploding freezing the creature before it fully reassembles
Panel two miles punching the creature while dripping in sewage the creature shatters
Panel three the parts of the creature slinking like worms into the river
Panel four moon and feather “I’m never swimming again”
-7 moon mouse starting to fly off “I need a shower “
Panel two super pup “hang on only feather knows how to get ahold of the radio mystery man, take this just in case”
Panel three super pup handing feather and moon mouse digital looking disks
Panel four Feather”these look like military gps...but more advanced how’d you get these?”
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