very good concept, afew things though. fewer pockets, open his coat up and make it thigh length if you can please and give him a waist coat and less armored bits if that's ok? Also no thick outline please, I know it's your trademark and usually I love it to bits bit it'll make it harder for me to colour. Oh and don't colour in the bowler black, I was planning on having it grey.

thanks for doing this for me RiffRaff *hugs and love*

also, is that the gun from Vampire Hunter D: Bloodlust? I love that film, good place holder :P