Awww.... Love and forgiveness... Always so touching.

is that a Lauren Faust cameo I see?

That's what I thought too.

Where?

I see Starswirl, but not Lauren.

Fourth panel to the far right, Fausticorn is a beige-white alicorn with reddish-pink hair.

Oh, okay. Thanks.

Yeah, I see her now, to the far right of Starswirl.

How the heck could I have missed her?! Must've been pretty sleepy to have missed her like that.

man she looks wrecked. Not suprising after all that has happened. Quite the drain physcally, emotionally, and mentally.

the last 2 pages touched my feels lol very touching

In the first few panels I keeps on thinking of "You Raise Me Up"

https:// www . youtube . com / watch?v=aJxrX42WcjQ

awwwwwwwwwwwww

With the way this is paused until after your birthday, I am perfectly fine with it. IIt'sa hheartwarming place to pause.

all my daaaaws and snuggles to this page ^^

Wow, that actually really struck a deep chord within me. Bravo for this and the last page which I was lucky enough to read in one fell swoop. You are quite the eloquent painter both in story and storyboard. *hugs*

may you have a wonderful birthday that was wonderful i have been enjoying this comic quite a bit.

Just finally caught up on all these comic pages (how I do LOVE when links are provided to get through the paces easily with just a click ) and phew was that a travel worth it.

I just wish to bring my praise for this story as a whole, so far as it has come. The story kept surprising me, kept giving me things to consider before daring to put it into a specific theme to find out what to expect of things to come. I liked the twists and bends, the surprises and the things the reader could dare to foresee.
Your take on characters and the focus on things taken directly from the show and formed well into the canon of this story was very intriguing. How no character was allowed to be shown as perfect and flawless, where they all had flaws to see, and some exploited very fascinatingly. Even this 'agent' from beyond the known world, powerful as a god and dishing out truths left and right, shown to be wrong and ashamed plenty of times too.
Really put it well together.

The art is just gorgeous. Sometimes Nat's design felt like it clashed against the more simple design of the ponies, but it also did its part to show how otherworldly she is like that. It made it work well.
Nice, smooth lineart, good colouring. Shading only used in specific settings worked well, you didn't felt the shades were missing in the rest. Small details in designs and changes here and there. The way you illustrated the different types of magic and energy. The new, different lore and order you made for different creatures from different worlds...

Well, all I can say is praise for this. I can hardly imagine the work this must be, to show such wonderful entertainment for free and for all to enjoy. Page after page, all fully coloured like this. So, yes, thank you for this great story, thank you for letting us all enjoy it freely. And thank you for having more to come.

Keep up the good work

You just bought the next spread. Thank you so much! :D

Might as well give you as much as of my thoughts I can provide from reading this amazing comic so far

Having more to look forward to is just a bonus 83