Well well, this is something! =3

I haven't seen a poem from you since that one you showed me in your gallery a WHILE back! =P

Gotta admit though, this is refreshingly descriptive! ^^

The snowfield of life...I couldn't imagine a better metaphor for it. =/

You kept the snow theme going throughout the entire poem too:

1.) use of the word "blanketing"
2.) use of the word "blinding"
3.) use of the word "veil"
4.) use of the word "burrow"
5.) the line of "a cry of hope and rescue."

*sigh of enjoyment* (-_-)

Good stuff! ;3



However, I'm curious about this line --> "seeps past of the inner stronghold,"

Is that how it's SUPPOSED to sound? =P