Thank you so much for putting in all of this effort on my account, my appreciation is boundless. The detail and atmosphere was as good as always, you also represented me very well.
I deeply enjoyed reading threw this completely, that part with the password was a nice touch haha.
Only thing I can say that was a bit off was the spelling in some places, but other then that this incredible.

Thank you again ^^

I'm super glad you liked it Scale, it means a lot that you think I represented your character well. You're vey much welcome.

As for the spelling issues, yeah, I suck at proofreading.

Brilliant work Tych! Loving the description on this one. It paints such a vividly morbid picture it tugs at the griminess of my heartstrings! The dialogue is quick and witty when it needs to be and helps to carry the narrative flow at a reasonable pace. The heavy dumps of explanation don't feel too heavy and provide enough masterful execution that they made me feel enriched in the world rather than growing tired of being told what I was supposed to be envisioning. And what an interesting world it was! (So Lovecraftian it made me cry bloody tears! :'D).

Simple spelling errors aside, there is still the issue of when you have characters talk and you end their sentence with a period followed by the comma and end quotations. The period is not needed in this situation! (But seriously though I get the confusion with it. English is the chodeboxiest of languages XP). Another subjective gripe I have with the story is that at times the direction and pacing threw me off slightly but that's just me. You were writing something short and things like this were inevitably going to rear their ugly mugs, so no worries there (it's probably not even an issue, probably just me being a nitpicking twat ;3).

Once again, I salute you in your efforts Tych! You're a skilled writer that can capture interest and invoke multiple feelings within the reader. I'll always be looking forward to the next one!

Thanks a lot Damien, I'm really glad you liked it. Still working on improving stuff like dialogue and spelling, its mostly lack of patience on my part to proofread. Thanks for the great feedback as always, its greatly appreciated.

You write so much better than me ;-; Holy Moly

Aw, don't think like that, Everybody can be a good writer, it just takes practice.

Heh, I don't like to write very much and lost a bit of my interest in reading because I rarely find nice stuff to read... but it's always good to find people who do it well. I actually wrote 9 chapters of my ideas for my manga and posted here on FA. I don't plan on writing anymore, though

You should keep writing, the only time you stop learning is when you stop doing. What a lot of people don't understand about artists(and what a lot of artists don't understand about themselves), is that there is no such thing as becoming a master writer, or master artist. As a person who creates, be they an author, sculptor, painter, manufacturer, inventor, never stops learning about their craft. You continue to learn and grow your entire career, always discovering new things as both you change and the world changes around you. Always remember, skill and ability are never unable to be subjected to interpretation, all things are dependent on perspective.

"I have failed God, and humanity, because my work never reached the quality it should have."-The last words of Leonardo Da Vinci

Wow. WOW. Da Vinci said that? Man, that's nuts... holy shit. Wow. I'm shocked. I... I don't wanna be perfect with my drawings, but I wanna reach at least an acceptable level, but I always feel so far away from that.

It is pretty crazy, but yes, he did. It's understandable to feel far away from being acceptable, I know how that feels, trust me. As long as you keep writing, you always keep improving.

Whew! That was a really good read man. I was so excited to see how everyone's personality would unfold as the story progressed further. It was really neat to read how Scale behaves as well as how the comedic Crow and Cat scoff at each other. I had a lot of fun imagining all of this play out. Wonderful story dude, it truly was exciting

Thanks a lot Pash, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.