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Aidan, a oddly colored Arcanine, feels out of place being on a team full of Pokémon of great size and power, especially when the leader of the team happens to be a Snorlax of immense size and his childhood friend, but a chance encounter with a famous wish granting Pokémon may change more than he expected...
This may be the longest full story I've written for here in a long time, not including the series I've been doing of late. It's also a big change from what I've been writing of late, but it's also something I had a lot of fun doing as I'm a big fan of the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon games so I hope I did them some justice as this is a fanfic.
I also hope you all enjoy it
Aidan, Atlas, Doryu, Terran, Rhyfel, Aldo, Altha, Lupe, Lucia, and Skylar are my characters.
Arcanine, Lycanroc, Snorlax, Dragonite, Aggron, Alakazam, Audino, Exploud, Toucannon, Keldeo, Jirachi all other Pokémon and the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon games belong to Gamefreak/Nintendo.
This may be the longest full story I've written for here in a long time, not including the series I've been doing of late. It's also a big change from what I've been writing of late, but it's also something I had a lot of fun doing as I'm a big fan of the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon games so I hope I did them some justice as this is a fanfic.
I also hope you all enjoy it
Aidan, Atlas, Doryu, Terran, Rhyfel, Aldo, Altha, Lupe, Lucia, and Skylar are my characters.
Arcanine, Lycanroc, Snorlax, Dragonite, Aggron, Alakazam, Audino, Exploud, Toucannon, Keldeo, Jirachi all other Pokémon and the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon games belong to Gamefreak/Nintendo.
Category Story / Pokemon
Species Pokemon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 237 kB
This story really is great, and is a testament to how much you've improved.
I think some of my "complaints" is the same as before, or, rather, the part he stays big detracts from the meaning. However, even that was handled with Jirachi explaining the realities, so, I dunno.
Besides, it wouldn't be as kinky~
Like, the transformation observation was great. I really, really hope any future tales go longer and deeper into it.
Like, everything has a purpose here, I love it. I guess if I had to say a least favorite part, it's the whole apprenticeship? But even that was necessary to show how positive it all is, so it's more of a personal thing.
What can I say? Your writing's improved, your characterization has improved, your writing length has improved, and your indulgence has improved.
It's all really good, and I hope to see more in the future.
P.S. Will these characters be returning? Are any previous OCs? I do like them.
I think some of my "complaints" is the same as before, or, rather, the part he stays big detracts from the meaning. However, even that was handled with Jirachi explaining the realities, so, I dunno.
Besides, it wouldn't be as kinky~
Like, the transformation observation was great. I really, really hope any future tales go longer and deeper into it.
Like, everything has a purpose here, I love it. I guess if I had to say a least favorite part, it's the whole apprenticeship? But even that was necessary to show how positive it all is, so it's more of a personal thing.
What can I say? Your writing's improved, your characterization has improved, your writing length has improved, and your indulgence has improved.
It's all really good, and I hope to see more in the future.
P.S. Will these characters be returning? Are any previous OCs? I do like them.
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