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It's here! Finally! Journey Through the Darkness 8: With the Wind at Their Heels is HERE. It's been a bit .. I tried to upload more than twice in a month but I ran into a dead end, but about a week ago I finally punched through and dragged myself to the finish.
This chapter focuses on the formulation of the plan and infiltration of the Team Rocket base. This chapter details a bit about the base itself, and how it appears and operates, down to a fine detail. It also talks about the history of the base, as an added bonus.
Also, expect some concept art soon, as a special bonus.
This chapter focuses on the formulation of the plan and infiltration of the Team Rocket base. This chapter details a bit about the base itself, and how it appears and operates, down to a fine detail. It also talks about the history of the base, as an added bonus.
Also, expect some concept art soon, as a special bonus.
Category Story / Pokemon
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File Size 51 kB
Wow. They could have simply used the front door....... Or not........ I am starting to love this series.....
"“Darn it! How can I type like this?!"
"You wont need your silly little fingers"
One thing that vexes me is the way the entire story is written in the present tense... Kinda like reading the minibuffer on a game....
"“Darn it! How can I type like this?!"
"You wont need your silly little fingers"
One thing that vexes me is the way the entire story is written in the present tense... Kinda like reading the minibuffer on a game....
hehe, yeah .. I'm glad you're liking it ^^
yeah um I dont like writing in past tense all teht ime. I prefer present tense because I seriously dont feel like A: dealing with past tense and B: dealing with how to write past events in past tense. keeping the present to what's presently happening in teh story and the past to what had happened in the past of the story or a past event makes things a LOT easier
yeah um I dont like writing in past tense all teht ime. I prefer present tense because I seriously dont feel like A: dealing with past tense and B: dealing with how to write past events in past tense. keeping the present to what's presently happening in teh story and the past to what had happened in the past of the story or a past event makes things a LOT easier
I was waiting for this review foreverrrr. you're one of the few that gives me constructive criticism ^^
yeah, for some reason I was thinking about Charlie's Angels, then all of a sudden it struck me: 'Bosley sounds like Bonsly!' and I couldn't resist but to include it. Besides, it seemed perfect. And, I figured, it's the time for ACTION and ADVENTURE! It's the CLIMAX of the story! Woo! ^^
I figured it was time for a cliffhanger. i mean, you know, you always need a good cliffhanger sometime. I'm not telling ya' how it ends though
yeah, for some reason I was thinking about Charlie's Angels, then all of a sudden it struck me: 'Bosley sounds like Bonsly!' and I couldn't resist but to include it. Besides, it seemed perfect. And, I figured, it's the time for ACTION and ADVENTURE! It's the CLIMAX of the story! Woo! ^^
I figured it was time for a cliffhanger. i mean, you know, you always need a good cliffhanger sometime. I'm not telling ya' how it ends though
it's okay. I totally understand being busy
yes, I appreciate the constructive criticisms from you. what's good in doing stuff if all people do is kiss your butt and leave no comments on improvement? not to imply that's what's being done, but you know what I mean
that attack would be Seed Flare. it's Shaymin's signature move
yes, I appreciate the constructive criticisms from you. what's good in doing stuff if all people do is kiss your butt and leave no comments on improvement? not to imply that's what's being done, but you know what I mean
that attack would be Seed Flare. it's Shaymin's signature move
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