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Babyfurbobcat
Link to Submission: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4476446
Submission Name: I leaked...
Type of Media: Traditional Art
Rating: General
Type of Response wanted: Constructive Criticism, Redlines, and Feedback =D
Artist's Comments:
I like to draw babyfurs, and this piece was my first real serious attempt at a body, My mate asked that I just try and do my best..
But the proportions are all off, I have an odd style and its hard to draw off it
I was wondering how I could fix this and or maybe a Redline could help
Thanks!
Art © babyfurbobcat
All comments/help/criticism/redlines are appreciated!
BabyfurbobcatLink to Submission: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4476446
Submission Name: I leaked...
Type of Media: Traditional Art
Rating: General
Type of Response wanted: Constructive Criticism, Redlines, and Feedback =D
Artist's Comments:
I like to draw babyfurs, and this piece was my first real serious attempt at a body, My mate asked that I just try and do my best..
But the proportions are all off, I have an odd style and its hard to draw off it
I was wondering how I could fix this and or maybe a Redline could help
Thanks!
Art ©
babyfurbobcatAll comments/help/criticism/redlines are appreciated!
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Baby fur
Species Housecat
Size 792 x 1000px
File Size 388.7 kB
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I know it prolly doesn't help a lot, but I tried! Anyway. I drew the liquids in blue just to distinguish them. I don't know if you want to make it as messy as that, but that's an idea. =)
Also, since I never use my tablet (its extremely old, and hard to use), I couldn't give you a good hand reference, but you can look here if you want: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4020534/ , http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2623529/ , http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2504160/ =) Good luck!
I know it prolly doesn't help a lot, but I tried! Anyway. I drew the liquids in blue just to distinguish them. I don't know if you want to make it as messy as that, but that's an idea. =)
Also, since I never use my tablet (its extremely old, and hard to use), I couldn't give you a good hand reference, but you can look here if you want: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4020534/ , http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2623529/ , http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2504160/ =) Good luck!
Cute drawing! xD
http://imgur.com/9Gllt.jpg
You already had a good sketch in the works. There was a couple things I saw.
Are you using contruction lines at all to set up your sketch? The head looked a little lopsided and the ears and such, unbalanced. You also made the lower body a little too small and diapers last I checked were supposed to be pretty big.
http://gcenterprises.in/yahoo_site_.....122554_std.jpg I mean WHOA. :P
Otherwise, you have child proportions down. Don't stop drawing!
http://imgur.com/9Gllt.jpg
You already had a good sketch in the works. There was a couple things I saw.
Are you using contruction lines at all to set up your sketch? The head looked a little lopsided and the ears and such, unbalanced. You also made the lower body a little too small and diapers last I checked were supposed to be pretty big.
http://gcenterprises.in/yahoo_site_.....122554_std.jpg I mean WHOA. :P
Otherwise, you have child proportions down. Don't stop drawing!
Oh wow!
Thats cute! x3
Yeah most of what you pointed out, are the areas I have been having trouble with
But this helps a lot.. and I will be using this as a ref on proportions =3
Constructions lines, (Guidelines?)
I try to use as much as possible, I work better when I draw in a set pattern and I wanna learn how to draw a "skeleton"
before each piece I draw =3
Thanks soo much tho, I appreciate the help and the critique ^-^;
My mate Sila is also looking to improve her style and shape as well.. and the more we learn the more we can help each other
This is a wonderful idea and very helpful for us artist who are lost and dunno how to improve =D
Thanks again
Thats cute! x3
Yeah most of what you pointed out, are the areas I have been having trouble with
But this helps a lot.. and I will be using this as a ref on proportions =3
Constructions lines, (Guidelines?)
I try to use as much as possible, I work better when I draw in a set pattern and I wanna learn how to draw a "skeleton"
before each piece I draw =3
Thanks soo much tho, I appreciate the help and the critique ^-^;
My mate Sila is also looking to improve her style and shape as well.. and the more we learn the more we can help each other
This is a wonderful idea and very helpful for us artist who are lost and dunno how to improve =D
Thanks again
Just make sure you come back and submit more artwork in the future. Also, don't be afraid to comment on someone elses peice ( We require you to comment on at least one person's submission if you upload something ) =)
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Cute! First thing I noticed is his hands and feet are on the small side. Also, his feet don't seem to be laying flat on the ground, it's almost like the bottoms are round nubbins. If you aren't already, draw out the foot, then draw the form of the sock over it. Lastly, the text really doesn't add anything to the image, I would 86 it for the final version.
Text should only really be added when the art isn't enough to tell the story. His face and the diaper say it all!
When you do text though, it should be fully integrated into the composition and done neatly, not as an afterthought. Also emoticons in text are kind of bleghhhhhh, imo.
When you do text though, it should be fully integrated into the composition and done neatly, not as an afterthought. Also emoticons in text are kind of bleghhhhhh, imo.
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