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Nora and Demi Tickle torment part 1

Nora and Demi Tickle torment part 1
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With in a matter of the two being dragged to the chamber. They were bound by their hands hanging only to the point where their toes touched the rocky floor.


"well, isn't It a marvelous mess you got me into." Nora hissed at Demi.


"I swear I didn't steal no artifact. What would I do with a gem of immoral power anyhow? Use It as a paperweight?"

As the two exchange insults, Zoland walks in. A large frown reached across her lizard face as she look at the two. Demi and Nora stare right back, awaiting in fear for what Zoland had plotted for them.
Zoland's eyes went up and down, sizing up the two for who knows what. Just than Zoland's frown turned to a grin. She moved back and forth, as If she was coming up with many horrible ways to slaughter the two.

Then, Demi..growing ever impatience yelled at Zoland. "If you are gonna kill us, just do It!" Zoland's grin turned back to a frown and she said. "I'm not aloud to kill you."


Nora, rather confused asked why. Which forced Zoland to explain the ordeal. "Heathens, have the right, for a 3 week trail. If they do not confess. They can walk free, If they do. Well, they can enjoy a nice hearty bowl of DEATH!"

Nora had a small grin on her face. Demi however rolled her eyes and stated the clear. "Yeah, but what stops you from ripping us apart to get a confession?"


Zoland simply stated. "Your crime."

Nora was confused about what she met. "Our Crime?"


"You only stole. And I have no proof that you have the gem, only hints. So no ripping you apart and whipping you til you beg."

Nora gave a sigh of relief. Then heard the words from Zoland's mouth. "However"

Nora's eyes fixed on Zoland, consumed about what comes next. "We do have ways, that will not make us need to sherd your blood. But will make you more than happy to rat each other out."


Zoland walked close to the two girls, grin growing ever bigger the longer she stares at them.

Nora, looked at Demi who's eye where big as plates, as If she knew what was coming. Nora out of confusion asked trying to clear the lump in her tought "What did you have in mind?"

Zoland fixed her eyes on Nora and said. "I'm so glade you asked. Want first hand demonstration?"

Nora felt Zoland's tail wiggling on Nora's side.

a hiccup came to Nora's throat as she tried to hold in a giggle, As a ghastly grin came to Zoland's face.

"Well,well.." Zoland smirked. "Someone has some soft scales huh? You should not have tookin that bath that soften you up a bit."

Nora still trying to hold in the laughter musters a "you..you.."

"Yes, I know about the rest of your thieving. And I tend to make you twos stay as fun as your thievings where."

With that  final taunt Zoland attacked Nora's underarms with het claws, Which finally made Nora burst out into laughter.

Zoland went for Nora's pits and sides. Teasing and tickling every white-spot, Forcing Nora to squirm and giggle.

Zoland then stopped, a smile growing on her face. Nora breathed a bit ,questioning  what Zoland was plotting next.


Zoland then walked over to a cell with a  Owlgan getting his feet tickled in It. She plucked a large feather from the Owlgan's tail.

Then, she walked over to Nora. Wiggling the feather across her nose, making her sneeze.

Zoland then replyed "Bellybutton?"

Nora eyes widen and her head shook frantically.

Zoland asked again. "ticklish?"

Nora bit her lip and teared up a bit, fear growing in her face.

Zoland merrily smiled and said "I'll take that as a yes."

With that Zoland wiggled the feather in Nora's navel. The poor girl could not hold her laughter in. She bucked and squirmed with little to no avail.

The feather dipping and swirling every which way Zoland please. Always keeping It right in Nora's belly button.

"Ready to confess yet?" Zoland boasted with a smug look on her face as she circles Nora's navel  with the long brown feather.

Nora, still giggling let out a barely pronounceable no.



With that no. Zoland satisfied grin turned to fluster frown.

"Looks like old Soft scales is stronger then you thought Queeny." Demi boasted.

