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Well, well, well. This is probably the story I have postponed the reading for the longest time ever (years), but I finally did it! ^^ And I don't regret it at all. Once started, I couldn't stop to read and I finished in less than one week (much to the regret of my homework >_>; ).

The story is very interesting, the characters a are credible, the descriptions, the style is well paced and the language is not too complex (English is not my native language). Some typos there and there (and one huge copying-pasting you forgot to remove), but I have not mush to say in the negative side for now.

In short, it's great, keep uo writing!

Yikes, which chapter had the copy-paste? :S I have a habit of leaving deleted scenes in at the end of my working copy, in case I decide to re-add them, so it could easily slip through ^^;

And thank you, much appreciated - I'll try to get the next chapter(s) out soon for you :)

Found the offending chapter (27). Only illustrated that a few days ago so probably screwed up the text when I did so. Thanks for the warning, now fixed ^^

You're welcome! ^^

And yay for the early next chapter! (assuming you're not still busy drawing naughty pictures again... ¬_¬ )

Oh there shall be more naughty pictures... but I try to interleave them with writing xD I actually work on the story 3-4 evenings per week, but it can take 2-3 weeks to finish a chapter because I reject and rewrite a lot of sections before moving on - and sometimes step back and rewrite something from a year ago so that events within the story tie up better ^^;