Next page: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/11215979/
Okay! Finally, page 1 of my comic.

I’ll be updating this weekly, although I won’t have a set day for it yet. They won’t all be this big.

With critique, I’m not so much looking for advice on the art but on the storytelling and writing. Is it obvious what’s going on? Is the pacing okay? That kind of thing.

These characters have been in my head for over a decade now. I’ve been trying to get them out in recent months by drawing but it’s not enough, so I’ll have to go for the long and difficult option of a comic. Ho hum. The advantage of a comic is that it forces me out of my comfort zone with art. I’m trying to work on pose and expression at the moment.

Anyway, I hope someone out there enjoys reading this. If it goes well and I don’t completely burn myself out I may do an issue two.