Nice work! :>

A well-written, excellent story ^^

hehe, awsome. who knew faries were so insane

Another awesome story to add to the long list of good fiction under your belt.

Still, this piece kind of flummoxes me. I completely understand that this sort of story tends to focus on how ineffectual the victim's efforts to escape are, but still, I find it hard to get into the story when the character has the psychic power to raze the entire forest to the ground, nay, to the bedrock, and yet he doesn't use it, just some feeble telekinesis and a telepathic suggestion.

The story was still good, but if you'll pardon my use of D&D terminology, A creature with a CR of at least 23 being taken down by group of sprites? Fairy magic or not, I find it hard to swallow.

Ok, I'm done ranting. Keep up the good work.

I just browsed through things from my gallery and wanted to check if Theo's submissions had gotten any new comments, and I saw this.

Simplest explanation: I told Theo I didn't mind if he dramatically scaled back the power-scale of my character for the sake of the story working, or negated it entirely. 'Mewthree' is a totally made up species, after all. There's no hard and fast rule saying that -every- mew/mewtwo-ish character has to have a major level of power. There could just be some not as strong as the others.

Point noted and conceded.

Interestingly, I noticed a lot of your favorites have content similar to my own tastes. Give my gallery a peek. Might be to your liking

Sure thing.