
Persona: Shattered Dreams (Chapter IV)
Edit: I realise there are plenty of errors, both with things like spelling and weird plot details. (Ezra's walking out with an open briefcase?) I think I'll leave the rewrite work till the whole thing's finished, in case I decide to publish it as a book.
>> I apologise for taking so long, but here it is finally. Hope you guys haven't given up on me yet. =3
For the uninitiated: in my Persona 3 fiction, the Evokers were changed from guns to, well, exploding collars. Go figure.
The Midnight Channel starts to ruin some of our characters' lives.
Ryuumajin's dungeon is, well, an Okami manga. I assure you, things will get nasty later.
>> I'd like to take the opportunity to mention: if this story was a game, each Persona-summoning character is also the other characters' associated Social Link. Higher S-Link ranks means that the characters gets EXP multiplier boost based on the total average Rank. Other effects include the ones in Persona 4 (receiving fatal blows, heal ailments, special moves) and combination skills that are only possible on a minimum shared Rank. E.g. Rank 2 on Dobb and Andy enables Shadow Quake (medium Almighty damage on all enemies, with small chance of Dark-based instant death).
In other words, a team that knows each other well, will kick Shadow ass pretty well too. Other combo skills: Rank Max on Ezra and Yaali gives the skill Doom Fractal (severe Almighty damage to all enemies, high chance of inflicting random ailments and -nda debuffs). Rank Max on all seven characters gives Last Pantheon (9999-damage all-target Almighty attack, drains all SP for the casting character) the most powerful move in the game, which may be plot-relevant as well.
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>> I apologise for taking so long, but here it is finally. Hope you guys haven't given up on me yet. =3
For the uninitiated: in my Persona 3 fiction, the Evokers were changed from guns to, well, exploding collars. Go figure.
The Midnight Channel starts to ruin some of our characters' lives.
Ryuumajin's dungeon is, well, an Okami manga. I assure you, things will get nasty later.
>> I'd like to take the opportunity to mention: if this story was a game, each Persona-summoning character is also the other characters' associated Social Link. Higher S-Link ranks means that the characters gets EXP multiplier boost based on the total average Rank. Other effects include the ones in Persona 4 (receiving fatal blows, heal ailments, special moves) and combination skills that are only possible on a minimum shared Rank. E.g. Rank 2 on Dobb and Andy enables Shadow Quake (medium Almighty damage on all enemies, with small chance of Dark-based instant death).
In other words, a team that knows each other well, will kick Shadow ass pretty well too. Other combo skills: Rank Max on Ezra and Yaali gives the skill Doom Fractal (severe Almighty damage to all enemies, high chance of inflicting random ailments and -nda debuffs). Rank Max on all seven characters gives Last Pantheon (9999-damage all-target Almighty attack, drains all SP for the casting character) the most powerful move in the game, which may be plot-relevant as well.
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>> Many things that were also in Okami: Flowers! Rivers! Trees! Animals! Valleys! (Ancient evil!)
>> Yep, it's creepy all right (but still doesn't compare to Yaali's world). I took a leaf from a few horror manga, just as I'm putting videogame/anime bits into Ryuu's world.
>> Yep, it's creepy all right (but still doesn't compare to Yaali's world). I took a leaf from a few horror manga, just as I'm putting videogame/anime bits into Ryuu's world.
I imagine Yaali's world would be a very clinical complex, all white and smelling of antispetic solution and stuff with slight hum of something that not unlike a generator.
And then comes static noise.
And then comes screaming of pain and moaning of pleasure.
And everything becomes like something out from silent hill.
But then everything comes back to normal after several minutes!
And then comes static noise.
And then comes screaming of pain and moaning of pleasure.
And everything becomes like something out from silent hill.
But then everything comes back to normal after several minutes!
Daaamn, dude's a mad engineer/biologist.
"Why hello there audience!" A goat in spotless white Lab coat greeted them. He had weird accent that sounds like he came somewhere in the deepest part of central Europe.
"Welcome to yet another installment of 'Probing the Unprobable', where I and my lovely seven sla ..." the camera panned accross seven young men in shiny black uniform, each of them blindfolded, gagged, and wore a headphone on their ears "I mean assitants are going to experiment the shit out of everything."
"Come on now, it's time for some Science!"
"Why hello there audience!" A goat in spotless white Lab coat greeted them. He had weird accent that sounds like he came somewhere in the deepest part of central Europe.
"Welcome to yet another installment of 'Probing the Unprobable', where I and my lovely seven sla ..." the camera panned accross seven young men in shiny black uniform, each of them blindfolded, gagged, and wore a headphone on their ears "I mean assitants are going to experiment the shit out of everything."
"Come on now, it's time for some Science!"
It all started as an attempt to train gTranslate.
It ends with this:
Persona: Mimpi-mimpi retak
BAB IV: Samaran
http://pastebin.com/m5e4e4473
It ends with this:
Persona: Mimpi-mimpi retak
BAB IV: Samaran
http://pastebin.com/m5e4e4473
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