
Here are some other examples of words to avoid.
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In relation to the first point: I tend to write as much as I can without using those ‘helper’ verbs (and all forms of the ‘to be’ verb). It makes me work harder to find the right verb for a given sentence; it also helps me construct better sentences and work out how to best use the ‘show, don’t tell’ principle.
Check out https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/E-Prime for a primer into this way of thinking. It doesn’t always make my writing better, but it gives me a different perspective on it than I used to have.
Check out https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/E-Prime for a primer into this way of thinking. It doesn’t always make my writing better, but it gives me a different perspective on it than I used to have.
I wouldn't attribute overuse of 'was' being a bad word to use because it goes into the passive voice. Passive voice is actually preferred in fiction writing a lot of times because it sets up a better stage for showing rather than telling. I'd just attribute the 'was' usage simply to wordiness.
Nice descriptions though, and definitely agree with you on both accounts.
Nice descriptions though, and definitely agree with you on both accounts.
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