INSANELY overdue commission for
rikmach of his team's yearbook photos.
(also why is "commission" highlighted? Because it bears emphasizing, let's put it this way.)
rikmach of his team's yearbook photos.(also why is "commission" highlighted? Because it bears emphasizing, let's put it this way.)
Category Artwork (Digital) / Pokemon
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 930 x 398px
File Size 116.7 kB
Ahahaha, Awesome!
Alright, First...
Hega looks much more like a Heracross in your depiction and less like a human woman in your version than Mune's rendition does, which sorta goes slightly counter to the "Sexy Amazon" trope I was shooting for. Its still fantastically well done and a very interesting take on the concept.
Twofeather... Okay, How can I say this? Brilliant. Not only did you do a bang-up job depicting Native American-style decorations, you made him look enigmatic and Mystical, which is something I'm trying to go for with him. I feel this rendition of him is superior to the other two drawn of him so far.
Eli... Man, the boy cleans up well. You still have a way with Eli, and I love it more and more every time you draw him. I noticed the clothes you picked were thematic to the common style of dress of modern Native Americans, which works as Eli lived, essentially, on what is the pokeverse equivalent of a reservation
Lina- Again, you steers the looks of Lina more towards her Origins of a Rhyhorn- I'm indecisive on if I like it better than the other depiction of her, but it works on a couple levels. However, on that note, your depiction of her in goth clothes and makeup... Simply wonderful. Even if the rest wasn't good, this is unbelievable well done. Is she wearing a Dusk Stone?
Kudos, Kompy!
Alright, First...
Hega looks much more like a Heracross in your depiction and less like a human woman in your version than Mune's rendition does, which sorta goes slightly counter to the "Sexy Amazon" trope I was shooting for. Its still fantastically well done and a very interesting take on the concept.
Twofeather... Okay, How can I say this? Brilliant. Not only did you do a bang-up job depicting Native American-style decorations, you made him look enigmatic and Mystical, which is something I'm trying to go for with him. I feel this rendition of him is superior to the other two drawn of him so far.
Eli... Man, the boy cleans up well. You still have a way with Eli, and I love it more and more every time you draw him. I noticed the clothes you picked were thematic to the common style of dress of modern Native Americans, which works as Eli lived, essentially, on what is the pokeverse equivalent of a reservation
Lina- Again, you steers the looks of Lina more towards her Origins of a Rhyhorn- I'm indecisive on if I like it better than the other depiction of her, but it works on a couple levels. However, on that note, your depiction of her in goth clothes and makeup... Simply wonderful. Even if the rest wasn't good, this is unbelievable well done. Is she wearing a Dusk Stone?
Kudos, Kompy!
Thanks very much, especially with the criticism which I DO (mostly) agree with.
I admit, Mune's Hega is cuter than mine for the most part. Should I ever draw her again I'll probably sexify her up a smidgen more, play with the head design to make it less toony (which I admit is a conundrum of sorts, considering how I favor drawing my morphs).
Personal fave is Twofeather and I'm glad to see you agree with me there. Fun fact, I actually researched other avians for most of the feathers on him save the big white ones (left head - Staraptor, right head - Pidgeot, smaller feathers on body come from a Shiny Noctowl).
I totally agree that Eli still hasn't reached design perfection just yet, though this is definitely the closest one so far in my eyes. The jacket was actually a happy coincidence, as I was futzing with designs and when I started to switch to brown tones it hit me just how ideal this works for me. Yaay happy accidents.
Finally, I'm also torn with the other Safari girl, though less so than with Hega. I'm relieved to hear you're cool with me kicking up the fact she's slowly trying out the goth look -- I say "slowly" because that's way too conservative an attire for a normal goth (I chalk that up to her making a compromise in terms of attire to wear for the photo - fine, she'll dress nice but she's keeping the dark hues, dammit). the stone isn't anything specific but I could well see it being a "used" Dusk Stone turned into a piece of jewelery, yes.
So yeah, thanks for the feedback, HUGE apologies for the wait (and how I blew up at you over the chat, that was uncalled for on my end), hope this helps :3
I admit, Mune's Hega is cuter than mine for the most part. Should I ever draw her again I'll probably sexify her up a smidgen more, play with the head design to make it less toony (which I admit is a conundrum of sorts, considering how I favor drawing my morphs).
Personal fave is Twofeather and I'm glad to see you agree with me there. Fun fact, I actually researched other avians for most of the feathers on him save the big white ones (left head - Staraptor, right head - Pidgeot, smaller feathers on body come from a Shiny Noctowl).
I totally agree that Eli still hasn't reached design perfection just yet, though this is definitely the closest one so far in my eyes. The jacket was actually a happy coincidence, as I was futzing with designs and when I started to switch to brown tones it hit me just how ideal this works for me. Yaay happy accidents.
Finally, I'm also torn with the other Safari girl, though less so than with Hega. I'm relieved to hear you're cool with me kicking up the fact she's slowly trying out the goth look -- I say "slowly" because that's way too conservative an attire for a normal goth (I chalk that up to her making a compromise in terms of attire to wear for the photo - fine, she'll dress nice but she's keeping the dark hues, dammit). the stone isn't anything specific but I could well see it being a "used" Dusk Stone turned into a piece of jewelery, yes.
So yeah, thanks for the feedback, HUGE apologies for the wait (and how I blew up at you over the chat, that was uncalled for on my end), hope this helps :3
I'm sure you'll work something out with Hega, K, I believe in your artistic talent. As for the detail of the feathers? Nice, researching the look of the feathers is a detail I didn't even think of! I like it allot. As for Eli- yeah, he keeps getting better. I like how you did the nick in his ear. As for Lina being a "Conservative" Goth, it makes sense on a couple levels- she is conditions to not draw attention to herself if she can avoid it- and at the same time, Enamored by the goth look/ideals. Sorta conflicting, there. As for the wait, as I said before, no worries, and as for the chat, water under the bridge. :) I'm happy its done, though!
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