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Just a sketch of what I'm working on bit by bit. The file is huge though and my PC keeps restarting after a few minutes, so it's a bit annoying...
Anyway- my bunny Cyprian who knows mageeeeeeeec and can burn stuff if he wants to. Another dumb idea on my part since fur catches fire very nicely, but eh.
Anyway- my bunny Cyprian who knows mageeeeeeeec and can burn stuff if he wants to. Another dumb idea on my part since fur catches fire very nicely, but eh.
Category All / General Furry Art
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 839 x 646px
File Size 347.2 kB
This reminds me slightly of my friend Marisa's sketches which you won't find in her gallery :C
You did a good job on the arms and legs. I love the perspective work.
I feel like being mean today, and I haven't made a decent or helpful comment on your work in a long time. So, if you don't mind a bit of critique, here it does.
Well, I'm just gonna pick a random thing to start this off... First, I'd angle the back ear up a bit, somewhat in between where it first was sketched and is placed now... that will make the image a little more natural looking, and give the idea that the head is whipping around a bit instead of having the ears angled back like the forward momentum of sonic the hedgehog's arms. And it breaks of the uniformity of parallel lines too.
Secondly... I'd have the necklace flying further from the body a bit more as well... make it look a bit more jumpy and add more of an intense motion to the image...
Finally, there has been one thing in your work that is a little bit of a consistent error. You have a hard time drawing angles on the face a bit--usually in the nose and mouth area. In this example, the face looks like it's facing a bit too much forward, and gives it a little bit of the look that the face is being squished to the right... and could be fixed if you made the left side nostril less visible and ever so slightly smaller (like what you did with the eyes), and drew the mouth more towards the edges of the muzzle.
Ummm, maybe a little work on forward hand too. The index (pointer) finger's perspective looks a little off... like it's going off to the side a bit much, but maybe not.
Aside from that... this is very cool and above usual standards. You drew a lot of things right here, and don't get discouraged by the minor errors. Infact, only the muzzle part was something I would consider technically wrong, the rest was just my personal opinion.
Take care now.
You did a good job on the arms and legs. I love the perspective work.
I feel like being mean today, and I haven't made a decent or helpful comment on your work in a long time. So, if you don't mind a bit of critique, here it does.
Well, I'm just gonna pick a random thing to start this off... First, I'd angle the back ear up a bit, somewhat in between where it first was sketched and is placed now... that will make the image a little more natural looking, and give the idea that the head is whipping around a bit instead of having the ears angled back like the forward momentum of sonic the hedgehog's arms. And it breaks of the uniformity of parallel lines too.
Secondly... I'd have the necklace flying further from the body a bit more as well... make it look a bit more jumpy and add more of an intense motion to the image...
Finally, there has been one thing in your work that is a little bit of a consistent error. You have a hard time drawing angles on the face a bit--usually in the nose and mouth area. In this example, the face looks like it's facing a bit too much forward, and gives it a little bit of the look that the face is being squished to the right... and could be fixed if you made the left side nostril less visible and ever so slightly smaller (like what you did with the eyes), and drew the mouth more towards the edges of the muzzle.
Ummm, maybe a little work on forward hand too. The index (pointer) finger's perspective looks a little off... like it's going off to the side a bit much, but maybe not.
Aside from that... this is very cool and above usual standards. You drew a lot of things right here, and don't get discouraged by the minor errors. Infact, only the muzzle part was something I would consider technically wrong, the rest was just my personal opinion.
Take care now.
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