really loved this series ^^

And now it's even better! Scooped out the stuff that didn't fit the tone and packed it up tighter!

*bows* well thank you, you've an amazing writer

I think I'll have to read through this and your original version to see what you changed.

It's still some of the best sexualized tf around, and probably the best silicone breast expansion work I've read period. The fact that you do this neat consensual bimbo tf thing only makes it better honestly.

It was mostly stuff in the beginning and end that people had pointed out felt strange or uncomfortable in their relationship. I found while editing that those spots made the tone suffer so I revised them into something more fitting.

So I reread them, and felt like giving you a more detailed review/comment.

Still loved the revised work, and definitely felt it improved on the original. And not merely in a sense of improved polish or editing.

Like you stated you changed the tone of their interactions to make a more lighthearted and fun sexual romp, and I feel you succeeded. Though the change from "humiliation" to "corruption" might not necessarily have been needed, since two consenting adults exploring a kink should be able to have an honest conversation about some sort of weird fetish like that. Still I do agree that it improved the work.

The growth and tf was still excellent, and yet remains some of the finest bimbo/sexualized tf I've ever read. I'm a real sucker for implant growth tf with this sort of thing since I feel it highlights a stronger sense of transformation. They've changed more as it were. (Not to say that your other stories that don't incorporate that element are inferior. Variety is wonderful, even in magic boob growth explanations.)

The ending alterations are perhaps the more important. The removal of fucking from Tess' dialogue about limits and agreements makes her seem cutesy and fun. Even though a more vulgar tf wouldn't be bad, you've set a consistent tone and the new dialogue is better fitting.

Then the added paragraph where Chris sees his girlfriend in the ditsy fake titted bimbo walking around is a really wonderful part. I'm a complete sucker for that sort of thing, and love to see it in consensual tf/tg sex works.

So yeah, on the whole this is a fine improvement and continues to show you're increasing skill as a writer. Glad you posted this and I'll look forward to you ever continuing this story line past the second part should you choose to.

I really enjoyed this. I like consensual tf's and I really like how you did your mental effects. You have a great ability to describe the sensual and I am very much enjoying your writing style. I have read a couple of your stories so far and all have been good. Still plenty left though! : )

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it that much! Consensual TFs are a fun space to explore in writing.

I finally got around to reading this, and holy shit. This is some fantastic writing, Kotep. Seriously, based on the tags I should hate this story, but I absolutely love it. The descriptions, the elegance of the conflict, the realistic way the characters treat drug use... it’s really something else. Great job! :D

Thanks! It's always nice to hear that my stories can appeal even to people who don't necessarily like that specific kind of TF!

These two are amazing~ love willing bimbo stuff~