i finally cleaned this up and got it to how i like it. i'm hopping some kind soul will take a look at this and be willing to gift me with some art of him, but i know that's selfish and i have no earth monies for a commission. so i leave it up to you, the reader. all i ask in earnest is that you leave me some feedback and let me know if my writing is any good. i really need an unbiased opinion and to know what i need to improve on.

blua blua blua, i talk to much. anyway, hope you enjoy it.


A chimera, Kemthis’s scaled skin shines like a polished gem. They are small except for at the chest, his abdominal area, and following down the bottom length of his tail. His blood comes from that of a succubus, the Sartans, the Patryns, and ruby dragon of the labyrinth. Crimson red scales make up most of the coloration decorating his hide. Alternating large black and small green dragon stripes line his body similar to the stripes of a tiger. His wings are membranous. Shaded with black on there inner folds and seeming to be bleached along the bones. There exterior is the same fiery red as most of his other scales. Covering his body are blue runes that leave only his palms, head, and bottom of his feet unmarked. All of which are intricately linked, though none of them overlap.

Six horns adorn his head. They crest from the start of the hairline. They are black with chalky green coloration at there tip that make them look tarnished. The first two horns curve like a katana upward and slightly back. They extend nearly half a foot. The second pair curving back from just before the top of the head, laying back and arcing forty degrees above the horizon. The last of the horns come from just past the top of the head. These jut almost strait back like the sword of the samurai facing the sky. A slight upward tilt gives the suggestion downward slash just being released. Together they could almost be the tracers of the blades tip during the swing.

The spines along his back and tail are close set with no more then three inches between them. Holding to the shape of a raptor claw they continue in a single row. Starting at a height of only an inch at the base of the neck, they raise to three inches and pettier out to a height of one half at the tip of the tail. The aforementioned limb being almost five feet long and as thick as his wrist at its base and coming to a nub the size of his thumb at it tip.

Just below the wings are two pairs of segmented tentacles. A foot short of his tail, they are only half as thick. The bone like sections are about two inches in length, they protect them from damage as well as making them affective weapons. Such rigged defenses make them much less flexible then such appendages normally could be. There’re able to grab objects no smaller then a bottleneck or sword handle; but, only if wound about a few times. The grip still being a little loose and there fine manipulation is far inferior to his hands.

His hair is a deep midnight black frosted with emerald green. It is long and spikes out as it flows down the back of his neck and between his wings. Bangs with the horizon of a shark’s jaws hang down to just above his eyes. Scattered threw ought the main of his hair, silver clasped bands shine with what look like Celtic runes. These ties hold his hair in place through the use of a web work, keeping the long stands from obscuring his vision during fast movement. His eyes gleam gold in the sunlight. A single vertical slash of void is the pupil. They are those of a reptile; or perhaps, a demon. The iris’s peering into the soul with sight beyond that of any mortal man.

His hands are for the most part that of a human’s anatomy. The bone structure is a great deal more durable then a man’s, able to lock firmly into a solid weapon. Meant to slash into both flesh and bone with great power. The claws that extend from the fingers are curved talons. The inside of the crescent is as sharp as any blade used in combat. There overall composition is geared toward digging through the flesh and latching onto the bone beneath. His feet are those of a creature meant to run. The heel raised high and extended to the length of about a foot. The claws are much longer then those on the hands. At least a third of a foot in length, they hold to the same shape and design as those on his hands. He is able to dig into the ground before springing into the air for flight. There overall form is close a dragons, but with minor alterations to support a primarily upright posture.

He keeps himself in excellent physical condition. He has never been interested in muscle that would restrict his movement. Built more like a gymnast then a body builder, he prides agility and the ability to avoid physical damage rather then dealing it out. That in mind, part of every day is spent maintaining his ability to stay one step ahead of the enemy.

His face is that of a young man. No more then half way threw his twenties. His muzzle is lined with vicious looking teeth that curve back, latching into the meat and tearing it away from the flesh from the bone. The muzzle its self is short, ending in less then three inches. He had never had a need to root through his prays bowls and was never intended to, his hands always doing that work for him. His tongue is forked like that of a lizard, able to extend a foot from his mouth. The face is for the most part humanoid though. In place of eyebrows he has a small line of upward curving horns. The ears are like that of an elf. Both about five inches long and holding to the shape of a spearhead. The form portrays the face of a dragon evolving toward human.

His pants are simple jeans, once black, but have faded a great deal in there days of use. Now there color is more that of half burned coal. His hands, forearms, and feet are wrapped in honey leather died black. This thin, durable hide helps him to endure the onslaught of constant blows.