Hi folks!

I'm new to FA so this is my first journal. Please feel free to read my one and only submission for now; any feedback is welcome.

I'm not sure what I'm expecting here. I've been told you're all a nice crowd so I look forward to joining this community. I'm a general fiction writer that'll write about pretty much anything. I'd love to recieve as much good in-depth critique on my works as possible while here, so don't be afraid to be blunt and harsh.

Deiks