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A simple game reveals an unexpected opportunity for Sammy.
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Banner art by Kigai Holt. See the full illustration here!
A simple game reveals an unexpected opportunity for Sammy.
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Banner art by Kigai Holt. See the full illustration here!
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I think it's interesting how you've mashed fantasy with sport. I'm not too much of a fan when it comes to anything sport-related, but Sammy's doings keep me interested! I'm also curious as to how this opportunity will end up working for him. (I also wanted to mention the coach snapping at one of the players for language- I really enjoy little bits of humor here and there)
I know next to nothing about sports, and I had to ask my high school football coach uncle to read through this and correct any technical errors of mine. XD He only got halfway though before he lost interest, sooo I'm not all together certain if the climax scene is 100% accurate.
And this is just one story in the series! I wanted to explore how Sammy would do in this setting, but the other stories provide altogether different challenges for him.
And this is just one story in the series! I wanted to explore how Sammy would do in this setting, but the other stories provide altogether different challenges for him.
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