Okay, I am here XD
I like your style, Roy, yet there are some details that caught my atention, you got the proportions quite nicely for everybody, yet there are some details like in Chupi's face almost at the end of this page, her cheek looks like not in the right place, and Roian's ears, I prefer them in the normal style X'D, longer and smoother, not so big, I am an artist that tries to assimilate the same style and looks from the anime (Yet fail) so...I don't feel too confortable while seeing these details XD, but it's just me , it's your style and still works, and that's what matters.
Next....nice selection for the eyes, it's quite difficult to give expretion to pika eyes >.>;;;, so it's quite welcome the bigger eyes, whose are easier to work with.
And finally, this is not so important...but normally pokemon look kinda weird with clothes on XD, but you did something that looked a little weird...it's the fact that you were using a pikachu's normal proportions all the time and when you started using the clothes, it looks like you are trying to give the pika a human's body proportion...like...yeah, the hips look WAY too small O.o...like she is using something under the clothes to make her slimmer.
That's about it XD, hope you like the critic, everything else seems in place...oh yeah, the letters XD, I had some difficulty reading the comic in some parts, some letters were really difficult to make out what they were, also the chat clouds are a little...like not well done with the pulse, hehehe, maybe smoother lines are going to add to the appeal from the chats X3
Overall, it's quite good (I read all the comic, so I know what I am talking about XD), the story might need a little of work, and the dialogues seem a little numb, like...they could use some more of personality per character, there are also some details on the other pages about proportions and all that XD, if you want me, I can point them out, but I think than that is based on your style rather on standart proportions.
Good work Roy

Hmm...did you read them all? or just the first one?

Yeah I readed them all XD, couldn't stop until the last of the pages, it was good, but the story lacked some points XD, nothing much.
And here is some advice...when you want to replay a comment on a pic, please, click on the "Reply to this post" button in the down right part of the comment box, that way the other person will know that you replies them <333
That's it X3, sorry if it sounded mean by any chance, didn't mean to, but I saw that you did the same in lots of the pics, hehehe

I'd be lying if i said that this comic DOESN'T need some help...thanks for the advise, pal...-_-;

SO BEGINS THE COURIOR'S JOURNEY.

where am i lol

..reading my comic? o3o

in the back of the gallery , at your first submission :3 lawl your galler y was so huge i wanted to see what was the first thing u submitted

It's been 5 days, no more food or water @~@
been lost in Roy_McClouds gallery land for so long, need nourishment!~
Gaaaaaaah......... so many pictures @////@

But this is the first thing i've uploaded! ;w;

(>@////@)> T-Took me ages to get here... carry me back to the future please

I can't read the text.

it's old as shet--das why