I like where this appears to be going, and I'm really liking Maggie.

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Very nice! :)

thanks you

Good development from Part 1 of the story as the plot continues.
Again there are a few misspelled words or missing words. Just need a little bit of cleanup with sentences in a few places, but not really that big of a deal. It looks like your are developing your characters at a nice pace, revealing just enough new details to lead the reader along and keep them wanting more. I'm interested to see where you take this story.

thanks,

I'm really hopign to keep the story interested all the way through