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Creative Campaign 2
Episode 5:
Journey to Carr
Part 4 -> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2851882/
Part 6 -> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2884000/
Ham-Ham and Hex embark on their journey to the Wedar capital city of Carr. However, there is much to consider along the way and Ham-Ham constantly wonders if, at each turn, she is making the right choices for not only herself, but King Avis and Hex as well.
Featuring the Works of:
syntex
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2659986/
Creative Campaign 2
Episode 5:
Journey to Carr
Part 4 -> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2851882/
Part 6 -> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2884000/
Ham-Ham and Hex embark on their journey to the Wedar capital city of Carr. However, there is much to consider along the way and Ham-Ham constantly wonders if, at each turn, she is making the right choices for not only herself, but King Avis and Hex as well.
Featuring the Works of:
syntexhttp://www.furaffinity.net/view/2659986/
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 113 x 120px
File Size 314.9 kB
Listed in Folders
Huzzah! I'm officially caught up!
May I start off saying your dialogue has improved immensely! I mean, it was great before, but you manged to make it even greater! I loved it. The interaction between characters literally put a smile on my face. I love this different sort of outline/story-telling. Thanks for giving me the honor of a leading role! Can't wait for the next!
May I start off saying your dialogue has improved immensely! I mean, it was great before, but you manged to make it even greater! I loved it. The interaction between characters literally put a smile on my face. I love this different sort of outline/story-telling. Thanks for giving me the honor of a leading role! Can't wait for the next!
Yay! *Leaps for joy* I am so glad you are happy with how everything is working out so far. Moreover, I'm elated you are pleased with my representation of your character.
There is definately more fun and adventure in store for the Winged Ham-Ham to come. As this is a WIP, I encourage you to offer any thoughts and suggestions along the way that you feel could make the story even better. :)
There is definately more fun and adventure in store for the Winged Ham-Ham to come. As this is a WIP, I encourage you to offer any thoughts and suggestions along the way that you feel could make the story even better. :)
Hehe, uh oh... well it's good they made it to Carr, but having that bad boxbook with her might not help make things easier. D: Hearing about all the feral thingies coming out and giving them trouble on their way there definitely seems like something I could imagine happening in a game. On your way to new towns you usually have to fight off bad creatures! Except it seems like there's acrually a good reason for it here. :3
Yup, yup! As I write this, I'm trying my best to ensure all the elements make some sort of sense so things don't seem too convenient. Though, as it is a fantasy / adventure, you just can't help but have points where things end up in the proverbial Right Place at the Right Time. :)
True. And the point of any good story is to, in the least, present a situation that goes a bit beyond what real life could possibly offer. After all, if a story seemed to every-day, not too many people would be interested in it. Why waste time reading about and/or paying for something you can experience by opening your front door, right? :)
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