With that Zoland's eyes fix on Demi. "You think you bested me Thief? I may not have broken her, but let us see If your little Wolf ego can be at the very least, giggled out of you."

With that Zoland took post haste to torment Demi's exposed midsection. Her fingers danced up and down on Demi's belly. squirming up and down, circling the wolf's navel with her large talon. Demi held It for as long as possible, but the laughter came free for her lips as Zoland gave the lil Wolf a massive raspberry.

Demi in her laughing fit, kicked and screamed,bucked and laughed all thou the raspberry.

"Oh, we got the Wolf laughing. Good, now tell me. You ready to confuse?" Zoland said with a taunting grin.

Demi stared at zoland, panting only to responded to zoland's taunt "Check up your rump, fat butt."

Zoland's face became red with rage and embarrassment. She stomped and roared, flustered and enraged at the two. Then, Zoland snapped her fingers with a new idea.

She garbed the two. And push them back to back. "what are you doing?" Nora asked puzzled.

"Testing a idea." Zoland smile.


"What idea?" Demi question.

"seeing If I can force you to tickle each other."

Nora, laughed at the idea "You are not very bright, how would you force us to tickle each other."

"Well, like this."

Zoland pulled the twos tail to the others tummy.

Nora's pointed tail to Demi's bare belly.

And Demi's Fluffy tail to Nora's smooth stomach.

Zoland wiggled the two's tails across the defenseless bellies.

It took little effort as the tails did as intended.

As Nora and Demi laughed they could not stop wagging their tails.

As, much as they wished  to stop their tails. the Others tail kept them giggling.

Did not help how Zoland set up their tails would tickle the others belly even more.


Zoland stretched out on a wall, enjoying her work. Watching the two laughing and struggling, trying undo the tail tied tickling.

Zoland hummed as they laughed.

After minutes of laughing. They two finally undid the tail tie.

Zoland stretched,giggling at the two who where sweating and drained. "You two look tried. Maybe you should tell me where you hide the artifact."

The two stared at Zoland with frustration and stuck their tongues out at the Lizard.

This only forced to fluster zoland more. "Fine, have It your way."

Zoland, marched to the top of the stairs and yelled at the two "This interrogation is done! I will see you tomorrow, GOOD NIGHT!"

And with that the door slammed.

Nora and Demi, stared at each-other for a bit..Then laughed. They where victories over Zoland. However..they realized..they where fall from free.


"So, Nor..you ready for round 2?" Demi asked.

"Well, Hopefully there is less Navel tickling..If not..well." Nora sighed.

"Don't worry, we will get out of this. Besides, remember she said she has to let us go If we survive It."

"true.." Nora said cracking a small smile. Demi started to try her best to give a speech of courage however, Nora had other ideas. Nora, reached her tail over to Demi's tummy and proceeded to tease It. Tickle giggled and cackled yelling at Nora how unfair It was.

However, Nora, in that moment. was having more fun then she had the whole trip.


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Nora and Demi Tickle torment part 1 - by Patientzero
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     Posted: 2 years ago
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     Theme: General Furry Art
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tickle   Nora   Demi   zoland   Lizard   Being   tickled   by   your   own   tail   Smartass   wolf   brat   Smug   White   Lizard   And   angry   Zoland  


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User comments
 
  zidders

#link     Posted: 2 years ago

  This is great. You're ahead of me as far as keeping dialogue off by itself for ease of reading. The only two problems I had with it were the tense (it kept flickering between present, and past tense), and the use of '2' instead of 'two'. Can't wait to read more-I like your characters. I like Zoland but I'm biased towards characters with 'Z' in their names hehe.

  patientzero

#link     Posted: 2 years ago

  thank you..sorry for the latness..I've been not feeling myself lately.

  zidders

#link     Posted: 2 years ago

  It's OK :3 I hope you find your center.

  fluffytummy

#link     Posted: 3 weeks ago

  I want to see the full version of that image.