
So a long time ago I started trying to write Lunari's backstory.
It was... bad. Mostly cheese, to be honest. I've improved a lot as a writer since then, and found that I rather like third person over first person. So I've started rewriting it, making a second, less-crappy draft. I've also figured out some gaps in the original story, and more about her wold in general, and expanded on some stuff accordingly.
Here is the second part, detailing Lunari's experience with public school. After this I think I'll be caught up to what I had released before, meaning the next part to come out will be new stuff, HOORAY!
Lunari's Ref Sheet: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15383359/
Part 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16714708/
Part 3: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17065735/
Part 4: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17145283/
Part 5: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17163847/
It was... bad. Mostly cheese, to be honest. I've improved a lot as a writer since then, and found that I rather like third person over first person. So I've started rewriting it, making a second, less-crappy draft. I've also figured out some gaps in the original story, and more about her wold in general, and expanded on some stuff accordingly.
Here is the second part, detailing Lunari's experience with public school. After this I think I'll be caught up to what I had released before, meaning the next part to come out will be new stuff, HOORAY!
Lunari's Ref Sheet: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15383359/
Part 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16714708/
Part 3: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17065735/
Part 4: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17145283/
Part 5: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17163847/
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 104 x 120px
File Size 83 kB
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