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Hello again there, readers! Ki/Kit/Kitty here, with Chapter 2 of Journey Through the Darkness, entitled Fall of a Legend.
In Ch.2, I explore more into the history and inner workings of the organization, showing how it has the ability to truly twist even the most noble of people, to meet its darkness. In addition, I add some cultural references. Can you spot them?
I'd really appreciate feedback, and I hope you enjoy Ch.2!
Legal stuff: Pokemon and all related characters are copyright Nintendo, Satoshi Tajiri, Pokemon USA, and I believe GameFreaks Inc. This story was not created with the intention to make profit off of the copyrighted works. The plot of the story, however, is mine. All mine. So there. Nyeh.
Summary:
There is a famous hacker nicknamed Crimson Pikachu, whose crowning achievement is the fall of the Hoenn branch of Team Rocket. Unfortunately for him, he cant leave well enough alone, as the result of his hacking attempt on Team Rocket's core computer server leaves him on a.. Journey Through the Darkness
(totally cheesy summary, I know)
In Ch.2, I explore more into the history and inner workings of the organization, showing how it has the ability to truly twist even the most noble of people, to meet its darkness. In addition, I add some cultural references. Can you spot them?
I'd really appreciate feedback, and I hope you enjoy Ch.2!
Legal stuff: Pokemon and all related characters are copyright Nintendo, Satoshi Tajiri, Pokemon USA, and I believe GameFreaks Inc. This story was not created with the intention to make profit off of the copyrighted works. The plot of the story, however, is mine. All mine. So there. Nyeh.
Summary:
There is a famous hacker nicknamed Crimson Pikachu, whose crowning achievement is the fall of the Hoenn branch of Team Rocket. Unfortunately for him, he cant leave well enough alone, as the result of his hacking attempt on Team Rocket's core computer server leaves him on a.. Journey Through the Darkness
(totally cheesy summary, I know)
Category Story / Pokemon
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 49.5 kB
again, I'm glad you liked it ^^ I figured, hey, why not make up more stuff? and I was hoping he would be good ^^ like I said, I show hwo it has the ability to truly twist even the most noble of people to meet its darkness. Joachim seemed like the perfect example, going from the famous nice scientist guy, to eeeeeevil scientist. you've got me wondering though.. what syntax/diction errors are you talking about? and yeah, 9 pages was already pushing it. I wouldn't want to be trying to cram too much content into one lil chapter. by the way, I should get it out in 3-4 days, depending on what happens
haha, yeah. at first I thought he should become a pikachu. that wasn't my original plan, Crimson Pikachu just sounding like a cool nickname, but then I thought 'maybe he SHOULD become a Pikachu. add a little irony or whatever', but then I changed my mind. that'd be too cliche, like you say (hey, I rhymed!). Umbrreon seemed like a nice choice. because Eevee DNA is so unstable it would be the perfect reason for it to be used, not to mention the fact that it's not too powerful yet not too week
haha, yeah. at first I thought he should become a pikachu. that wasn't my original plan, Crimson Pikachu just sounding like a cool nickname, but then I thought 'maybe he SHOULD become a Pikachu. add a little irony or whatever', but then I changed my mind. that'd be too cliche, like you say (hey, I rhymed!). Umbrreon seemed like a nice choice. because Eevee DNA is so unstable it would be the perfect reason for it to be used, not to mention the fact that it's not too powerful yet not too week
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