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My brother finally got his Zombie Bite tattoo done.
Unfortunately, I couldn't be there to witness it, but I'm proud of him.
I am also super happy because my friend and favourite tattoo artist was able to actually do the inking...
http://www.comicspace.com/flintlockfaerie/
Appearantly he freehanded all of the blood splatter and they found a much better font, which is excellent, because I wasn't really finding one with my standard fucking windows fonts.
This will go to scraps in a few days, but I'm happy and showing it off.
Unfortunately, I couldn't be there to witness it, but I'm proud of him.
I am also super happy because my friend and favourite tattoo artist was able to actually do the inking...
http://www.comicspace.com/flintlockfaerie/
Appearantly he freehanded all of the blood splatter and they found a much better font, which is excellent, because I wasn't really finding one with my standard fucking windows fonts.
This will go to scraps in a few days, but I'm happy and showing it off.
Category Photography / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 763 x 672px
File Size 61.9 kB
Ah, okay, they're in your gallery. I see that now. I hadn't actually looked at first.
They're decent, not bad ideas. You seem to play off of some very traditional horror themes, especially with the whole "The last thing I heard.." and whatnot. Which has a good effect, generally, which is why it's so well used, but it isn't especially unique. But if you're just going for traditional horror, there's no harm in that.
However, your grammar and punctuation take away from your story telling in places. You should proof read a little and explore the many uses of the comma. Think of the comma as your axe and the period as your shotgun in your war against the undead. Master them and you're set.
They're decent, not bad ideas. You seem to play off of some very traditional horror themes, especially with the whole "The last thing I heard.." and whatnot. Which has a good effect, generally, which is why it's so well used, but it isn't especially unique. But if you're just going for traditional horror, there's no harm in that.
However, your grammar and punctuation take away from your story telling in places. You should proof read a little and explore the many uses of the comma. Think of the comma as your axe and the period as your shotgun in your war against the undead. Master them and you're set.
I suppose I could attempt to, though I do not typically have very much free time and am not especially well trained in proof reading.
English was never a very strong subject for me.
And yes, certainly puppies are cute and cuddly, but furries, strickly, I don't find to be anywhere near as adorable. At all. Ever. I was just curious, though, as many furries insist on putting anthro characters into stories where human would do _just fucking fine_. So, bravo to you for not doing that. It was more a point of curiosity, though.
English was never a very strong subject for me.
And yes, certainly puppies are cute and cuddly, but furries, strickly, I don't find to be anywhere near as adorable. At all. Ever. I was just curious, though, as many furries insist on putting anthro characters into stories where human would do _just fucking fine_. So, bravo to you for not doing that. It was more a point of curiosity, though.
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