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To my mate, hun, I will never leave you, I know this well enough to stay. This was written out of spite towards those who do not understand what it's like to be hated for love. Hated for love...what hypocrisy is this?
I hate you because you love someone...>.< Yeah...Smooth Move There Buddeh.
I hate you because you love someone...>.< Yeah...Smooth Move There Buddeh.
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I think this was VERY well done Deth! =P
The message was WELL executed, DESPITE what you may think! =O
Also, some tidbits:
1.) Even if you can't see/hear it, you actually strung together PERFECT iambic tetrameter ALL the way through (with the small exception of line 11). \(^o^)/
2.) It seemed like you were going for a rhyming couplets later on in the poem, yet the beginning started off rough in that particular area. (but this is NOT important; don't mind me, I just do this if there's a NOTICEABLE pattern) =/
3.) In (line 1), did you mean "condemn"?
YOU HAVE DONE WELL YOUNG YOTE! ;3
The message was WELL executed, DESPITE what you may think! =O
Also, some tidbits:
1.) Even if you can't see/hear it, you actually strung together PERFECT iambic tetrameter ALL the way through (with the small exception of line 11). \(^o^)/
2.) It seemed like you were going for a rhyming couplets later on in the poem, yet the beginning started off rough in that particular area. (but this is NOT important; don't mind me, I just do this if there's a NOTICEABLE pattern) =/
3.) In (line 1), did you mean "condemn"?
YOU HAVE DONE WELL YOUNG YOTE! ;3
I'm not gay, but I have one thing that you don't see a lot of out there: Respect
I, myself, had an idea for a "Hated for Love" sort of concept running in my head, but it's slipped away since then without being written :( Mainly because the subject was a little more taboo than homosexuality.
But in agreement with everyone above, for a quickly thrown together poem, you've done a wicked-good job on the rhythm and rhyme! I like it! -clap-
I, myself, had an idea for a "Hated for Love" sort of concept running in my head, but it's slipped away since then without being written :( Mainly because the subject was a little more taboo than homosexuality.
But in agreement with everyone above, for a quickly thrown together poem, you've done a wicked-good job on the rhythm and rhyme! I like it! -clap-
I know not everyone is a hater, I just really get annoyed with the one who do, because it creates a barrier that will only thicken unless something breaks it. I don't want to be stuck on the outside any longer than I have to.
I am very thankful that you have respect, and I certainly appreciate you reading my poem ^.^ *hugs*
I am very thankful that you have respect, and I certainly appreciate you reading my poem ^.^ *hugs*
I must say, that is an absolutely beautiful poem.
This gay wolf can fully sympathize with you, some days it hurts so bad you feel as if you're beating your head against a wall. It's going to be a long road ahead in order to achieve more than equality -- dignity and respect is what we must strive for.
Stay strong. Voice your frustration at how you are treated as a person (because some anger is necessary when you want to being taken seriously) but never lose control. Know that you have brothers, sisters and straight allies, out there. Support them all when you can, because they'll return the favor. And above all else, keep on loving!
Once again, it is a wonderful poem, and it really made my day to have come across it! ^-^
This gay wolf can fully sympathize with you, some days it hurts so bad you feel as if you're beating your head against a wall. It's going to be a long road ahead in order to achieve more than equality -- dignity and respect is what we must strive for.
Stay strong. Voice your frustration at how you are treated as a person (because some anger is necessary when you want to being taken seriously) but never lose control. Know that you have brothers, sisters and straight allies, out there. Support them all when you can, because they'll return the favor. And above all else, keep on loving!
Once again, it is a wonderful poem, and it really made my day to have come across it! ^-^
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